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Morgan Galloway

Mr. McNeil

ENG 1101

20 October 2012

                                     Gun Crazy


I will prove that Bart is a good man who is changed by the evils of guns and women.

Bart finds his dream woman and will do anything to keep her. The couple both

displays great skill with guns but this only produces danger and pain. Money is the

driving force in their endeavors due to Laurie’s lust for money and the luxury life.

They both turn to crime to the get money that she needs. Laurie influences Bart’s

decisions and makes most of the decisions involving bank robberies and small side

jobs. Bart cannot say no when it comes to Laurie’s wants. He doesn’t want commit

these crimes and ultimately she is the cause of their capture and death.

       Bart meets the women of his dreams in a circus tent who can shoot almost as

best as he can. He is immediately attracted to this skill and has to know more about

her. He tries to meet with her but their boss Packett says he owns her but the two

will have nothing to do with it and they run away together. They get married and go

on their honeymoon and spend all their money. Laurie is forced to sell her wedding

ring, which is where the Laurie realizes that she wants a good life. She gives Bart an

ultimatum. He mustbe willing to steal or rob to get what she wants or she will leave

him. She uses her charm to entice Bart to do the deed and is the beginning of their

immediate end. Laurie knows that Bart doesn’t want to do this but doesn’t care

because of her need for the finer things in life. Laurie becomes the leader when it
Galloway 2


comes to the robberies she also shows her capability to kill as she almost shoots a

cop. There is one incident where Bart has to shoot at a cop car but feels like can’t, as

he cannot kill anything after the incident in his youth. He killed a chick by shooting it

when he was young and since then he has never able to shoot anything at a living

being. When Bart says he wants to stop Laurie convinces him to do one last job to

set them up for life. As the job progresses Laurie shows her homicidal streak once

again killing her office manager and a security guard. Bart asks her about but she

lies and Bart is deceived until he sees a newspaper saying they are killers. He takes

the blame for this showing Laurie’s dominance over him. Bart and Laurie are

discovered once again and they are forced to retreat his sister’s house. In the end

they are running in the swamps and surrounded. Laurie fearful shooting comes out

again and she begins to shoot at Bart’s friends. It is then that Bart is forced to decide

to keep his friends alive or Laurie. He finally makes the decision to shoot Laurie who

causes the cops surrounding them to shoot and Bart is killed. In the Bart could not

shoot a single living thing until the very person he loves most threatens his friends.

       Guns are a comforting presence from the beginning of his life to the end. He

has to have one on him all times, which he feels is his most prized possession. He

even steals one in his teens because he wants it so badly. Bart never has much a

father figure in his life, which brings up the question of why he so desperately needs

to have gun. He feels that the gun is sort of authoritative figure which boy needs.

This progresses into his future as he goes into the army teaching men to shoot. He

even extends this into his occupation by selling Remington guns and ammo. When

he meets Laurie he knows that she feels this same love and is instantly attracted.
Galloway 3


Even through the robberies he constantly uses guns to get what he wants. Guns

aren’t always an evil influence on Bart’s life they are beneficial to his mental health

and what keeps him going. Whatever the direction that guns are taking him Bart will

always follow it wherever it takes him good or bad. His lifelong fixation on guns in

turn is his demise as he is gunned down while killing the love of his life ironically

with a gun. Guns are what rules over his life; he knows how to shoot very well and

uses this skill everywhere he goes.

       Laurie’s influence on Bart is definitely not in his best interest as all the things

that they get in trouble is because of Laurie. Laurie hasn’t always been a negative

influence on Bart. They both have similar interests primarily surrounding guns and

their love for one another. When money becomes an issue is when Laurie begins to

exhibit her dangerous ways. She will steal and kill to get what she wants which is

nothing that Bart wants to have a part of. But she uses her charm to persuade him to

do these things. Laurie definitely uses Bart as a way to get the money she most

desperately covets. Laurie will risk anything to get the money she wants like when

they had to get away on their last robbery she kills two people unnecessarily. She

even decides to flaunt her ill-gotten gains in public. Even when they are on the brink

of getting away her want for the finer things in life is the cause of their discovery

and the loss of their money. When they are out of her element and running through

the woods Laurie lets Bart takeover and lead where Bart finally shows some

dominance.

       Bart’s obsession with guns is the chief influence on his life with his wife

Laurie being the second. When Laurie presents Bart with the ultimatum he initially
Galloway 4


pulls away but due to his love for her and guns he cannot stop himself from

committing these crimes. It is this combination of the things he holds close to his

heart that is the cause compromise with Laurie. As the complexity of the robberies

continues Bart becomes increasingly torn by these decisions. He is never able to kill

until the very woman he loves threatens the well being of his friends. Bart has an

unhealthy fixation on guns that leads to this. Even with training in reform school

and some time in the army he still is able to commit these crimes. Which is very

unsettling to know that all this training did nothing to stop what the judge

sentenced him to stop from happening. Even when he realizes that what he is doing

is wrong he cannot help himself from being persuaded by Laurie. At one point when

the couple has a plan to split for a while to help from not being caught they cannot

help but stay together because of their love for one another. Their love reaches

dangerous levels as they able to kill to protect from one another.

       Before meeting Laurie Bart showed real promise. He had just finished the

army and reform school and was on pace to have a steady job. But when he meet her

he did get a job but this was temporary because he got fired because of his love her.

Also when they got married and went on their honeymoon they spent all their

money causing the situation that started all of it. Bart meeting Laurie was a blessing

and a curse where he meets the love of his life and the cause of his life crime. Laurie

is the definition of a manipulative femme fataleof the most dangerous kind. Their

relationship is at best self-destructive with Laurie being the cause of it all. Bart’s

obsession with guns tends to reach dangerous levels when unchecked.For example

as Bart aged this fixation with guns reached a point where he was able steal from a
Galloway 5


hardware store. He also brought another a gun he carried to school and when asked

to give it up refused. Afterwards it was off to reform school and the army where

nothing like this ever happened again until when he was released into society where

the influences took him over the edge. As time went by he eventually fell into armed

robbery, fleeing the police, and murder leading to the thought of if he is stable

enough to be admitted into society. With this Bartdestructive personality is most

certain tied to his love of guns.

       Money is often a problem that many people but with Bart and Laurie it is

more it’s an unhealthy want that consumes their life. When Bart and Laurie in the

beginning they have no problems but when they use all of it is a major turn around

that begins their journey into a life of crime. Some say that money is the root of all

evil which is very true when it comes to Laurie’s true wants. She is willing to use her

husband the man who she loves into robbing small stores for money. Money is

something that Bart never really has a problem with until he marriesLaurie and is

something that is a continuing theme throughout his time with her. Throughout

their time together Laurie makes questionable decisions concerning how they spend

their money and Bart goes along with it. After the last robbery they buy some nice

clothes and go out for dancing and the fair. To their surprise which they’reshouldn’t

have been they are found out and are forced to leave without the money they just

risked everything for.

       Bart was a good man on the start of a great life before guns; money and a

very manipulative woman influence him to perform armed robbery and other

crimes for money. When Bart first sees Laurie he is in love with her style and her
Galloway 6


skill with guns, which is a great interest to Bart. When she gives him an ultimatum to

rob stores for money or she will leave him, he agrees halfheartedly but cannot help

himself but do it. The couple both has great skill with guns but this only produces

danger and pain. Laurie is influences all of Bart’s decisions, which is the cause of the

bank robberies and the murders. Bart doesn’t want to commit these crimes but due

to his unyielding love for Laurie he cannot help himself. In all the couple have a

dangerous level of love that causes their own self-destruction.

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Gun crazy draft

  • 1. Galloway 1 Morgan Galloway Mr. McNeil ENG 1101 20 October 2012 Gun Crazy I will prove that Bart is a good man who is changed by the evils of guns and women. Bart finds his dream woman and will do anything to keep her. The couple both displays great skill with guns but this only produces danger and pain. Money is the driving force in their endeavors due to Laurie’s lust for money and the luxury life. They both turn to crime to the get money that she needs. Laurie influences Bart’s decisions and makes most of the decisions involving bank robberies and small side jobs. Bart cannot say no when it comes to Laurie’s wants. He doesn’t want commit these crimes and ultimately she is the cause of their capture and death. Bart meets the women of his dreams in a circus tent who can shoot almost as best as he can. He is immediately attracted to this skill and has to know more about her. He tries to meet with her but their boss Packett says he owns her but the two will have nothing to do with it and they run away together. They get married and go on their honeymoon and spend all their money. Laurie is forced to sell her wedding ring, which is where the Laurie realizes that she wants a good life. She gives Bart an ultimatum. He mustbe willing to steal or rob to get what she wants or she will leave him. She uses her charm to entice Bart to do the deed and is the beginning of their immediate end. Laurie knows that Bart doesn’t want to do this but doesn’t care because of her need for the finer things in life. Laurie becomes the leader when it
  • 2. Galloway 2 comes to the robberies she also shows her capability to kill as she almost shoots a cop. There is one incident where Bart has to shoot at a cop car but feels like can’t, as he cannot kill anything after the incident in his youth. He killed a chick by shooting it when he was young and since then he has never able to shoot anything at a living being. When Bart says he wants to stop Laurie convinces him to do one last job to set them up for life. As the job progresses Laurie shows her homicidal streak once again killing her office manager and a security guard. Bart asks her about but she lies and Bart is deceived until he sees a newspaper saying they are killers. He takes the blame for this showing Laurie’s dominance over him. Bart and Laurie are discovered once again and they are forced to retreat his sister’s house. In the end they are running in the swamps and surrounded. Laurie fearful shooting comes out again and she begins to shoot at Bart’s friends. It is then that Bart is forced to decide to keep his friends alive or Laurie. He finally makes the decision to shoot Laurie who causes the cops surrounding them to shoot and Bart is killed. In the Bart could not shoot a single living thing until the very person he loves most threatens his friends. Guns are a comforting presence from the beginning of his life to the end. He has to have one on him all times, which he feels is his most prized possession. He even steals one in his teens because he wants it so badly. Bart never has much a father figure in his life, which brings up the question of why he so desperately needs to have gun. He feels that the gun is sort of authoritative figure which boy needs. This progresses into his future as he goes into the army teaching men to shoot. He even extends this into his occupation by selling Remington guns and ammo. When he meets Laurie he knows that she feels this same love and is instantly attracted.
  • 3. Galloway 3 Even through the robberies he constantly uses guns to get what he wants. Guns aren’t always an evil influence on Bart’s life they are beneficial to his mental health and what keeps him going. Whatever the direction that guns are taking him Bart will always follow it wherever it takes him good or bad. His lifelong fixation on guns in turn is his demise as he is gunned down while killing the love of his life ironically with a gun. Guns are what rules over his life; he knows how to shoot very well and uses this skill everywhere he goes. Laurie’s influence on Bart is definitely not in his best interest as all the things that they get in trouble is because of Laurie. Laurie hasn’t always been a negative influence on Bart. They both have similar interests primarily surrounding guns and their love for one another. When money becomes an issue is when Laurie begins to exhibit her dangerous ways. She will steal and kill to get what she wants which is nothing that Bart wants to have a part of. But she uses her charm to persuade him to do these things. Laurie definitely uses Bart as a way to get the money she most desperately covets. Laurie will risk anything to get the money she wants like when they had to get away on their last robbery she kills two people unnecessarily. She even decides to flaunt her ill-gotten gains in public. Even when they are on the brink of getting away her want for the finer things in life is the cause of their discovery and the loss of their money. When they are out of her element and running through the woods Laurie lets Bart takeover and lead where Bart finally shows some dominance. Bart’s obsession with guns is the chief influence on his life with his wife Laurie being the second. When Laurie presents Bart with the ultimatum he initially
  • 4. Galloway 4 pulls away but due to his love for her and guns he cannot stop himself from committing these crimes. It is this combination of the things he holds close to his heart that is the cause compromise with Laurie. As the complexity of the robberies continues Bart becomes increasingly torn by these decisions. He is never able to kill until the very woman he loves threatens the well being of his friends. Bart has an unhealthy fixation on guns that leads to this. Even with training in reform school and some time in the army he still is able to commit these crimes. Which is very unsettling to know that all this training did nothing to stop what the judge sentenced him to stop from happening. Even when he realizes that what he is doing is wrong he cannot help himself from being persuaded by Laurie. At one point when the couple has a plan to split for a while to help from not being caught they cannot help but stay together because of their love for one another. Their love reaches dangerous levels as they able to kill to protect from one another. Before meeting Laurie Bart showed real promise. He had just finished the army and reform school and was on pace to have a steady job. But when he meet her he did get a job but this was temporary because he got fired because of his love her. Also when they got married and went on their honeymoon they spent all their money causing the situation that started all of it. Bart meeting Laurie was a blessing and a curse where he meets the love of his life and the cause of his life crime. Laurie is the definition of a manipulative femme fataleof the most dangerous kind. Their relationship is at best self-destructive with Laurie being the cause of it all. Bart’s obsession with guns tends to reach dangerous levels when unchecked.For example as Bart aged this fixation with guns reached a point where he was able steal from a
  • 5. Galloway 5 hardware store. He also brought another a gun he carried to school and when asked to give it up refused. Afterwards it was off to reform school and the army where nothing like this ever happened again until when he was released into society where the influences took him over the edge. As time went by he eventually fell into armed robbery, fleeing the police, and murder leading to the thought of if he is stable enough to be admitted into society. With this Bartdestructive personality is most certain tied to his love of guns. Money is often a problem that many people but with Bart and Laurie it is more it’s an unhealthy want that consumes their life. When Bart and Laurie in the beginning they have no problems but when they use all of it is a major turn around that begins their journey into a life of crime. Some say that money is the root of all evil which is very true when it comes to Laurie’s true wants. She is willing to use her husband the man who she loves into robbing small stores for money. Money is something that Bart never really has a problem with until he marriesLaurie and is something that is a continuing theme throughout his time with her. Throughout their time together Laurie makes questionable decisions concerning how they spend their money and Bart goes along with it. After the last robbery they buy some nice clothes and go out for dancing and the fair. To their surprise which they’reshouldn’t have been they are found out and are forced to leave without the money they just risked everything for. Bart was a good man on the start of a great life before guns; money and a very manipulative woman influence him to perform armed robbery and other crimes for money. When Bart first sees Laurie he is in love with her style and her
  • 6. Galloway 6 skill with guns, which is a great interest to Bart. When she gives him an ultimatum to rob stores for money or she will leave him, he agrees halfheartedly but cannot help himself but do it. The couple both has great skill with guns but this only produces danger and pain. Laurie is influences all of Bart’s decisions, which is the cause of the bank robberies and the murders. Bart doesn’t want to commit these crimes but due to his unyielding love for Laurie he cannot help himself. In all the couple have a dangerous level of love that causes their own self-destruction.