Ryan Narrative - Journey Through the African Desert

1. Journey through the African
Desert!!!
By Ryan

2. Were on the road again
"AGGHH! AGGHH! AGGHH!"I need some water,
moaned Bob".
"Seriously Bob, we have been driving for 5 minuets".
"This is going to be a long drive,mumbled
Josh"."Keep your eyes on the road,"said Josh.
Yeah yeah, he yelled back. By the way i'm Charlie,
and this is a story about three brothers who are driving
through Africa. Im 15, and I have blonde hair and a
head of a baboon, so my brothers say. By the way, i'm
a dare deval. Anyway, back to the story. Hey guys
look, I can drive with one hand.Look out !!! Woah!!!
Crash, Bang, smack! Where am I, though Charlie.
All I could see were the clouds limping across the sky.
Hey, you guys ok. Charlie was walking around in the
middle of no where for ages in a bright, sandy desert.
The worst thing was, that this wasn't any ordinary
desert, it was invaded with cactuses.

3. We're did every body gooooo!!!
Charlie, Josh, little Bobby junior.
"We're is everyone", Charlie
screeched. Charlie had been
running around frantically for
ages , when all of a
sudden....ROAR!!! This huge
sand monster had just popped out
of no where.It was as big as my
mansion. Aggghh! Charlie
screamed.

4. The monster is upon us!
Hugh. Charlie,is that you? Josh wondered. Is Charlie in trouble??
Wondered josh. Charlie started to sprint as fast as his legs could carry
him. He could hear the thump thump of the monsters feet. When all
of a sudden, he ran into his other two brothers, Fred and josh. Charlie
and his two brothers fell face first into the sand. Are you guys ok?
Asked Charlie.
Dude, there's no time to worry about that, there is a massive human
eating sand monster ten metres behind us.
Fred, I need you to think of a plan,
eye eye capam.
Bob, I need you to use your super duper strength to push the sand sand
monster onto his back. Bob,Bob! We're are ya bob.WELL! Josh,
where is he?
Ummm, we'll, you see,he kind of died of dehydration about ten
minuets ago, explained Fred.
Nooooo!!! Life dealt him a heavy blow. I was as sad as hawthorn
loosing the grand final? Wow, look out, the monster just used one of its
deadly spit balls. Guys, stay on guard. The sand monster was
sprinting at us and we didn't know what to do. The sand monster was
going to be in a whole heap of trouble. "I've got it ", said josh,I know.
The monsters weakness, thought Josh. Cactuses. With our hearts
pumping, our adrenaline running ,the dumb monster ran right into the
cactus and it chopped him up into tiny little pieces. The monster was
never to be seen again. We all breathed a huge sigh of relief. You
could her the whoop whoop of the cheers, from a mile away.

5. Home sweet home!!!
Within the next hour, we were
back at home. We new that it
was going to be hard to tell mum
that bobby was dead. But we
managed.