1. Part L
6 Mid shot John taking out the ring out of his pocket John’s Semi formal
clothes
7 Close up Him showing the ring John’s Semi formal
clothes and ring
8 Mid shot John saying “Will you marry me?” to Lily John’s Semi formal
while showing her the ring clothes and ring
9 Close up Shows Lily’s face expressions of Eye make up
surprise, happy, and speechless – hand over
mouth
10 Extreme Close up John putting on the ring to her finger Ring
11 Point of View Point of view of Lily following John John’s Non-formal
outfit
12 Over the shoulder Lily is seeing both John and Nevaeh greeting Lily, and John’s Non-
each other formal outfit and
Nevaeh’s outfit (all
black)
13 Two shot John & Nevaeh are both in the park sitting John and Nevaeh’s
down, talking and playing Non-formal outfit
14 Close up Lily’s expression when she saw John and No Make up
Nevaeh together (she doesn’t know who
Nevaeh is) - Jealousy
2. Part L
Shot List for Draft 2 of Opening Sequence
Quizzical
Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume
1 Mid Shot Mid shot of girl sitting down and looking Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring
through the Internet
2 Over the shoulder Girl in Facebook pictures, looking through Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring
them
3 Mid shot Girl looking very happy Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring
4 Point Of View Girl looking at a picture of her and boyfriend Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink
playing hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket
5 Long shot Girl pushing her boyfriend and laughing pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket
Top
6 Long shot Girl running away from her boyfriend and he pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket,
follows her top
7 Mid shot Girl running pink hoody, jeans, shoes, top
8 Close up Boy’s hand reaching out of his girlfriend’s Pink hoody and black jacket, top
hand
9 Long shot boy got her arm after reaching out for her pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket,
top
10 Mid shot Boy spinning around his girlfriend pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket,
Boy: Got you! top
Girl: *Laugh*
3. Part L
Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume
11 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the other picture of both Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
of them holding hands while walking
12 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming them pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black
from the back jacket
13 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming across pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black
the road jacket
14 Mid shot Girl clinging into him while camera will be in front of both of pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black
the characters while they walk jacket
15 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the picture of both of Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody,
them close to each other and looking at each other’s eyes trousers, shoes, box, ring
16 Close up Female character looking very happy while looking at the Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
picture
17 Close up Boy and girl looking at each other’s eyes Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody,
John: Close your eyes. trousers, shoes, box, ring
18 Mid shot John taking out the box (with ring inside) while the girl is Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody,
frozen with her eyes closed trousers, shoes, box, ring
19 Over the Shoulder + John opening the box in front of her Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody,
Reverse Shot John: Open your eyes trousers, shoes, box, ring
20 Over the Shoulder + Ina saw the ring with a surprised face Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody,
Reverse Shot Ina: Really? trousers, shoes, box, ring
21 Over the Shoulder + John will be smiling happily Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody,
Reverse Shot John: Yes, will you marry me? trousers, shoes, box, ring
22 Over the Shoulder + Ina will hug him as she accepted his proposal Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody,
Reverse Shot Ina: Yes! trousers, shoes, box, ring
4. Part L
Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume
23 Close up Ina will be looking very happy while she’s recalling her Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
memory
24 Point Of View Ina looking at the current picture while a chat box opens Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
Stranger: Hi.
25 Mid shot Female character looking confused of who the person is Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
Ina: Hi? Who is this?
26 Mid shot Ina thinking who this person is Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
27 Over the Shoulder Showing her thinking then the person on the other end of the Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
Shot chat replied
Stranger: You don’t know me but I need to talk to you
28 Point of View She replied back to the stranger Pink jumper, laptop, jeans
Ina: Ok about what?
29 Point of View Stranger replied back to her
Stranger: Your boyfriend…
5. Part M
Script Draft 1
1. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea.
2. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Over the shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily.
3. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW
Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black jacket,
jeans, white top, boots, and black lipstick.
4. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW
Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she is seeing.
5. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Close up shot, John’s hand opening the ring box
6. Part M
6. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Mid-shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth
speechless.
7. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Close up, Lily’s face crying as John propose to her.
8. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Extreme Close up, John putting the ring on Lily’s finger.
9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. John’s
wearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearing
jeans, black jacket, and hand bag.
10. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing tracksuit, top, jacket,
trainers, and hair tied back.
7. Part M
11. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she
press the button hard as she cannot believe what she’s
seeing.
12. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Two shot and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the
phone rings.
13. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Extreme Close up shot, John’s hand and the phone. He declines
the call.
BLACKOUT