1. Plain Talk in Complex Times
12 March 2015
Josiah Fisk
President, More Carrot LLC
What Were They Expecting?
How User Expectations Affect the
Success or Failure of Communications
8. • Because I thought you’d find all of them boring?
Why am I not covering these topics?
9. • Because I thought you’d find all of them boring?
• Because I don’t have anything to say about them?
Why am I not covering these topics?
10. • Because I thought you’d find all of them boring?
• Because I don’t have anything to say about them?
• Because you aren’t expecting me to.
Why am I not covering these topics?
11. • Because I thought you’d find all of them boring?
• Because I don’t have anything to say about them?
• Because you aren’t expecting me to.
- we are here for a purpose
Why am I not covering these topics?
12. • Because I thought you’d find all of them boring?
• Because I don’t have anything to say about them?
• Because you aren’t expecting me to.
- we are here for a purpose
- that purpose creates certain expectations
Why am I not covering these topics?
28. 19C British novel
• Sweeping themes.
• Compelling plots and
characters.
• Elaborate language,
manners, and dress.
29. 19C British novel
• Sweeping themes.
• Compelling plots and
characters.
• Elaborate language,
manners, and dress.
• To be transported to
another world.
33. 20C British television comedy
• British accents.
• Funny costumes and
voices.
• Humor that is both
intellectual and
silly.
34. 20C British television comedy
• British accents.
• Funny costumes and
voices.
• Humor that is both
intellectual and
silly.
• To sit back, relax,
and laugh.
38. • Reader/viewer/listener is engaged by choice.
• Is open to the message.
• Expects a positive experience.
In a word: happiness
39. • Reader/viewer/listener is engaged by choice.
• Is open to the message.
• Expects a positive experience.
• Looks for confirmation of that expectation.
In a word: happiness
46. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
What to do when you
have Type 2 diabetes
An easy read guide
47. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
• Fear and anxiety, but also
boredom.
What to do when you
have Type 2 diabetes
An easy read guide
48. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
• Fear and anxiety, but also
boredom.
• Lecture on lifestyle and
habits.
What to do when you
have Type 2 diabetes
An easy read guide
49. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
• Fear and anxiety, but also
boredom.
• Lecture on lifestyle and
habits.
• Something they can ignore
or skimp on.
What to do when you
have Type 2 diabetes
An easy read guide
50. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
• Fear and anxiety, but also
boredom.
• Lecture on lifestyle and
habits.
• Something they can ignore
or skimp on.
• Tone at odds with their
feelings.
What to do when you
have Type 2 diabetes
An easy read guide
51. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
• Fear and anxiety, but also
boredom.
• Lecture on lifestyle and
habits.
• Something they can ignore
or skimp on.
• Tone at odds with their
feelings.
• Confusing information.
What to do when you
have Type 2 diabetes
An easy read guide
54. • Reader/viewer/listener is not engaged by choice.
• Is apprehensive about the message.
In a word: unhappiness
55. • Reader/viewer/listener is not engaged by choice.
• Is apprehensive about the message.
• Expects a negative experience.
In a word: unhappiness
56. • Reader/viewer/listener is not engaged by choice.
• Is apprehensive about the message.
• Expects a negative experience.
• Looks for confirmation of that expectation.
In a word: unhappiness
58. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
About the
brochure
About the
situation
• Feelings of fear and anxiety.
• Prospect of discomfort or
pain in near future.
• Possible need for ongoing
treatment.
• Feeling they are in over
their heads.
• Confusing information.
59. 21C British Easy Read health brochure
But as the creator
of the brochure,
you have to deal
with all of it.
About the
brochure
About the
situation
61. • Much of what is positive in the positive experience
is negative in the negative experience.
Irony bonus points
62. • Much of what is positive in the positive experience
is negative in the negative experience.
- stimulation of emotions
Irony bonus points
63. • Much of what is positive in the positive experience
is negative in the negative experience.
- stimulation of emotions
- removal from ordinary experience
Irony bonus points
64. • Much of what is positive in the positive experience
is negative in the negative experience.
- stimulation of emotions
- removal from ordinary experience
- “entertainment factor”
Irony bonus points
65. • Much of what is positive in the positive experience
is negative in the negative experience.
- stimulation of emotions
- removal from ordinary experience
- “entertainment factor”
- reinforcement of expectations
Irony bonus points
133. • Authors created expectations.
• Authors failed to notice or meet their own
expectations.
• If you’re not aware of your own expectations,
how well are you going to do with mine?
Why is this a big deal?
145. • I can say yes or no to the product/service.
Which creates what expectations?
146. • I can say yes or no to the product/service.
• I can ignore the entire communication.
Which creates what expectations?
147. • I can say yes or no to the product/service.
• I can ignore the entire communication.
• If I take no action, nothing will change.
Which creates what expectations?
151. “there are two required ways to fill
your maintenance medications . . .
the Express Scripts Pharmacy or . . .
any Express Scripts participating
retail pharmacy.”
153. • This isn’t a marketing piece, it’s a notice of a
change.
In other words . . .
154. • This isn’t a marketing piece, it’s a notice of a
change.
• You’re getting Express Scripts, like it or not.
In other words . . .
155. • This isn’t a marketing piece, it’s a notice of a
change.
• You’re getting Express Scripts, like it or not.
• We led you to expect you had a choice (= a degree
of power) when in fact you don’t.
In other words . . .
158. 1. Assess the expectations
environment you’re working in.
159. • Look beyond literal needs and moods, toward
what people are actually looking for.
1. Assess the expectations
environment you’re working in.
160. • Look beyond literal needs and moods, toward
what people are actually looking for.
- Example: response to anxiety could be verbal
reassurance, better clarity, or someone to talk to.
1. Assess the expectations
environment you’re working in.
161. • Look beyond literal needs and moods, toward
what people are actually looking for.
- Example: response to anxiety could be verbal
reassurance, better clarity, or someone to talk to.
• Good news: the main expectations issues are
often not subtle, once you start looking for them.
1. Assess the expectations
environment you’re working in.
162. • Look beyond literal needs and moods, toward
what people are actually looking for.
- Example: response to anxiety could be verbal
reassurance, better clarity, or someone to talk to.
• Good news: the main expectations issues are
often not subtle, once you start looking for them.
• More good news: low expectations, low bar.
1. Assess the expectations
environment you’re working in.
163. 2. Develop a range of strategies for
dealing with negative expectations.
164. 2. Develop a range of strategies for
dealing with negative expectations.
• For those that are about the communications experi-
ence, do everything you can to avoid meeting them.
165. 2. Develop a range of strategies for
dealing with negative expectations.
• For those that are about the communications experi-
ence, do everything you can to avoid meeting them.
• For negative expectations about content: address
as directly as you can.
166. 2. Develop a range of strategies for
dealing with negative expectations.
• For those that are about the communications experi-
ence, do everything you can to avoid meeting them.
• For negative expectations about content: address
as directly as you can.
• Don’t overdo it: actively countering a negative
expectation can backfire.
168. 3. Use marketing tools, but in
non-marketing ways.
• Tell, don’t sell. Make the content the focus.
Your work should be invisible.
169. 3. Use marketing tools, but in
non-marketing ways.
• Tell, don’t sell. Make the content the focus.
Your work should be invisible.
• Don’t decorate. Use the visual components
to do communications work.
170. 3. Use marketing tools, but in
non-marketing ways.
• Tell, don’t sell. Make the content the focus.
Your work should be invisible.
• Don’t decorate. Use the visual components
to do communications work.
• Talk about your staff/programs/institution
— as such — as little as possible.
171. 3. Use marketing tools, but in
non-marketing ways.
• Tell, don’t sell. Make the content the focus.
Your work should be invisible.
• Don’t decorate. Use the visual components
to do communications work.
• Talk about your staff/programs/institution
— as such — as little as possible.
• Brevity, brevity, brevity.
172. 3. Use marketing tools, but in
non-marketing ways.
• Tell, don’t sell. Make the content the focus.
Your work should be invisible.
• Don’t decorate. Use the visual components
to do communications work.
• Talk about your staff/programs/institution
— as such — as little as possible.
• Brevity, brevity, brevity.
174. 4. Be the reader’s advocate
and guide.
• Don’t talk down, up, or around. Be caring but
direct.
175. 4. Be the reader’s advocate
and guide.
• Don’t talk down, up, or around. Be caring but
direct.
• Don’t talk empathy, practice empathy. Show that
you care by helping.
176. 4. Be the reader’s advocate
and guide.
• Don’t talk down, up, or around. Be caring but
direct.
• Don’t talk empathy, practice empathy. Show that
you care by helping.
• Don’t oversmile — or undersmile. Both of these
put distance between you and the reader.
177. 4. Be the reader’s advocate
and guide.
• Don’t talk down, up, or around. Be caring but
direct.
• Don’t talk empathy, practice empathy. Show that
you care by helping.
• Don’t oversmile — or undersmile. Both of these
put distance between you and the reader.
• Write as if you were advising a friend.