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Hi Robin,
Really great excited to see your
plans for the website!
You obviously really care about what
you do, but there are definite
improvements that can be made to:
• Customer Narrative
• Calls to Action
• Showcasing more of your passion
and professionalism
We’d love to help with this. There
are lots of options here, to suit
your budget.
OPTION 1 – The once over
If you’re happy to make changes yourself,
we could do a Healthcheck. This starts at
£45 and we’d run an expert eye over the
copy, and suggest changes to improve it.
https://kisscopy.co.uk/what-we-
do/healthcheck/
OPTION 2 – Key bits and bobs
Writing the key elements of the site:
• Elevator pitch: 100 word summation of the
customer proposition and key selling points.
• Homepage copy. It’s the most important part
of your site, so let’s get that sorted
• Titles for other pages. To make people read
on.
This would cost £220.
OPTION 3 – Writing the lot
Writing all the web pages according to a
strategic customer journey. We’d start
with the homepage and work our way
forward.
We charge £90 per page for writing web
pages.
I’d suggest having six key pages on the customer
conversion journey professionally copywritten:
• Homepage
• Why choose Wills and Probates
• Why do I Need a Will?
• Family Protection Trust
• Lasting Power of Attorney
• Appointing Guardians
In the meantime, if you could get
your hands on recordings of your
BBC appearances, that would be
fantastic!
Speak soon,
Steve

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Hi Robin

  • 2. Really great excited to see your plans for the website!
  • 3. You obviously really care about what you do, but there are definite improvements that can be made to: • Customer Narrative • Calls to Action • Showcasing more of your passion and professionalism
  • 4. We’d love to help with this. There are lots of options here, to suit your budget.
  • 5. OPTION 1 – The once over If you’re happy to make changes yourself, we could do a Healthcheck. This starts at £45 and we’d run an expert eye over the copy, and suggest changes to improve it. https://kisscopy.co.uk/what-we- do/healthcheck/
  • 6. OPTION 2 – Key bits and bobs Writing the key elements of the site: • Elevator pitch: 100 word summation of the customer proposition and key selling points. • Homepage copy. It’s the most important part of your site, so let’s get that sorted • Titles for other pages. To make people read on. This would cost £220.
  • 7. OPTION 3 – Writing the lot Writing all the web pages according to a strategic customer journey. We’d start with the homepage and work our way forward. We charge £90 per page for writing web pages.
  • 8. I’d suggest having six key pages on the customer conversion journey professionally copywritten: • Homepage • Why choose Wills and Probates • Why do I Need a Will? • Family Protection Trust • Lasting Power of Attorney • Appointing Guardians
  • 9. In the meantime, if you could get your hands on recordings of your BBC appearances, that would be fantastic!