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1. Scene 005 Panel 1
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“The Day
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2. Scene 005 Panel 2
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“The Day
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3. Scene 005 Panel 3
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“The Day
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4. Scene 005 Panel 4
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“The Day
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5. Scene 005 Panel 5
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“The Day
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6. Scene 006 Panel 1
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push in twds TV throughout shot as mickey and pluto slide os
on screen an alien banana spaceship lowers over city twds camera
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Giant
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7. Scene 006 Panel 2
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Bananas From Outer
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8. Scene 006 Panel 3
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Space Took Over
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9. Scene 006 Panel 4
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the World!”
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10. Scene 006 Panel 5
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beam emits from banana spaceship
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11. Scene 007 Panel 1
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TV image fills shot and shows beam in city street
dissolve beam as...
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12. Scene 008 Panel 1
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...two banana aliens materialize from beam on street
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13. Scene 008 Panel 2
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14. Scene 008 Panel 3
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aliens move fwd
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15. Scene 008 Panel 4
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16. Scene 008 Panel 5
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17. Scene 009 Panel 1
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street cop stands with whistle in his mouth
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18. Scene 009 Panel 2
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street cop stands with whistle in his mouth
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19. Scene 009 Panel 3
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alien tentacle slowly reaches in twds cop, who DOES NOT SEE IT
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20. Scene 009 Panel 4
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tentacle pauses a BEAT
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21. Scene 009 Panel 5
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Alien tentacle pulls cop os quickly
cop blows a short TWEET on his whistle as he is grabbed
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22. Scene 009 Panel 6
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23. Scene 010 Panel 1
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two banana aliens, one young and greenish, the other, old and
brown-spotted toss cop back and forth, playing catch with him
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24. Scene 010 Panel 2
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cop yells, upset as he is tossed
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6 traffic cop (on tv)
YAAAA!
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25. Scene 010 Panel 3
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26. Scene 010 Panel 4
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6 traffic cop (on tv)
That’s
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27. Scene 010 Panel 5
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6 traffic cop (on tv)
enough,
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28. Scene 010 Panel 6
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6 traffic cop (on tv)
Slick!
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29. Scene 010 Panel 7
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6 traffic cop (on tv)
Put
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30. Scene 010 Panel 8
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6 traffic cop (on tv)
me
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31. Scene 010 Panel 9
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6 traffic cop (on tv)
down!
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32. Scene 011 Panel 1
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mickey and pluto watch movie intently as rain falls outside window
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33. Scene 011 Panel 2
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34. Scene 011 Panel 3
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35. Scene 011 Panel 4
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36. Scene 011 Panel 5
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lightning flashes outside window, casting entire room in shadow
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37. Scene 011 Panel 6
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white frame flash
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38. Scene 011 Panel 7
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lightning flashes outside window, casting entire room in shadow
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39. Scene 011 Panel 8
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white frame flash
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40. Scene 011 Panel 9
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lightning flashes outside window, casting entire room in shadow
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41. Scene 011 Panel 10
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puto leaps into air, startled
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<YIIIPE!>
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42. Scene 011 Panel 11
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pluto leaps up onto mickey's head in a panic as THUNDER SFX rolls
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43. Scene 011 Panel 12
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THUNDER SFX continues as scared pluto wraps around mickey's head like
a turbin
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44. Scene 013 Panel 1
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outside house, rain falls
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45. Scene 013 Panel 2
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wormy crawls twds house carrying an umbrella as he speaks, disliking
the weather
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46. Scene 013 Panel 3
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9 WORMY (TO HIMSELF)
What a
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47. Scene 013 Panel 4
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night!
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48. Scene 013 Panel 5
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wormy shakes out wet umbrella
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49. Scene 013 Panel 6
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50. Scene 013 Panel 7
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51. Scene 013 Panel 8
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52. Scene 013 Panel 9
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53. Scene 013 Panel 10
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54. Scene 013 Panel 11
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he places umbrella against house door frame
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Not fit
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55. Scene 013 Panel 12
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he crawls up door frame and os as he speaks
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for worm
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56. Scene 013 Panel 13
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or beast.
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57. Scene 013 Panel 14
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58. Scene 013 Panel 15
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59. Scene 013 Panel 16
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60. Scene 014 Panel 1
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wormy climbs up door frame as he speks
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Hope I’m
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61. Scene 014 Panel 2
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not too
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62. Scene 014 Panel 3
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late for
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63. Scene 014 Panel 4
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he climbs past doorbell and turns to look at it
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the movie!
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64. Scene 014 Panel 5
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hi contrast lightning flash casts long shadow of wormy
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65. Scene 014 Panel 6
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white flash
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66. Scene 014 Panel 7
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hi contrast lightning flash casts long shadow of wormy
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67. Scene 014 Panel 8
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white flash
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68. Scene 014 Panel 9
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69. Scene 014 Panel 10
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wormy bends over and smacks doorbell
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70. Scene 014 Panel 11
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track wormy as he flips over and over, flipping and sticking to wall
as he gains down and os
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71. Scene 014 Panel 12
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72. Scene 014 Panel 13
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73. Scene 014 Panel 14
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74. Scene 014 Panel 15
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75. Scene 014 Panel 16
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76. Scene 014 Panel 17
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77. Scene 015 Panel 1
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mickey and pluto happily watch the movie as mickey eats popcorn
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78. Scene 015 Panel 2
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pluto reacts
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10 PLUTO
<YIKES! >
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79. Scene 015 Panel 3
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pluto leaps into mickey's lap, pushing popcorn bucket away os
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80. Scene 015 Panel 4
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mickey grabs pluto's ear, thinking it is popcorn
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<WHIMPER!>
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81. Scene 015 Panel 5
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mickey grabs pluto's ear, thinking it is popcorn
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<WHIMPER!>
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82. Scene 015 Panel 6
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mickey grabs pluto's ear, thinking it is popcorn
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<WHIMPER!>
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83. Scene 015 Panel 7
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mickey places pluto back on couch
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11 MICKEY
Aww. That's not alien bananas,
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84. Scene 015 Panel 8
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mickey gestures as he comments
pluto crouches, scared
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11 MICKEY
it’s just the storm.
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85. Scene 016 Panel 1
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on door inside house
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86. Scene 016 Panel 2
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wormy crawls in under door
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Oh my.
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87. Scene 016 Panel 3
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12 WORMY
No answer.
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88. Scene 016 Panel 4
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wormy stops and rears up as he speaks
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12 WORMY
Perhaps Mickey didn’t hear the bell. (
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89. Scene 016 Panel 5
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he calls out
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12 WORMY
(calls out) Hello, Mickey!
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90. Scene 016 Panel 6
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he crawls away os leaving a slick film trail
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91. Scene 016 Panel 7
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92. Scene 016 Panel 8
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93. Scene 016 Panel 9
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94. Scene 016 Panel 10
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95. Scene 016.01 Panel 1
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96. Scene 016.01 Panel 2
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97. Scene 016.01 Panel 3
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98. Scene 016.01 Panel 4
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99. Scene 016.01 Panel 5
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100. Scene 016.01 Panel 6
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101. Scene 016.01 Panel 7
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102. Scene 016.01 Panel 8
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103. Scene 017 Panel 1
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104. Scene 017 Panel 2
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lightning flash outside throws room into shadow as window frame
RATTLES!
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105. Scene 017 Panel 3
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106. Scene 017 Panel 4
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another flash! More window frame rattling!
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107. Scene 017 Panel 5
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108. Scene 017 Panel 6
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another flash! More window frame rattling!
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109. Scene 017 Panel 7
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fast push in to window
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110. Scene 017 Panel 8
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mickey reacts to window rattling and leaps into air, sending popcorn
bucket into air and popcorn flying out of it
pluto reacts to mickey's yell
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YIKES!
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111. Scene 017 Panel 9
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mickey lands in pluto's arms as bucket lands on ground and popcorn
falls back into it
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112. Scene 017 Panel 10
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113. Scene 017 Panel 11
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