15. Avoid repetition:
I asked Carson why he didn’t have any ID with him.
He said he never takes his wallet when he walks his
dog. I asked where his wallet was. He said it was at
home on the nightstand next to his bed. I said I
needed to see it. He said I could walk to his house
with him and his dog, and he would show me his
driver’s license.
16. This version is more concise:
Carson told me he never takes his wallet when he
walks his dog. His wallet was at home on the
nightstand next to his bed. He said I could walk to his
house with him and his dog, and he would show me
his driver’s license.
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