The document discusses feedback received on a digipack advertisement from classmates and friends. Several classmates and friends provided positive feedback on specific design elements of the advertisement they liked, such as the background photo, font, use of social media links, and consistency with the music video. However, some noted that some text was difficult to read against the background. In evaluation, the recipient found the feedback constructive in identifying both strengths and weaknesses to improve future work, such as ensuring text is legible against backgrounds. Overall the feedback was mostly positive and the person was pleased with the final product.

2. Feedback
We showed our work to friends and asked them
to give us feedback on our digipack
advertisement. It is important to find out where
you have gone wrong and what you could
improve from people around you in order to
better your work the next time. Feedback can be
critical when aiming to improve in all tasks.

3. Classmates
James - “I particularly liked the background of the photo
and how the artist was captured at the same location
used in the actual music video”
Joe – “I like the font you used, however I think you could
have ordered the writing better”
Amy – “I like that you have used social networks for
people to follow the artist in more depth”
Kariena – “I particularly like how Josh is captured and the
way he is slightly to the left in order for their to be room
for further information.

4. Friends
Mark – “Overall I really like it, however, some of the
writing is hard to see due to the background.”
Adam – “I liked the background as a long shot because it
seems reminiscent, much like the song itself.”
Tommy – “I enjoyed the fact that the have used an
accomplished music magazine to review the song.”
Jess – “I like the fact that the same outfit is used in the
advertising poster as the actual music video which shows
correlation.”

5. Evaluation
Overall I found the feedback really constructive
and there was a mixture of good and bad which
allows us to improve. For example, next time we
will make sure the writing and background does
not clash so much or use a better effect to
counteract to it and we will think more in depth
about the order of what we write.
However, most the feedback was very positive
and we are really pleased with the end product.