1. Pitch Feedback

2. About the Presentation
• When we finished presenting, they really
enjoyed it because we had parts that were
funny and the music that was playing
throughout also made it enjoyable. They told
us it was a good pitch and very presentable.

3. About the Plot
• We were told that the plot was really good
and understandable, however, we were also
told to improve the way the identity of the
characters would be displayed, so it looks
better overall.
• Also, they mentioned how it was original and
that they really liked the idea but to try make
it just slightly clearer.

4. About the Sound
• When we explained the how our sound was
going to be arranged, they said that it was a
good and original idea because not a lot of
people have done narratives before. Also, they
told us to be careful with the timing between
both the image and the sound; it has to make
sense.

5. About Schedule
• When they asked us about the schedule, we
didn’t really had a final idea about when we
would be doing what because some of us
were unable at some times so we needed to
get that sorted out.
• They told us to plan it as soon as possible
because filming would be very soon and if we
fell behind it would be a lot of stress for us.

6. About Title Sequence
• After we explained how we were planning to
have our title sequence, they liked the idea
but they told us to be careful of the way we
write the titles because they have to be easy
to read and to understand. Also they have to
be big enough for them to be seen. Overall,
they liked the idea.

7. Overall
• The judges really enjoyed our pitch and we
found their feedback really useful because it
gives us an idea of where we are at and what
we need to be paying more attention at.
• We might change the structure of the title
sequence after what they’ve told us.