2. Action
BREAKFAST
ZI on door, ZO on door
Slow ZO dialogue, show meat, Low angle.
High angle. Victim swinging, approach turn face.
Reaches in eye to eye. Turn face
turning face, moving in remove eye, grimace, looks at work
Victims injuries, cover eye then hold fingers, snaps fingers.
Moves in, hacksaw. Mouths hear no, holding ear and tapping his.
Cuts ears, rips off tape (pained, speak, shh, grab face, tongue
ah aha ah sh, finger towards cam
Grab face tongue out.
Grabs tongue eyes wide
feet kicking in agony
low angle, rips tongue out, walks away.
Victim beat up
Walks away, turns , quickly back, shears in hand into victim lean in
As if grabbing heart, then slumps
Victim as hearts rips, then slumps
rips hearts out and last dialogue
LUNCH
Enter wash face
Closes in and then out (change)
Coming back from preminition, look around
Leave
DINNER
Leaving garage
Driving round a corner
Reverse and pan past
Exit
Alley way & reverese
Front of Garage
Front of Boat Yard
Car with red sky
Car into forest