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Everyday Use Thesis Statement
General statement:
Mama understands the past and the significance of a family heritage. Her heritage including her
memories of her mother and grandma making quilts together by hands.
Topic sentence:
Alice Walker's "Everyday Use" introduces a clash between generations. Now and then, Maggie and
Dee.
Thesis Statement:
Alice Walker carefully portrays the three characters: The mother, Dee. And Maggie
Body A, Mama:
The character of Mama in the short story "Everyday Use" by Alice Walker endures through intense
times and takes advantage of what she has. She is a lady that tells things how they are, only plain
truth. She can be entertaining now and again and intense at others. She is self–portrayed as "a large,
huge boned, women with rough, man–working...show more content...
The way the burning house, her stuck–up sister, and society influenced Maggie make her unique in
relation to others. Maggie was so damaged from her home burning down that she turned into a
meek and undervalued young lady. Maggie is so unsure that her mother says she walks like a dog
run over by a car: "chin on chest eyes on ground, feet in shuffle, ever since the fire that burned the
other house on the ground." This demonstrates that Maggie absence of self–confidence make her
frightened to look. She imagines that on the off chance that she can't see the individuals around
her, then they can't see her. What's more, Maggie's discernible scars have impacted on the way
she conducts herself. As indicated by Mama, when she was pulling Maggie out of the fire, her
arms were adhering, "her hair was smoking, and her dress was tumbling off her in minimal dark
papery pieces." This is huge light of the fact that indicates how much the flame really physically
scarred her. This additionally clarifies why she is so apprehensive about individuals seeing her.
Maggie's apparent compressed version of confirmation in herself is created basically by the fire.
The barbaric way Maggie's sister, Dee, presents herself awful impact on Maggie's certainly. At this
point when Dee inquired as to whether she can have some unique quilts and Mama says no on the
grounds that she
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Thesis statement: Leadership depends on the leader's leadership style and there way of
communicating ideas rather than the leader themselves. Both women and men believe in similar
leadership styles however women prefer a more participative leadership approach.
According to organisational behaviour by McShane, leadership is defined as influencing, motivating
and enabling others to contribute towards the effectiveness and success of the organisation of which
they are members (page 382, McShane).Becoming an effective leader depends on the leader's
leadership style. Successful leaders have vision and charisma, also the leader should have an
ongoing personality, talkative, careful and self–disciplined. The leader must also have self–concept
...show more content...
Albert Einstein was a very influential leader in the modern era, as he transformed humanity's
understanding of the universe. In the 1920's he become an active leader of international
movement (The guardian, 2012). A path goal theory is based on the expectancy theory of
motivation which relates to several types of leadership styles that relates to specific followers. In
the path goal theory there are three leadership styles that make an effective leader, these include,
the leader must be directive, and this includes clarifying performance goals, using rewards and
being task orientated. Leaders should also be supportive this means the leader should be friendly
and approachable, treats everyone equally and with respect. The last leadership style if
participative, the leader should consult employees, ask for suggestions and take their ideas into
consideration (McShane, p388). Albert was a good leader due to his excellence in leadership
qualities which where it was an excellent listener, he was always motivated and have good
knowledge, power and influence in how to lead. Einstein always listened to everyone and never
ignore them, however he learnt from them on how to improve his leadership styles, therefore
making him a good leader. He was also motivated in discovering new ideas regardless of how
many people put him down, and he also had a clear relationship between leadership and ethics
which was significant in keeping a lasting impression as the world leader (Iain hay,
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Thesis Statement
I have been an international student at California State University Easy Bay (CSUEB) for almost
four years, and during the stay I have learned far more than I expected. I came to CSUEB already
deciding to be a financial analyst in the future. However, I realized that I have to meet the University
Writing Skills Requirement (UWSR) before graduation. With only four years of studying in English,
I have many problems in English writing. After failing the Writing Skills Test, I took an English
writing class, which has taught me how to write logically and proficiently. Thus, I should pass this
class and satisfy the UWSR because my collection of essays in the portfolio shows that I made a
great improvement in thesis statements composition, development of ideas, and organization.
To begin with, I have improved tremendously on writing a thesis statement. The thesis statement
can be the most significant sentence in an essay. In my past, I always composed an unclear and
unsupported thesis failing to present my augment to the readers. With the help of a tutor, I learned
that an effective thesis should have a clear position supported by reasons. I revised the thesis of out
of class essay 2 many times to ensure it can present my position clearly and specifically on the issue
of...show more content...
It is an inseparable part of an English essay. I was confused about how to find evidence to support
my claim. After taking this class, I understood that an idea can be developed through providing
sufficient and convincing credible sources, personal examples, and reasons. Take out of class essay
1 as an example. When developing my idea of the positive sides of a college degree, I provided data
from the Bureau of Labor Statistics, personal work experience, and a credible article for the New
Yorker Magazine to explain and support my claim. Hence, I believe that I made an incredible
progress on the development of
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Thesis Statement For The Tell Tale Heart
Name Jordyn Whitted
Ms. Walker
Class English 3
Date 11/30/17
Introduction :
Hook
What humanity creates in their own mind is worse than any monster, demon or any act of terror that
can be conceived. B ) Background
Gothic Literature is a writing style that has dark setting, it has an overall atmosphere of mystery,
exoticism, death. A Gothic story will revolve around a large, ancient house or an obscure setting that
conceals a terrible secret or that serves as the refuge of an especially frightening and threatening
character
"The Tell–Tale Heart" by Edgar Allen Poe––narrator kills the "old man" as his eye was bothering
him. In his hiding of, and accidental revelation of, the body, the narrator begins to break down,
becoming insane.
"The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe the student becomes obsessively pushing his need for self–torture
to the extreme. To become more sorrow, he calls for the bird to hear only one response to become
morself–tortured.
"The Yellow Wallpaper''Charlotte Perkins Gilman the narrator suffers from depression and her only
way she feels she can escape is writing. Eventually, she starts to feel trapped and by tearing down
"the woman in the yellow wallpaper'' she thinks that this will set her free but it only makes her
become more mad. C) Thesis Statement The three stories The Tell–Tale Heart The Yellow
Wallpaper, and Raven have a common narrator type, bringing about a sense of psychological horror
within the themes of insanity.
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Thesis Statement On Child Abuse
Assignment III Outline
Problem
General Statement: "Everyone suffers some injustice in life, and what better motivation than to help
others not suffer in the same way." – Bella Thorne (Brainy Quote)
Problem Statement: People suffer from all types of matters nowadays, but it's much harder hearing
about children suffering in that way as a result of child abuse.
Definition: Child abuse is a major consequence present in almost every society in which children are
exposed to maltreatment and neglect.
Size: Statistically speaking, about 40 million children worldwide suffer abuse every year, with more
than 1,500 children dying of abuse in the United States annually. With that being mentioned, it is
probably clear that child abuse is a huge...show more content...
Wrap up: After all, it's our society and culture that shape how we think or what we believe in; that's
why child abuse is entirely against our beliefs.
Conclusion
Final Evaluation: In conclusion, this organization is a productive one that accomplishes more than
just the normal. However, this organization can be much more powerful by letting their work spread
to other projects and ideas.
Restating Thesis: tackling the issue of child abuse, the National Alliance of Children's Trust and
Prevention Funds used functional feasibility, operational feasibility, and geographical consideration
to prevent children from suffering by ensuring them with trust and prevention funds.
Recommendations: This organization should not only focus on the trust funds project, but they
should also start thinking of other projects to work on such as raising awareness through campaigns
or sending abused children to physiologists for
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A Good Thesis Statement For Thesis
You have a clear thesis statement and I like how your essay is a very fluent paragraph by
paragraph. You have a lot of good ideas, but you need to expand them more in order to show the
readers what you want them to know. It a very informative essay, you did give a lot information
about student worries about having their major undecided before they came to college and some
ways that can help those students out. But I still has some suggestion wants to share with you. For
the introduction paragraph one, you talked about undeclared students become worried and anxious,
then you then you use Schmidt's article to prove your idea, but after that you again said about that is
the example of students become worried and anxious. I think it is creating
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Thesis Statement For Domestic Violence
Family violence
Elio Ishak
Notre Dame University, louaize
Course: ENL 110
Instructor: Pascale Chibani
Date of Submission: Monday, 15 may 2017
OUTLINE
Thesis statement : Domestic violence is a very important social issue because it has a large negative
affect on the victims. Even though Domestic violence can be caused by either male or female it is
usually caused by the male due to the large physical advantage. This essay will discuss the history of
domestic violence, as well as explain the different types, and ways to prevent it.
I.History of domestic violence :
a.In early roman society
b.In the England community
c.In early America society
II.different types of family violence :
a.physical violence
b.emotional abuse
c.sexual abuse
III.ways to prevent domestic violence:
a.
b.
Family violence is when someone...show more content...
The first kind is called physical violence. Physical abuse, including assault, is the intentional use of
force against a person without that person's consent. It can cause physical pain or injuries . Physical
abuse includes:
hitting, slapping or kicking
strangling or choking
killing someone
The second type is emotional abuse, Emotional abuse happens when a person uses words or actions
to control, frighten or isolate someone or take away their self–respect. Is contains :
constant yelling or criticism
controlling or keeping someone from seeing friends or family
making fun of preventing someone from practicing their faith or religion
The third kind is sexual abuse. Sexual assault and abuse can have devastating impacts. Sexual
assault is any unwanted sexual or sexualised act that causes the person to feel uncomfortable or
scared. Sexual abuse contain :
sexual touching or sexual activity without consent
continued sexual contact when asked to stop
forcing someone to commit unsafe or humiliating sexual
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Suicide Thesis Essay
I. INTRODUCTION:
п‚· Thesis: While Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem, I believe That Suicide is
wrong.
II. BODY PAGE 1: The History of Suicide
п‚· Opening Sentence: Why do people commit Suicide?
п‚· Detail 1: Suicide Methods
п‚· Detail 2: Suicide and Mental illness
п‚· Detail 3: Prevention
III. BODY PAGE II: School Bullying/Teen Suicides
п‚· Transition/Opening Sentence: The Bullies have a new way to attack people over the internet.
п‚· Detail 1: The Factors that contribute to Suicide
п‚· Detail 2: How the Internet/Social Media Has Had an Impact on Suicide in Young Adults
п‚· Detail 3: The many different forms of Bullying that can lead to a
IV. BODY PAGE III: Military/Terrorist Suicide
п‚· Transition/Opening Sentence: Could Suicide...show more content...
Whilst cyber bullying is not physical it's emotional and psychological effects are devastating for
the victim and can often lead to suicide and depression (Hinduja & Patchin, 2010). Social
Networking sites act as a platform where bullies can say things they might not usually say to
someone in person, anonymity and less physical proximity act as a wall between the bully and the
victim, none the less, the words or rumors' that are shared are still just as hurtful. Bullies often feel
more confident online and they can contact their victims anytime, anywhere, day or night, not just in
the school yard (Smith et al., 2008)." (Procon. (24 O). Retrieved from http:/
/socialnetworking.procon.org/) For example "Jamey Rodemeyer in 2011 a 14–year–old boy from
Williamsville, NY, took his life after what his parents claim was years of bullying because of
struggles with his sexuality. His parents, Tracy and Tim Rodemeyer, say that Jamey faced bullies for
years, though things intensified in middle school, according to NBC 2. According to NBC, the
Rodemeyers had gone to the school about the problem in the past. Jamey even sought
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Ptsd Thesis Statement
Post–traumatic disorder (PTSD) is one of the leading mental issues in the world right now. It includes
introduction to injury including passing or the danger of death, genuine damage, or sexual brutality.
Something is traumatic when it is exceptionally startling, overpowering and causes a considerable
measure of pain. Injury is regularly sudden, and numerous individuals say that they felt feeble to stop
or change the occasion. Traumatic occasions might incorporate wrongdoings, common fiascos,
mishaps, war or strife, or different dangers to life. It could be an occasion or circumstance that one
encounters or something that transpires, including friends and family. The post–traumatic stress is
not subject to any definite experience a priori,...show more content...
Normal Stress Response
The normal stress reaction happens when healthy adults who have been presented to a solitary
discrete traumatic occasion in adulthood experience extraordinary awful recollections, enthusiastic
desensitizing, and sentiments of illusion, being cut off from connections or substantial strain and
trouble.
Acute Stress Disorder
Acute stress disorder is portrayed by frenzy responses, mental disarray, separation; serious sleeping
disorder, suspiciousness, and being not able oversee even essential self–consideration, work, and
relationship exercises.
Uncomplicated PTSD
Uncomplicated PTSD includes persistent re–experiencing of the distressing occurrence, prevention
of stimuli related with the disturbance, emotional distressing, and indications of enlarged stimulation.
Comorbid PTSD
Comorbidity PTSD alludes to the presence of two or more ailments or conditions in the same
individual in the meantime (Parsons, & Ressler, 2013). For instance, somebody who has been
determined to have both post–traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) and marginal identity issue (BPD)
is said to have "comorbid PTSD and
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Good Thesis Statement
To start out of making a good research paper is, to know a good thesis statement to write down on
paper and to evaluate an issue or an idea and presents the breakdown and evaluation to your
audience (owl.english.purdue.edu). Make sure you find the main point of your subject for your
paper and try to summarize your thesis and the evidence you are using to support that point. You
should always make sure you have your paper in the right format before you even begin on writing.
Then you explain something to your audience so that it flows well with the rest of your paper
(owl.english.purdue.edu). You write an argumentative paper that makes a claim about a topic and
justifies your claim with specific evidence. Your claim can be an opinion, a policy...show more
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Furthermore, always when you are writing a paper is to put as much in your own words as
possible and try not to paraphrase that much and cite as much as possible. In addition, make sure
that the citing matches your references. You then have to proofread your draft paper and to see that
it is in proper format with a good introduction and conclusion then you can start writing your final
paper. However, proofreading is important to go back and revise your paper
(owl.english.purdue.edu). I think the easiest part of conducting a research paper is about what topic
that interests me to write. The things I struggle with most are how to start out writing and putting
it all together on paper. Choosing a good topic and keep from having writer's block when you start
writing. Also check to my grammar, wordiness or making sure it makes sense. However, when it
has been brought to my attention that I am making mistakes and need help I contact a tutor.
Because writing research papers are harder for me to understand and to put it all together to make
any sense. The most important thing for me is looking forward in the remainder of my schooling
is to make sure I write in my forums and my assignments and check my spelling, grammar, citing,
and make sure, when I am doing research to pick a scholarly peer review site or a reliable website.
Moreover, to make
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Thesis Statement : Global Warming
Thesis Statement: Global warming is a growing concern of scientists and researchers who believe
that it is a serious problem for our planet. The concerns and research have also been questioned and
have even been called myths. Millions of people find themselves affected by these weather pattern
changes and are concerned for their futures. Activists on both sides of the argument are very
passionate and not afraid to attack each other in every way they can. There are many questions that
are still not answered, however, we continue to see drastic weather changes to Earth. We must go
beyond the arguments and learn as much as we can to stop what could possibly lead to the
destruction of our planet, our way of life and our future.
Global warming is concerned with an average increase in the temperature of the atmosphere and the
increase in the Earth 's surface temperature primarily due to the emission of greenhouse gases from
the burning of fossil fuels. As for the processes of global warming, they can occur from a variety of
causes. The causes include the things that are concerned with natural and human factors.
Some people believe that global warming is a myth or hoax. They believe that global warming is
being used to generate fear and panic and that those behind this movement are using it to control
people 's lives and for financial gain. "Within the community of scientists and others concerned about
anthropogenic climate change, those who are skeptics are more commonly termed
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Thesis Statement For Mental Health
Expository Method Used:
The Expository Method used for the topic to sentence outline is 'Analysis by Division.' This method
breaks down the main idea into smaller parts that work together to make one central point.
Additionally, the 'Analysis by Division' method is useful for structuring the topic sentences for
writing the essay. Topic to Sentence Outline
Topic: Mental health is an increasingly vital part of general wellness in today's fast–paced world.
(Narrowed Topic): Characteristics of a mentally healthy individual.
Thesis Statement: A mentally healthy individual has the characteristics of emotional intelligence and
spiritual consciousness, intellectual and social wellness.
Emotional Intelligence is considered one of the defining characteristics of a mentally healthy...show
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Equally important to the characteristics of a mentally healthy individual, in today's fast–paced
world, is the psychological health of the brain, the genetic, biological and environmental factors that
play an integral role in general wellness.
Many prominent theorists have argued that perceptions of the self, the world, and the future are
essential for mental health. Yet much research evidence suggests that overly positive
self–evaluations, exaggerated perceptions of control or mastery, and unrealistic optimism are
characteristics of normal human thought. Moreover, these illusions seem to promote other criteria
of mental health, including, the ability to care about others, be happy or contented, and to engage in
productive and creative work. (Taylor & Brown 1988,
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Writer's Statement
Thesis Statement: Climate change is natural; however, advances of human society such as
deforestation, industrialization, and the burning of fossil fuels, have increased the rate at which the
climate is changing.
My three major sources stood out when writing my research paper on climate change. My main
source was Louis Bergeron's, "The World Can be Powered by Alternative Energy, Using Today's
Technology, in 20–40 Years, Says Stanford Researcher Mark Z. Jacobson." In this article, Bergeron
describes an energy researcher's plan to power the world with renewables within the next few
decades. My second source was Marc Lallanilla's, "Greenhouse Gas Emissions: Causes and
Sources." In this article, Lallanilla talked about the
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Thesis Statement For Teen Suicide
Research Question:
How can teen suicide be prevented?
Thesis Statement:
Even though teen suicide is one of the leading causes of deaths in teenagers, there are many ways it
can be prevented.
Summary of Topic:
Suicide is the third leading cause of deaths in adolescents in the United States. Teensuicide is also
often referred to as a permanent solution to a temporary problem. Teens so often are suicidal and
attempt suicide as a call for help from others. They have no intention in dying they are just trying to
cry out for help from anyone that will listen. Many reasons cause teen to attempt suicide, varying
from bullying to psychological disorders. In fact, psychological disorders accounts for about 90%
of teens who attempt or commit suicide. Teenagers are also at higher risk of suicide when they are
under...show more content...
Teen suicide is something that is endless, it will never stop but if everyone was educated on it, it
could help prevent deaths. I think with people provided with statistics and further information
can help avoid adolescent suicide attempts. I think most teen suicide cases could be prevent if we
knew the signs to look for and the ways to stop it. I believe parents would feel safer if they knew
knowledge on the issue and how to handle it. The intended audiences for this essay is parents or
friends of suicidal teens. This essay is important because, as mentioned earlier, we need to be
educated on suicide to end tons of tragedies. It is also important to be aware of the warning signs
to help prevent. This essay is relevant because teen suicide is a war that happens daily, and will
continue to happen, until we take control of the situation and do something to stop it. If family
members were informed of the cause and symptoms leading up to the attempt of suicide, then there
is less likely that teenagers would try and commit
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Thesis Statement On Favorite Restaurant
Nashabre Payton Favorite Restaurant Thesis Statement: I enjoy eating at Red Lobster because it
gives me the opportunity to socialize with friends and family, serves great food, and it's
inexpensive. Topic Sentence #1: I enjoy eating at Red Lobster because it gives me the opportunity to
socialize with my friends and family. TopicSentence #2: I also enjoy eating at Red Lobster because
they serve great food. Topic Sentence #3: Finally, I enjoy dining at Red Lobster because it's
inexpensive. Has someone ever asked you where you wanted to eat, and you've always responded
by saying you favorite restaurant? I know I have. Every time my mother would ask me where I
wanted to eat at, I would always respond by saying Red Lobster. Sometimes we would...show more
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The word 'consequently' contributes to greater unity or cohesion between sentences and allows the
text to flow more smoothly.
Style
Sentence Length Info
Total Sentences: 41
Avg. Length: 24.3 words
Short Sentences (< 17 words): 9 (22%)
Long Sentences (> 35 words): 6 (15%)
Sentence Variation: 11.2 words (std deviation)
Your writing showcases a good balance between simple and complex sentences, although the
effective use of sentence length cannot be easily measured.
Line chart of the length of each sentence (first 50 sentences). A jagged chart indicates variation.
Helpful Resources:
Effective Use of Sentence Length
Style
Sentence
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Thesis Statement : Early Anxiety Essay
Thesis Statement: Early Anxiety is stemmed from many factors, however the main cause of anxiety
in adolescents is directly related to parenting and/or family influences.
As a child, life was hectic from the beginning. Dad was in and out of jail, and when he was out my
mom and him and my mother would indulge in hard drugs. Don 't get me wrong, when you 're so
twisted on drugs there is only so much your body and mind is capable of doing, right? Since I could
remember I've been the boss, the keeper of the responsibilities, almost like the parent of my parents.
Throughout school, i had constant anxiety about school, worrying about my little brother and
wondering if my parents were okay. Fast forward to the present time, still on a daily basis I struggle
with severe Anxiety. It truly never went away, it only got worse. If I would have had a better mother
daughter, or father daughter relationship or didn't have to watch my parrents struggle with their
anxiety and addictions, and i had to worry a lot less I would have never developed this anxiety.
Harpster 2.
Anxiety can be a very serious (disease/disorder) it is simply defined as an abnormal fear or tension
which can occur without any obvious trigger or session; a recurrence, unwelcome and intrusive
thought. Anxiety can also be defined as a subjective state of fear or tension. There are two types of
anxiety, anxiety can provide signals that alert the body to trigger it to improve mental and physical
performance
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Thesis Statement
Thesis Statement Water pollution has had devastating effects on the environment, which include
irreversible effects to the ocean's ecosystem, health problems and abnormal conditions. interference
of the ocean's ecosystem – Plastic storage bags can kill animals in the oceans like dolphins, turtles
and whales. It is easy for wildlife to swallow and eventually causes death. * Over 1.5 billion tons of
plastic water bottles end up in US landfills each year. It takes over 300 years to degrade. health
problems –Spread of diseases * Lead. Lead is hazardous to health as it accumulates in the body and
affects the central nervous system. Children and pregnant women are most at risk. * Fluoride.
Excess fluorides can cause...show more content...
The chemical poisoning in water have a great impact on humans because it can cause brain damage
and physical deformities in unborn fetuses. Pollution disrupts the natural food chain as well.
Pollutants such as lead and cadmium are eaten by tiny animals. Later, these animals are consumed by
fish and shellfish, and the food chain continues to be disrupted at all higher levels. Eventually,
humans are affected by this process as well. People can get diseases such as hepatitis by eating
seafood that has been poisoned. Besides, Water pollutants introduce abnormal conditions (harmful
chemicals, changes in water temperatures) into water bodies, disrupting existing ecosystems and can
potentially contribute to reducing biodiversity in that affected area – one of the effects of water
pollution. For example, the discharge of heated–up water from thermal and nuclear power plants into
a river can cause problems for aquatic organisms, which are fairly used to specific temperatures.
The increase in water temperatures could increase their metabolic rates and hence their need for
food. This could eventually lead to the depletion of food sources in that water region and in turn
cause a reduction in species population in that water region. Besides thermal pollution, water could
also be polluted via the entry of acidic substances into the water bodies through rivers, seas and
oceans. The effects of water pollution by this process, known as
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Thesis Statement On Standardized Testing
Thesis: The effects of standardized testing have negatively impacted students across the United
States. High Stakes testing has led to a decrease in student motivation, high retention rate, and a
notable change in early dropout rates.
I.History of Standardized Testing
A. Standardized testing shows where a student stands academically.
B. High stake testing determines if a student will move forward a grade or not.
C. The legislatives thought high stake testing would improve student academics.
II.Lack of Student Motivation
A. According to the article, "Student Motivation: An Overlooked Piece of School Reform,"
Motivation can affect a student's outcome in class.
B. An absence of understudy inspiration can assume an essential part in an understudy...show more
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Although legislatives assumption was that high stakes testing would enhance understudy inspiration,
and raise understudy accomplishment, that supposition was completely incorrect. The effect of
standardized testing (high–stakes testing) has not been positive throughout the United States at all.
Due to the lack of motivation, the high retention rate, and notable change in dropout rate, it may be a
while until many states recover, especially for states like Louisiana. According to Nola, Louisiana is
tied with Florida for having one of the country's fifth lowest graduation rates, and one of the highest
dropout rates. Our society needs to come together and think of a plan that will help students, and
prevent the increasing number of kids who decide to give up on school. A system that will benefit
both students, and teachers should be created; making it better for both, students and teachers to
work together properly. With a new system student motivation may improve, the number of over
aged students sitting in the wrong grade will decrease, and the notable dropout rate will actually
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Summary Of A Strong Thesis Statement
The foundation of your essay relies on a strong thesis statement, but what exactly is a thesis and
how do you develop it? Creating a good thesis is vital when it comes to writing a skilled essay. If
your thesis is not effective, then your whole essay is weak. Chapter 6 of Successful College Writing
thoroughly explains everything that has to do with a thesis and all the important things* to keep in
mind whilst writing one. Also, this chapter emphasizes how crucial it is to support your thesis with
reliable and factual sources. A thesis statement is an introduction to the topic of youressay. It is
typically introduced in the first paragraph, but in some cases it can be written after that. It can either
be stated directly or implied, however,
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The Great Gatsby thesis statement
Abstract The Great Gatsby is written by the American author F. Scott Fitzgerald. The story takes
place in "the roaring twenties". The characters in the novel have dreams and goals and not one
dream ends well. That is why my thesis statement is: The Great Gatsby is really about unattainable
dreams. The dreams I am discussing is GatsbyВґs American dream, Daisy's dream and Nick's dream.
The dreams are based on the love story between Daisy and Gatsby. The final piece in Gatsby's
American dream would be if he got Daisy to wed him. Daisy dreams of Gatsby but chooses
between him and her current husband Tom. Nick wants Gatsby's life to be a happy life and he
cares a lot about him. His dream is for the story to end well. When Daisy does not choose...show
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He wishes that Gatsby's life should contain a happy ever after. There are a lot of dreams in the
book but I want to distinguish these three main dreams and how none of them gets fulfilled.
Gatsby's American dream The first dream that does not get fulfilled is the one of Gatsby. He
starts off as an underprivileged boy and struggles his way to the top. We make his acquaintance
when he is on the top of his life. He is enjoying his big house and his vast wealth. The one thing he
cannot have is his lovely Daisy. Gatsby's story reflects the "classical" American dream: Anyone
can make anything of himself/herself with just elbow grease, spirit and a whole lot of
confidence. Jay loves Daisy and, sadly, she is the one thing which he cannot procure to his
"perfect life". His wealth is shown clearly, for instance when he throws huge parties just to have
the chance of meeting or seeing Daisy. This behavior is not feasible if you do not have that kind of
money which leads us to the conclusion that he is wealthy. The symbol that portrays the American
dream is the green light. The light symbolizes wealth but also Daisy, the latter because there is a
green light at the end of DaisyВґs dock. He reaches out for it just like he reaches out for his dream.
His material world reflects Daisy. Daisy is sometimes a symbol of the American dream. "Her voice
is full of money... That was it. I'd never understood before. It was full of money – that was the
inexhaustible
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  • 1. Everyday Use Thesis Statement General statement: Mama understands the past and the significance of a family heritage. Her heritage including her memories of her mother and grandma making quilts together by hands. Topic sentence: Alice Walker's "Everyday Use" introduces a clash between generations. Now and then, Maggie and Dee. Thesis Statement: Alice Walker carefully portrays the three characters: The mother, Dee. And Maggie Body A, Mama: The character of Mama in the short story "Everyday Use" by Alice Walker endures through intense times and takes advantage of what she has. She is a lady that tells things how they are, only plain truth. She can be entertaining now and again and intense at others. She is self–portrayed as "a large, huge boned, women with rough, man–working...show more content... The way the burning house, her stuck–up sister, and society influenced Maggie make her unique in relation to others. Maggie was so damaged from her home burning down that she turned into a meek and undervalued young lady. Maggie is so unsure that her mother says she walks like a dog run over by a car: "chin on chest eyes on ground, feet in shuffle, ever since the fire that burned the other house on the ground." This demonstrates that Maggie absence of self–confidence make her frightened to look. She imagines that on the off chance that she can't see the individuals around her, then they can't see her. What's more, Maggie's discernible scars have impacted on the way she conducts herself. As indicated by Mama, when she was pulling Maggie out of the fire, her arms were adhering, "her hair was smoking, and her dress was tumbling off her in minimal dark papery pieces." This is huge light of the fact that indicates how much the flame really physically scarred her. This additionally clarifies why she is so apprehensive about individuals seeing her. Maggie's apparent compressed version of confirmation in herself is created basically by the fire. The barbaric way Maggie's sister, Dee, presents herself awful impact on Maggie's certainly. At this point when Dee inquired as to whether she can have some unique quilts and Mama says no on the grounds that she Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 2. Thesis statement: Leadership depends on the leader's leadership style and there way of communicating ideas rather than the leader themselves. Both women and men believe in similar leadership styles however women prefer a more participative leadership approach. According to organisational behaviour by McShane, leadership is defined as influencing, motivating and enabling others to contribute towards the effectiveness and success of the organisation of which they are members (page 382, McShane).Becoming an effective leader depends on the leader's leadership style. Successful leaders have vision and charisma, also the leader should have an ongoing personality, talkative, careful and self–disciplined. The leader must also have self–concept ...show more content... Albert Einstein was a very influential leader in the modern era, as he transformed humanity's understanding of the universe. In the 1920's he become an active leader of international movement (The guardian, 2012). A path goal theory is based on the expectancy theory of motivation which relates to several types of leadership styles that relates to specific followers. In the path goal theory there are three leadership styles that make an effective leader, these include, the leader must be directive, and this includes clarifying performance goals, using rewards and being task orientated. Leaders should also be supportive this means the leader should be friendly and approachable, treats everyone equally and with respect. The last leadership style if participative, the leader should consult employees, ask for suggestions and take their ideas into consideration (McShane, p388). Albert was a good leader due to his excellence in leadership qualities which where it was an excellent listener, he was always motivated and have good knowledge, power and influence in how to lead. Einstein always listened to everyone and never ignore them, however he learnt from them on how to improve his leadership styles, therefore making him a good leader. He was also motivated in discovering new ideas regardless of how many people put him down, and he also had a clear relationship between leadership and ethics which was significant in keeping a lasting impression as the world leader (Iain hay, Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 3. Thesis Statement I have been an international student at California State University Easy Bay (CSUEB) for almost four years, and during the stay I have learned far more than I expected. I came to CSUEB already deciding to be a financial analyst in the future. However, I realized that I have to meet the University Writing Skills Requirement (UWSR) before graduation. With only four years of studying in English, I have many problems in English writing. After failing the Writing Skills Test, I took an English writing class, which has taught me how to write logically and proficiently. Thus, I should pass this class and satisfy the UWSR because my collection of essays in the portfolio shows that I made a great improvement in thesis statements composition, development of ideas, and organization. To begin with, I have improved tremendously on writing a thesis statement. The thesis statement can be the most significant sentence in an essay. In my past, I always composed an unclear and unsupported thesis failing to present my augment to the readers. With the help of a tutor, I learned that an effective thesis should have a clear position supported by reasons. I revised the thesis of out of class essay 2 many times to ensure it can present my position clearly and specifically on the issue of...show more content... It is an inseparable part of an English essay. I was confused about how to find evidence to support my claim. After taking this class, I understood that an idea can be developed through providing sufficient and convincing credible sources, personal examples, and reasons. Take out of class essay 1 as an example. When developing my idea of the positive sides of a college degree, I provided data from the Bureau of Labor Statistics, personal work experience, and a credible article for the New Yorker Magazine to explain and support my claim. Hence, I believe that I made an incredible progress on the development of Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 4. Thesis Statement For The Tell Tale Heart Name Jordyn Whitted Ms. Walker Class English 3 Date 11/30/17 Introduction : Hook What humanity creates in their own mind is worse than any monster, demon or any act of terror that can be conceived. B ) Background Gothic Literature is a writing style that has dark setting, it has an overall atmosphere of mystery, exoticism, death. A Gothic story will revolve around a large, ancient house or an obscure setting that conceals a terrible secret or that serves as the refuge of an especially frightening and threatening character "The Tell–Tale Heart" by Edgar Allen Poe––narrator kills the "old man" as his eye was bothering him. In his hiding of, and accidental revelation of, the body, the narrator begins to break down, becoming insane. "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe the student becomes obsessively pushing his need for self–torture to the extreme. To become more sorrow, he calls for the bird to hear only one response to become morself–tortured. "The Yellow Wallpaper''Charlotte Perkins Gilman the narrator suffers from depression and her only way she feels she can escape is writing. Eventually, she starts to feel trapped and by tearing down "the woman in the yellow wallpaper'' she thinks that this will set her free but it only makes her become more mad. C) Thesis Statement The three stories The Tell–Tale Heart The Yellow Wallpaper, and Raven have a common narrator type, bringing about a sense of psychological horror within the themes of insanity. Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 5. Thesis Statement On Child Abuse Assignment III Outline Problem General Statement: "Everyone suffers some injustice in life, and what better motivation than to help others not suffer in the same way." – Bella Thorne (Brainy Quote) Problem Statement: People suffer from all types of matters nowadays, but it's much harder hearing about children suffering in that way as a result of child abuse. Definition: Child abuse is a major consequence present in almost every society in which children are exposed to maltreatment and neglect. Size: Statistically speaking, about 40 million children worldwide suffer abuse every year, with more than 1,500 children dying of abuse in the United States annually. With that being mentioned, it is probably clear that child abuse is a huge...show more content... Wrap up: After all, it's our society and culture that shape how we think or what we believe in; that's why child abuse is entirely against our beliefs. Conclusion Final Evaluation: In conclusion, this organization is a productive one that accomplishes more than just the normal. However, this organization can be much more powerful by letting their work spread to other projects and ideas. Restating Thesis: tackling the issue of child abuse, the National Alliance of Children's Trust and Prevention Funds used functional feasibility, operational feasibility, and geographical consideration to prevent children from suffering by ensuring them with trust and prevention funds. Recommendations: This organization should not only focus on the trust funds project, but they should also start thinking of other projects to work on such as raising awareness through campaigns or sending abused children to physiologists for Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 6. A Good Thesis Statement For Thesis You have a clear thesis statement and I like how your essay is a very fluent paragraph by paragraph. You have a lot of good ideas, but you need to expand them more in order to show the readers what you want them to know. It a very informative essay, you did give a lot information about student worries about having their major undecided before they came to college and some ways that can help those students out. But I still has some suggestion wants to share with you. For the introduction paragraph one, you talked about undeclared students become worried and anxious, then you then you use Schmidt's article to prove your idea, but after that you again said about that is the example of students become worried and anxious. I think it is creating Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 7. Thesis Statement For Domestic Violence Family violence Elio Ishak Notre Dame University, louaize Course: ENL 110 Instructor: Pascale Chibani Date of Submission: Monday, 15 may 2017 OUTLINE Thesis statement : Domestic violence is a very important social issue because it has a large negative affect on the victims. Even though Domestic violence can be caused by either male or female it is usually caused by the male due to the large physical advantage. This essay will discuss the history of domestic violence, as well as explain the different types, and ways to prevent it. I.History of domestic violence : a.In early roman society b.In the England community c.In early America society II.different types of family violence : a.physical violence b.emotional abuse c.sexual abuse III.ways to prevent domestic violence: a. b. Family violence is when someone...show more content... The first kind is called physical violence. Physical abuse, including assault, is the intentional use of force against a person without that person's consent. It can cause physical pain or injuries . Physical abuse includes: hitting, slapping or kicking strangling or choking killing someone The second type is emotional abuse, Emotional abuse happens when a person uses words or actions to control, frighten or isolate someone or take away their self–respect. Is contains : constant yelling or criticism controlling or keeping someone from seeing friends or family
  • 8. making fun of preventing someone from practicing their faith or religion The third kind is sexual abuse. Sexual assault and abuse can have devastating impacts. Sexual assault is any unwanted sexual or sexualised act that causes the person to feel uncomfortable or scared. Sexual abuse contain : sexual touching or sexual activity without consent continued sexual contact when asked to stop forcing someone to commit unsafe or humiliating sexual Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 9. Suicide Thesis Essay I. INTRODUCTION: п‚· Thesis: While Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem, I believe That Suicide is wrong. II. BODY PAGE 1: The History of Suicide п‚· Opening Sentence: Why do people commit Suicide? п‚· Detail 1: Suicide Methods п‚· Detail 2: Suicide and Mental illness п‚· Detail 3: Prevention III. BODY PAGE II: School Bullying/Teen Suicides п‚· Transition/Opening Sentence: The Bullies have a new way to attack people over the internet. п‚· Detail 1: The Factors that contribute to Suicide п‚· Detail 2: How the Internet/Social Media Has Had an Impact on Suicide in Young Adults п‚· Detail 3: The many different forms of Bullying that can lead to a IV. BODY PAGE III: Military/Terrorist Suicide п‚· Transition/Opening Sentence: Could Suicide...show more content... Whilst cyber bullying is not physical it's emotional and psychological effects are devastating for the victim and can often lead to suicide and depression (Hinduja &amp; Patchin, 2010). Social Networking sites act as a platform where bullies can say things they might not usually say to someone in person, anonymity and less physical proximity act as a wall between the bully and the victim, none the less, the words or rumors' that are shared are still just as hurtful. Bullies often feel more confident online and they can contact their victims anytime, anywhere, day or night, not just in the school yard (Smith et al., 2008)." (Procon. (24 O). Retrieved from http:/ /socialnetworking.procon.org/) For example "Jamey Rodemeyer in 2011 a 14–year–old boy from Williamsville, NY, took his life after what his parents claim was years of bullying because of struggles with his sexuality. His parents, Tracy and Tim Rodemeyer, say that Jamey faced bullies for years, though things intensified in middle school, according to NBC 2. According to NBC, the Rodemeyers had gone to the school about the problem in the past. Jamey even sought Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 10. Ptsd Thesis Statement Post–traumatic disorder (PTSD) is one of the leading mental issues in the world right now. It includes introduction to injury including passing or the danger of death, genuine damage, or sexual brutality. Something is traumatic when it is exceptionally startling, overpowering and causes a considerable measure of pain. Injury is regularly sudden, and numerous individuals say that they felt feeble to stop or change the occasion. Traumatic occasions might incorporate wrongdoings, common fiascos, mishaps, war or strife, or different dangers to life. It could be an occasion or circumstance that one encounters or something that transpires, including friends and family. The post–traumatic stress is not subject to any definite experience a priori,...show more content... Normal Stress Response The normal stress reaction happens when healthy adults who have been presented to a solitary discrete traumatic occasion in adulthood experience extraordinary awful recollections, enthusiastic desensitizing, and sentiments of illusion, being cut off from connections or substantial strain and trouble. Acute Stress Disorder Acute stress disorder is portrayed by frenzy responses, mental disarray, separation; serious sleeping disorder, suspiciousness, and being not able oversee even essential self–consideration, work, and relationship exercises. Uncomplicated PTSD Uncomplicated PTSD includes persistent re–experiencing of the distressing occurrence, prevention of stimuli related with the disturbance, emotional distressing, and indications of enlarged stimulation. Comorbid PTSD Comorbidity PTSD alludes to the presence of two or more ailments or conditions in the same individual in the meantime (Parsons, & Ressler, 2013). For instance, somebody who has been determined to have both post–traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) and marginal identity issue (BPD) is said to have "comorbid PTSD and Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 11. Good Thesis Statement To start out of making a good research paper is, to know a good thesis statement to write down on paper and to evaluate an issue or an idea and presents the breakdown and evaluation to your audience (owl.english.purdue.edu). Make sure you find the main point of your subject for your paper and try to summarize your thesis and the evidence you are using to support that point. You should always make sure you have your paper in the right format before you even begin on writing. Then you explain something to your audience so that it flows well with the rest of your paper (owl.english.purdue.edu). You write an argumentative paper that makes a claim about a topic and justifies your claim with specific evidence. Your claim can be an opinion, a policy...show more content... Furthermore, always when you are writing a paper is to put as much in your own words as possible and try not to paraphrase that much and cite as much as possible. In addition, make sure that the citing matches your references. You then have to proofread your draft paper and to see that it is in proper format with a good introduction and conclusion then you can start writing your final paper. However, proofreading is important to go back and revise your paper (owl.english.purdue.edu). I think the easiest part of conducting a research paper is about what topic that interests me to write. The things I struggle with most are how to start out writing and putting it all together on paper. Choosing a good topic and keep from having writer's block when you start writing. Also check to my grammar, wordiness or making sure it makes sense. However, when it has been brought to my attention that I am making mistakes and need help I contact a tutor. Because writing research papers are harder for me to understand and to put it all together to make any sense. The most important thing for me is looking forward in the remainder of my schooling is to make sure I write in my forums and my assignments and check my spelling, grammar, citing, and make sure, when I am doing research to pick a scholarly peer review site or a reliable website. Moreover, to make Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 12. Thesis Statement : Global Warming Thesis Statement: Global warming is a growing concern of scientists and researchers who believe that it is a serious problem for our planet. The concerns and research have also been questioned and have even been called myths. Millions of people find themselves affected by these weather pattern changes and are concerned for their futures. Activists on both sides of the argument are very passionate and not afraid to attack each other in every way they can. There are many questions that are still not answered, however, we continue to see drastic weather changes to Earth. We must go beyond the arguments and learn as much as we can to stop what could possibly lead to the destruction of our planet, our way of life and our future. Global warming is concerned with an average increase in the temperature of the atmosphere and the increase in the Earth 's surface temperature primarily due to the emission of greenhouse gases from the burning of fossil fuels. As for the processes of global warming, they can occur from a variety of causes. The causes include the things that are concerned with natural and human factors. Some people believe that global warming is a myth or hoax. They believe that global warming is being used to generate fear and panic and that those behind this movement are using it to control people 's lives and for financial gain. "Within the community of scientists and others concerned about anthropogenic climate change, those who are skeptics are more commonly termed Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 13. Thesis Statement For Mental Health Expository Method Used: The Expository Method used for the topic to sentence outline is 'Analysis by Division.' This method breaks down the main idea into smaller parts that work together to make one central point. Additionally, the 'Analysis by Division' method is useful for structuring the topic sentences for writing the essay. Topic to Sentence Outline Topic: Mental health is an increasingly vital part of general wellness in today's fast–paced world. (Narrowed Topic): Characteristics of a mentally healthy individual. Thesis Statement: A mentally healthy individual has the characteristics of emotional intelligence and spiritual consciousness, intellectual and social wellness. Emotional Intelligence is considered one of the defining characteristics of a mentally healthy...show more content... Equally important to the characteristics of a mentally healthy individual, in today's fast–paced world, is the psychological health of the brain, the genetic, biological and environmental factors that play an integral role in general wellness. Many prominent theorists have argued that perceptions of the self, the world, and the future are essential for mental health. Yet much research evidence suggests that overly positive self–evaluations, exaggerated perceptions of control or mastery, and unrealistic optimism are characteristics of normal human thought. Moreover, these illusions seem to promote other criteria of mental health, including, the ability to care about others, be happy or contented, and to engage in productive and creative work. (Taylor & Brown 1988, Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 14. Writer's Statement Thesis Statement: Climate change is natural; however, advances of human society such as deforestation, industrialization, and the burning of fossil fuels, have increased the rate at which the climate is changing. My three major sources stood out when writing my research paper on climate change. My main source was Louis Bergeron's, "The World Can be Powered by Alternative Energy, Using Today's Technology, in 20–40 Years, Says Stanford Researcher Mark Z. Jacobson." In this article, Bergeron describes an energy researcher's plan to power the world with renewables within the next few decades. My second source was Marc Lallanilla's, "Greenhouse Gas Emissions: Causes and Sources." In this article, Lallanilla talked about the Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 15. Thesis Statement For Teen Suicide Research Question: How can teen suicide be prevented? Thesis Statement: Even though teen suicide is one of the leading causes of deaths in teenagers, there are many ways it can be prevented. Summary of Topic: Suicide is the third leading cause of deaths in adolescents in the United States. Teensuicide is also often referred to as a permanent solution to a temporary problem. Teens so often are suicidal and attempt suicide as a call for help from others. They have no intention in dying they are just trying to cry out for help from anyone that will listen. Many reasons cause teen to attempt suicide, varying from bullying to psychological disorders. In fact, psychological disorders accounts for about 90% of teens who attempt or commit suicide. Teenagers are also at higher risk of suicide when they are under...show more content... Teen suicide is something that is endless, it will never stop but if everyone was educated on it, it could help prevent deaths. I think with people provided with statistics and further information can help avoid adolescent suicide attempts. I think most teen suicide cases could be prevent if we knew the signs to look for and the ways to stop it. I believe parents would feel safer if they knew knowledge on the issue and how to handle it. The intended audiences for this essay is parents or friends of suicidal teens. This essay is important because, as mentioned earlier, we need to be educated on suicide to end tons of tragedies. It is also important to be aware of the warning signs to help prevent. This essay is relevant because teen suicide is a war that happens daily, and will continue to happen, until we take control of the situation and do something to stop it. If family members were informed of the cause and symptoms leading up to the attempt of suicide, then there is less likely that teenagers would try and commit Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 16. Thesis Statement On Favorite Restaurant Nashabre Payton Favorite Restaurant Thesis Statement: I enjoy eating at Red Lobster because it gives me the opportunity to socialize with friends and family, serves great food, and it's inexpensive. Topic Sentence #1: I enjoy eating at Red Lobster because it gives me the opportunity to socialize with my friends and family. TopicSentence #2: I also enjoy eating at Red Lobster because they serve great food. Topic Sentence #3: Finally, I enjoy dining at Red Lobster because it's inexpensive. Has someone ever asked you where you wanted to eat, and you've always responded by saying you favorite restaurant? I know I have. Every time my mother would ask me where I wanted to eat at, I would always respond by saying Red Lobster. Sometimes we would...show more content... The word 'consequently' contributes to greater unity or cohesion between sentences and allows the text to flow more smoothly. Style Sentence Length Info Total Sentences: 41 Avg. Length: 24.3 words Short Sentences (< 17 words): 9 (22%) Long Sentences (> 35 words): 6 (15%) Sentence Variation: 11.2 words (std deviation) Your writing showcases a good balance between simple and complex sentences, although the effective use of sentence length cannot be easily measured. Line chart of the length of each sentence (first 50 sentences). A jagged chart indicates variation. Helpful Resources: Effective Use of Sentence Length Style Sentence Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 17. Thesis Statement : Early Anxiety Essay Thesis Statement: Early Anxiety is stemmed from many factors, however the main cause of anxiety in adolescents is directly related to parenting and/or family influences. As a child, life was hectic from the beginning. Dad was in and out of jail, and when he was out my mom and him and my mother would indulge in hard drugs. Don 't get me wrong, when you 're so twisted on drugs there is only so much your body and mind is capable of doing, right? Since I could remember I've been the boss, the keeper of the responsibilities, almost like the parent of my parents. Throughout school, i had constant anxiety about school, worrying about my little brother and wondering if my parents were okay. Fast forward to the present time, still on a daily basis I struggle with severe Anxiety. It truly never went away, it only got worse. If I would have had a better mother daughter, or father daughter relationship or didn't have to watch my parrents struggle with their anxiety and addictions, and i had to worry a lot less I would have never developed this anxiety. Harpster 2. Anxiety can be a very serious (disease/disorder) it is simply defined as an abnormal fear or tension which can occur without any obvious trigger or session; a recurrence, unwelcome and intrusive thought. Anxiety can also be defined as a subjective state of fear or tension. There are two types of anxiety, anxiety can provide signals that alert the body to trigger it to improve mental and physical performance Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 18. Thesis Statement Thesis Statement Water pollution has had devastating effects on the environment, which include irreversible effects to the ocean's ecosystem, health problems and abnormal conditions. interference of the ocean's ecosystem – Plastic storage bags can kill animals in the oceans like dolphins, turtles and whales. It is easy for wildlife to swallow and eventually causes death. * Over 1.5 billion tons of plastic water bottles end up in US landfills each year. It takes over 300 years to degrade. health problems –Spread of diseases * Lead. Lead is hazardous to health as it accumulates in the body and affects the central nervous system. Children and pregnant women are most at risk. * Fluoride. Excess fluorides can cause...show more content... The chemical poisoning in water have a great impact on humans because it can cause brain damage and physical deformities in unborn fetuses. Pollution disrupts the natural food chain as well. Pollutants such as lead and cadmium are eaten by tiny animals. Later, these animals are consumed by fish and shellfish, and the food chain continues to be disrupted at all higher levels. Eventually, humans are affected by this process as well. People can get diseases such as hepatitis by eating seafood that has been poisoned. Besides, Water pollutants introduce abnormal conditions (harmful chemicals, changes in water temperatures) into water bodies, disrupting existing ecosystems and can potentially contribute to reducing biodiversity in that affected area – one of the effects of water pollution. For example, the discharge of heated–up water from thermal and nuclear power plants into a river can cause problems for aquatic organisms, which are fairly used to specific temperatures. The increase in water temperatures could increase their metabolic rates and hence their need for food. This could eventually lead to the depletion of food sources in that water region and in turn cause a reduction in species population in that water region. Besides thermal pollution, water could also be polluted via the entry of acidic substances into the water bodies through rivers, seas and oceans. The effects of water pollution by this process, known as Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 19. Thesis Statement On Standardized Testing Thesis: The effects of standardized testing have negatively impacted students across the United States. High Stakes testing has led to a decrease in student motivation, high retention rate, and a notable change in early dropout rates. I.History of Standardized Testing A. Standardized testing shows where a student stands academically. B. High stake testing determines if a student will move forward a grade or not. C. The legislatives thought high stake testing would improve student academics. II.Lack of Student Motivation A. According to the article, "Student Motivation: An Overlooked Piece of School Reform," Motivation can affect a student's outcome in class. B. An absence of understudy inspiration can assume an essential part in an understudy...show more content... Although legislatives assumption was that high stakes testing would enhance understudy inspiration, and raise understudy accomplishment, that supposition was completely incorrect. The effect of standardized testing (high–stakes testing) has not been positive throughout the United States at all. Due to the lack of motivation, the high retention rate, and notable change in dropout rate, it may be a while until many states recover, especially for states like Louisiana. According to Nola, Louisiana is tied with Florida for having one of the country's fifth lowest graduation rates, and one of the highest dropout rates. Our society needs to come together and think of a plan that will help students, and prevent the increasing number of kids who decide to give up on school. A system that will benefit both students, and teachers should be created; making it better for both, students and teachers to work together properly. With a new system student motivation may improve, the number of over aged students sitting in the wrong grade will decrease, and the notable dropout rate will actually Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 20. Summary Of A Strong Thesis Statement The foundation of your essay relies on a strong thesis statement, but what exactly is a thesis and how do you develop it? Creating a good thesis is vital when it comes to writing a skilled essay. If your thesis is not effective, then your whole essay is weak. Chapter 6 of Successful College Writing thoroughly explains everything that has to do with a thesis and all the important things* to keep in mind whilst writing one. Also, this chapter emphasizes how crucial it is to support your thesis with reliable and factual sources. A thesis statement is an introduction to the topic of youressay. It is typically introduced in the first paragraph, but in some cases it can be written after that. It can either be stated directly or implied, however, Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 21. The Great Gatsby thesis statement Abstract The Great Gatsby is written by the American author F. Scott Fitzgerald. The story takes place in "the roaring twenties". The characters in the novel have dreams and goals and not one dream ends well. That is why my thesis statement is: The Great Gatsby is really about unattainable dreams. The dreams I am discussing is GatsbyВґs American dream, Daisy's dream and Nick's dream. The dreams are based on the love story between Daisy and Gatsby. The final piece in Gatsby's American dream would be if he got Daisy to wed him. Daisy dreams of Gatsby but chooses between him and her current husband Tom. Nick wants Gatsby's life to be a happy life and he cares a lot about him. His dream is for the story to end well. When Daisy does not choose...show more content... He wishes that Gatsby's life should contain a happy ever after. There are a lot of dreams in the book but I want to distinguish these three main dreams and how none of them gets fulfilled. Gatsby's American dream The first dream that does not get fulfilled is the one of Gatsby. He starts off as an underprivileged boy and struggles his way to the top. We make his acquaintance when he is on the top of his life. He is enjoying his big house and his vast wealth. The one thing he cannot have is his lovely Daisy. Gatsby's story reflects the "classical" American dream: Anyone can make anything of himself/herself with just elbow grease, spirit and a whole lot of confidence. Jay loves Daisy and, sadly, she is the one thing which he cannot procure to his "perfect life". His wealth is shown clearly, for instance when he throws huge parties just to have the chance of meeting or seeing Daisy. This behavior is not feasible if you do not have that kind of money which leads us to the conclusion that he is wealthy. The symbol that portrays the American dream is the green light. The light symbolizes wealth but also Daisy, the latter because there is a green light at the end of DaisyВґs dock. He reaches out for it just like he reaches out for his dream. His material world reflects Daisy. Daisy is sometimes a symbol of the American dream. "Her voice is full of money... That was it. I'd never understood before. It was full of money – that was the inexhaustible Get more content on HelpWriting.net