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Problem Section Of Rough Draft
Research Paper Due Date: Week 2, Day 2: Problem section of rough draft is due. Week 3, Day 1:
List of policy alternatives (citing sources) is due. Week 4, Day 1: Rough draft is due. September
28: Final Draft is due. Length: Your paper must be at least 4 pages (to the bottom of the 4th page),
double spaced, with 12 point font and traditional margins. If it is short of that, 25 points will be
taken off for every page it is short. That being said, I want 4 pages of important research and
analytical content and not 4 pages of meaningless fluff. Purpose: I would never create an
assignment just to waste your time. There are numerous purposes to this assignment. First, this
assignment gives you the opportunity to explore a question in much greater depth than you
normally would in the class. Being a 15 week class with lots of material to cover, we barely
scratch the surface of most issues. Because we spend so little time on each topic, you are able to
develop a general understanding of most issues, but you are never able to become an expert on
any of them. This research paper gives you the opportunity to become an expert on something. It is
expected that, by the time your paper is complete, you will be an expert on whatever topic you have
written about and will be able to speak fluently on the subject, answering most questions someone
could ask you. Secondly, this paper gives you the opportunity to work on your reading and writing
skills, which are essential, not only to an
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Argumentative Essay Rough Draft
Amateur Top Prospect Maxim Letunov, C, University of Connecticut (Hockey East) One half of a
dynamic duo alongside of Kyle Connor (WPG) with the Youngstown Phantoms, Maxim Letunov
is a streaky, lanky forward with a ton of offensive ability. Letunov is a shifty forward, who
recently finished a 25 goal, 39 assist season in the USHL. While it's not one of the powerhouse
NCAA schools, the University of Connecticut offers something that other schools may not have
been able to, playing time. All reports suggest that Letunov will be given every opportunity to shine
with plenty of playing time. Freshman to Watch Brendan Warren, LW, University of Michigan (Big
Ten) One player who never wavered from his original hockey plans is Brendan Warren. As a native
of Michigan and life–long Wolverine hopeful, Warren will suit up for legendary Head Coach Red
Berenson, staying comfortable right in Ann Arbor. Warren doesn't possess elite skills, but he did put
up respectable numbers in the United States Development program, playing in a bottom–six role.
Warren is worthy of attention due to his size, instincts, and largely untapped potential. Unsigned for
2016–17 Hunter Fejes, LW, Colorado College (NCHC) Looking back at the 2012 NHL Entry Draft,
and Coyotes appeared to have a late–round gem on their hands after taking former Shattuck St.
Mary's product Hunter Fejes. With...show more content...
After spurning the Erie Otters of the OHL and Frolunda at the beginning of the season, Karlsson
opted to try his hand with Skelleftea. There, he performed fine at the junior level as a
point–producer, but couldn't take advantage of minimal icetime in the SHL and opted instead to
gain his release and re–join Frolunda, the organization that he grew up in. Karlsson is known as an
agitator, and now that he is settled back home, he will be a name to keep an eye on as he
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English Rough Draft Essay
English Rough draft Writing an essay is incredibly simple, but somehow people still struggle, so I
will try my best to explain and point you in the right direction. With every essay there is a topic,
thesis and then the actual essay with a few steps in–between. Picking a topic is always in my
perspective the hardest, there are millions upon millions of things you could choose as your topic,
but you want to try and narrow down your choices. Always try to pick something you love, or
something you are interested in, or something you know a lot about. A topic is sometimes already
given to you, so when that happens never write about something you don't know always look your
topic up, even if you are not interested in said topic. Always prepare
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Rough Draft Essay
A "rough draft" is something someone writes with the express purpose of getting their ideas out on
paper. Expectedly, more often than not, people will write multiple drafts before writing their final, in
an effort to get to their best paper. I was, of course, introduced to the phenomenon that is the rough
draft in middle school. Interestingly, whenever I attempted to write a rough draft, my thoughts
would become muddled and slowly but surely, I was left with nothing to write. Hardly after being
introduced to the rough draft than I jettisoned it; in fact, it is because of that dismissal that has
prompted me to adopt a different method. My alternative method is a rather simple one: I ruminate
on a particular topic with the purpose of gathering...show more content...
The first step is something I like to call, The Royal Rumble of Ideas. The path in which my paper
will follow as well as my thoughts and ideas are formed from the first process. The way in which
it does this, is by requiring the writer to apply an abundant amount of focus on one particular
area; whereas, the typical strategy, asks for the writer to just write (cue eye roll). If I am to
construct a story, I must utilize this step. En passant, I might add, the crux of the former element is
very much similar to the latter, as well as in the way in which it works. The commonality to which
I am referring, is rumination. The simplicity of it is bemusing, especially considering it's efficiency,
but I will describe that later. The way this is utilized, is by requiring the writer to mull over what
they will write next. For example: When I am writing, regardless of the type of paper, I will deeply
contemplate what my next sentence will be and how it will be phrased. Incidentally, in English
class, I will often be seen staring into the ether, as if I am on a psychotropic drug. There is,
however, a reason behind this seemingly sinister image. As I described, rumination is crucial in my
writing process: In order to produce a sentence, or a paragraph for that matter, I must distill
information from that contemplation. (See, it even
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Reflective Essay: A Rough Draft Of My Writing
I do not have a rough draft of my essay. Regardless, I understand how I have improved in my
writing skills compared to the beginning of the year. It would take me hours to write a paper. I
could not write a single sentence unless it was exactly how I wanted it. When I wrote the Iliad
prompt, I tried a new approach and composed what I thought and edited it later. I did not feel
distressed over this paper, instead I was confident I could finish the prompt easily. When I finished, I
emailed my brother the essay to edit it. When it was returned, he only corrected a few grammar
mistakes and told me to edit it before I sent it. Then, I reread my essay and realized what I wrote was
a poor essay. It contained a ton of errors and the sentences did
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Rough Draft Process Analysis
When beginning to write an essay everyone has their own method of doing so. Some may like to
brainstorm while others may prefer to go straight into writing about their topic. I personally
beginning every essay by collecting ideas about my topic before coordinating them into a type of
diagram, next I proceed to do my rough draft before revising over the paper and finally composing
my final draft. The point of the writing process is to help break everything down so ideas can be
organized and everything can make perfect sense for not just the writer but also the reader.
Writing an essay can be difficult if a person does not know how or where to begin. I personally
believe the first step of writing is to list down ideas about the topic. After...show more content...
Proofreading and revising is a very crucial step in the writing process. If a person does not
proofread then the essay they worked on may not make sense and may overall confuse the reader.
Using correct punctuation shows how sentences are supposed to be read. Once I have made sure
all my sentences are grammatically correct I then compose my final copy of the essay. Writing
can be difficult if not done correctly. That is why there is a writing process to follow. Using some
type of way to group ideas together help coordinate how the essay will go. Then once the ideas are
put together the rough draft can be formed and edited. After everything has been writing accordantly
the essay can then be turned in. Some may think the writing process is just some more additional
steps to getting their essay done but overall it makes the writing experience easier and more
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Argumentative Writing Rough Draft
Outline, planning, revising, rough and final draft, grading. This is the typical process for writing
an essay, I however as a young high school student never followed this. I started with an idea in
my head and go on from there. I never considered a need to plan and prepare an outline, just to
write a rough draft that I would have to revise, draft, and draft again. It would just be easier to start
writing the final draft first right? No. This class has taught me many strategies on how to accustom
my writing to a college level. Over the semester in this class I have grown, learned how to effectively
draft, and experienced argumentative writing first hand.
I, over the semester, have grown in both literacy and critical thinking. A direct comment from Mr.
Gish on the first essay I wrote for the class was "Nice reading!" to this sentence in the essay "This
continues to show that people in poverty aren't charity cases, but rather they are human beings.".
This comment, along with others, shows me that I am capable to effectively write in one of the
worst essays that I have written. The reason for this growth was the support of both my friends and
family. My father would help me with grammatical errors and final revision decisions in some
essays. This growth happened slowly with a lot of effort put towards it. An example from my first
essay is "First and foremost, Gordon Park's imagery throughout his composition." this is the topic
sentence to a short paragraph in the beginning of
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Rough Draft Essay
Ciara Johnson
Mrs. Hamm
Intro to Basic Writing
12 September 2015
Rough Draft I use to enjoy reading and writing. The joy of going to the bookstore and picking out
a great book excited me. I would curl up in my bed and image the world around me as if I was in the
book myself. Everything changed during my four high school years. During middle school, the end
of course test was always TAKS. It was a very easy test to pass but, my eight grade year I heard it
would be the last of the Texas Assessment of Knowledge and skills. I was scared a brand new test,
that would determine if I go to the next grade, I was terrified. State of Texas Assessments of
Academic Readiness or better known as STAAR, I remember hearing about it on the news. We were
...show more content...
I ended up failing but I wasn't to upset since the whole school district ended up failing it was like
going to school again. I went to summer school and passed the writing test. Sophomore and junior
year were the hardest for me with the writing test. Sophomore year I did not pass my writing and
reading, I ended up going to summer school again, and I still did not pass. After not passing the
second time my junior year started. The school offered tutoring afterschool and I would have
pullouts during my class. Pullouts is where you would be pulled out of a non–essential class for
tutoring during school. After I spent all that time studying and practicing I still didn't pass. I just
didn't understand what was wrong with me, I felt dumb and worthless. Each time I take a test I
would pray to god, to help me through it a give me strength. But I felt as though he wasn't
listening to me, I was so ashamed of myself. I know I was at my worst when I was thinking about
dropping out of high school. I felt like I failed everyone my mother, father and most of all myself.
I had one last time to pass the test before my senior year. At this point, I was over the test I had no
courage left in me to fail again But, I had no
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MLA Rough Draft
1.When writing, whether you paraphrase or directly quote someone else's ideas anywhere in your
paper, you must document the use of those borrowed ideas with an internal citation notation. In
MLA, there are two basic features of an internal citation. What are they?
In–text citation – This is a parenthetical citation within the paper that refers the reader to a list of
works cited. It commonly includes the author of the source and a page number, and punctuation
separates the author's last name and the page number. Nor is the abbreviation p. (for "page") used.
The period that ends the sentence appears after the closing parenthesis. 2.In MLA, if you work
(include) the identity of the source into the sentence structure, where do page numbers...show more
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In MLA, how are the works cited entries organized on the Work(s) Cited page?
пѓ Tell me how to arrange a works cited list on the page. No example required.
пЃ¶Create a new page at the end of your paper for a "Works Cited" list. Center the words "Works
Cited" at the top of the page. Double space after the title and begin entering citations.
пЃ¶Entries are listed alphabetically by the last name of the author or by the first major word of the
title if no author is given. If a source has more than one author, it is alphabetized by the last name of
the author whose name appears first. The entries are not numbered.
пЃ¶Entries are double–spaced.
пЃ¶The first line of each entry begins at the left margin. If more than one line is needed to complete
the entry, additional lines are indented five spaces or half an inch (this is called a hanging indent).
6.In MLA, if the source's identity is not worked into (written as part of) your sentence structure, how
does the internal citation look the first time you create it? Use your last name and page number 123
to illustrate your answer.
To correctly answer question 6, show me (don't tell me) how an internal citation looks the first time
you cite it in your paper, using your name as the source and page number 123 to complete your
response. You don't need to write a sentence first, just show me the
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Personal Narrative Rough Draft
Narrative– Draft Throughout my childhood I could never say I had the most exciting life, even now
I can still say that about my daily routine. Although my family put effort into nurturing me into a
well–rounded member of society since youth, I never felt any change or progress personally; it was
more as if I simply adapted to whatever expectations my elders had of me. I know this feeling did
not apply to me only, in fact, I was once in a classroom full of fifty–two people who accommodated
to whatever came their way. As any good parents, my mother and father wanted my siblings and I
to have the best education we could possibly afford; thus, unlike all my cousins, all three of us
attended private schools. My sister, Ysa, is seven years my senior and she was the ideal child,
always got perfect grades, kind, hardworking, and obedient. In contrast, my brother, JP, who is
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My class was very lively at first, but as the year progressed and the more lessons we had, the staler
it became. It didn't matter how many activities we did, we completed them for the sake of it without
any enjoyment; eventually our behavior at school affected our behavior at home too and due to this
none of my classmates were able to develop any kind of passion. We went there to learn, went
home, did our assignments, and repeated that over and over and over again. All the habits that
were imprinted onto us became harmful to the point in which half the class would shake in terror
if they missed an assignment, the guilt of not doing it the night prior eating us away which in
many cases caused nausea. During the five years we were in primary school, all students belonging
to each classroom acted the same way as their classmates. We all had the same morals, and those
who couldn't handle it were removed by their parents or by the
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Personal Narrative
Carleigh Grupe
Professor Schnell
English 1301
9 September 2015
Personal Narrative – Rough Draft
The lake glistened before me as my mom and I pulled into Blue Lake Fine Arts Camp just outside
Twin Lakes Michigan. I had been accepted into the International Youth SymphonyOrchestra
program where after spending a week at the camp the entire orchestra would be heading off on a
six week European Tour to share our musical talents and American culture with another part of the
world. I knew traveling to a different continent would give me further insight as to who I was a
person, but did not imagine the people I would meet would impact me as much as they did.
His name was Alex Peabody, a 16 year old junior from Ann Arbor, Michigan. Although we weren't
best friends, we were still close with one another throughout the tour. He had messy brown hair
that framed his round face and always wore a big flashy smile. One of my favorite moments with
him was while we were waiting to board the bus to go the the airport. While we sat waiting, I was
practicing my flute in preparation for our first concert in France. Many of the other students were
practicing, talking, giggling, or sharing newly found favorite songs with their friends. The noise
was deafening and created a carnival of sound that grew louder with each passing minute. Out of
the corner of my eye I saw Alex, a cello player, watching me practice, his eyes bright with
fascination.
"Alex, do you know how to play flute?" I called to
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Descriptive Essay Rough Draft
For my story, I would first make the web, gather information on my character(s). Then, I would
start a rough draft putting all the information into a story. One day, my family decided to take a
weekend trip into the sunny wilderness. As we were driving down the dirt road, we came upon an
animal crossing right in front of us. My husband slammed on the brakes, and the animal turned
around and put up his arms up like he was ready to fight. It was a kangaroo! It was Edward, the
kangaroo that the Forest Ranger has been talking about at the community meetings. He was golden
brown in color, hairy, little bitty eyes, long skinny tail and hopped around like he was on a pogo
stick. We all looked at one another with hesitation, wonder, and astonishment. How could we even
grasp the...show more content...
My daughters sitting in the back seat of the car are trying to take a picture of it with their I–phones.
I'm the only calm one and tells my husband to get back in the car and let's go back the other way
and call the Forest Ranger. As we turn the car around, the kangaroo starts following us, hopping
alongside the car. Then he jumps in the backseat of the car, and my goofy husband decides to
stop. The hairy kangaroo stretches over the seat and punches my husband in the face. While my
husband is trying to fight Edward off, other kangaroos are surrounding our car. We all get out,
and they take us into the dark, creepy wilderness. Then we slowly come out of the wilderness in
the morning and guess what? We are all kangaroos. I felt itchy and full of energy for the reason I
just wanted to hop. I wanted to hop all around the wilderness like no body's business. I seemed
anxious and on edge not knowing if I'm going to return back to a human being. My human body felt
trapped in this skin tight hide. I couldn't breathe or talk. I would just make loud funny noises. I
wanted
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A Research Paper Rough Draft
Jameson Au
English 1A–30
11/16/15
Research Paper Rough Draft
During the past couple of centuries, humans were able to accomplish more things than the entirety of
human existence. Mankind was able to prolong life, cure deadly diseases, and more. One of the
greatest achievements was converting fossil fuels into energy. People are able to take the fossilized
remains and turn them into the everyday fuel everyone in the world uses. However, the energy
humans have been using is not clean. The more people use fossil fuels, the more the planet dies.
Fortunately, scientists and engineers were able to come up with ways to renew energy. They created
new technologies that are capable of harvesting the sun's rays, water currents, and wind power. Even
though renewable energy sources like this have been discovered, people still neglect to convert to
them and continue to use fossil fuels. The sun, wind, and water are just some of the natural
resources that people were able to use to make energy. There are solar panels, wind and water
turbines that harvest the energy within these elements and converts them into electricity. These new
technologies could potentially solve some pollution problems that have arisen over the years. First,
look at how a solar panel is able to convert sun energy to electricity. Every single day, the sun rises
over the horizon shining its rays over the land. Solar panels convert photons from the sunlight into
direct current electricity. This electricity is
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Outline Of A Project Rough Draft Essay
Group Members:
Dustin Ballard
Caroline Fraser
Thomas Lichtenberger
Brandon Mendoza
Project Rough Draft
SOURCES COUNT: (7/10 minimum)
With the increase in humans populating the planet, there comes a need for more and more resources,
as well as more highways for transportation, leading to more cars on the road, and ultimately more
greenhouse gas emissions. Greenhouse gas activity is obtained by subtracting the long wave
radiation which escapes the earth from the estimated radiation emitted by the ocean surface
(A.Raval, V.Ramanathan 1989). The escaping radiation has been measured since 1985 by the Earth
Radiation Budget Experiment (ERBE) through the use of three orbiting satellites that sense
longwave and shortwave radiation escaping the atmosphere. The estimated ocean radiation is found
through direct use of the Stefan–Boltzmann law given the average temperature of the ocean surface.
There seems to be a huge controversy about these greenhouse gases and how they affect the climate,
and whether they even affect the global climate. This is not the first time in the earth's history that a
major climate change has occurred, referring back to the Ice Age when humans were nonexistent.
The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) reports predict that the average global
temperature will rise about 2 – 4.5 degrees Celsius in the next 100 years, causing some drastic
changes to the current environment (Lynch and Jenkins 2007). But if a major change in climate
occurred without
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Rough Draft : Amelia Earhart : Rough Draft
Amelia Earhart Rough Draft
It was announced in 1937, a female plane pilot who goes by the name of Amelia Earhart was
announced dead on July 2. Some people believe that her plane ran out of fuel and crashed into the
pacific ocean, but others believe different.
Amelia Earhart was born in Atchison, Kansas on July 24, 1897. On December 28, 1920, pilot
Frank Hawks gave Amelia her first ride in an airplane. Amelia started flying all around the world,
she even inspired other female pilots. Amelia Earhart started flying because she was not afraid to
break down barriers, she wanted to show that women can do such a thing that men can do. Amelia
did take a call to fly around the world and she was announced dead on July 2, 1937 from her plane
crashing into the Pacific Ocean.
In 1928, Amelia Earhart received a phone call that changed her life. Amelia was invited to become
the first woman passenger to cross the atlantic ocean in a plane. On the day of takeoff for Amelia she
had hopped in a Fokker tri–motor aircraft. The plane was good, but it has been proven the plane had
been in the shop numerous times because parts would not do the job they were supposed to do.
On July 2, 1937, the day Amelia Earhart had lost control of the plane during takeoff, and during
her flight it was said she had ran out of fuel during her trip, and crashed into the pacific ocean near
the Marshall and Howland Islands. In 1937 Amelia Earhart was proven dead, but there has been
photograph proof of her after the
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Rough Draft Pros And Cons
During my junior year of high school I had taken a U.S. Civics course, which regularly had whole
class debates on world topics. In 2005 I participated in one debate that changed my entire adult life
completely. Our classroom was split up into a pro side and a con side for reinstating the draft for
military aged individuals in the United States; due to the prolonged stay of military personal forced
to stay in a war environment. At this point in the War on Terrorism, Active Duty units were being
forced to extend their time in dangerous and mentally strenuous positions. I have never been alive
during a period in which a draft was enforced, but this debate really opened my eyes to what that
could mean for my generation.
Although the pro side
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Rough Draft Analysis
Rough Draft
Education has changed students' lives for years. Why do you think education is important to teens?
What some students don't get, if you don't have an education you will not end up having a very
good job. Some students just blow off school and don't listen. On the other hand, there are some kids
that do listen and they will end up being very successful. One reason I think education is important to
students is it will help prepare them make good grades so they can be involved in extracurricular
activities. If they want to play sports, they need to keep a passing grade in all classes. By keeping
their grades up students will be able to represent their school in many ways. Extracurricular activities
can help students become
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College Essay Rough Draft
College App Essay Rough Draft
As a young boy, I never truly put much into school. I put as little thought about college as well, but
it took one moment that made me want the desire to succeed in my life and make something of it.
Working for 12 straight hours in the middle of the hot sun, making minimum wage wasn't how I
wanted to live. Going to multiple jobs and having to work all weekend, even during school
occasionally was extremely difficult. This just gave me that extra drive to be more superior than
anyone else. Yet, I never gave up and still pushed to be the best student I could be. Staying up late
nights just to finish homework so I was able to make the best grade in class. The simplest moments
in life made we want to be the best
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Rough Draft
Katelyn CWV M–W–F 9:50am 12/6/13 Prof. Sharpe God has been a very important part of my
live since I was a very little girl. When I was only a couple of months old I was baptized. That was
my first spiritual encounter with God. I then proceeded to commit my first communion in third
grade. I then received my confirmation when I was in eighth grade. Like I said before God has
been a very important part in my life for a very long time. Who is God? What are his
characteristics? I believe that God is the person who created me and he is the person I believe in. I
also think that God is the creator of the world and that has control over everything that happens in
my life. I think that some of God's characteristics are that he has the...show more content...
I think that my worldview affects my thoughts and actions in many ways. I think that my
worldview affects my thoughts because I think that I go back to the things that I was taught as a
child and that is the way that I think now a day when I have to go back and think about
something. I also think that my worldview affects my actions because I am going to go back and
look at the things that I was taught and act the way that I was told was right when I was little. I
do not think that my worldview has not changed at all since I started taking this class at GCU. I
think that taking this class and brought me to know a lot more about my worldview. I also think
that taking this class has taught me about the important people that had the same worldview as me.
I loved taking this class to learn more about my worldview. I also liked learning about the different
worldview that there were. I think that it is very interesting that there are that many different
worldviews. There are some worldviews that are the very similar to my
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Slavery : A Rough Draft
Michael Gaudioso
Mr. Alexander
Freshman Theology Honors
28 October 2014
SLAVERY IN CHURCH ESSAY ROUGH DRAFT
When we think of the word slavery, extremely negative connotations to mind. We think of how
millions of African people were rounded up like sheep, stuffed into boats with horrible conditions,
and brought to this country where they were treated as lesser people. They were forced to work
without pay, in one of the most unforgiving occupations, farming. All this because of where they
were from and the color of their skin. Despite this, many people actually defended slavery using the
bible. Passages such as St. Paul's Letter to the Colossians approves slaves where he writes,
"Slaves, obey your human master in everything, not only when being watched, as currying favor,
but in simplicity of heart, fearing the Lord." However, due to the inhumanity of slavery, during
Vatican II the Church reversed its ideas on slavery. This massive change took place more than 80
years after the end of reconstruction. This long period of time raises many questions regarding the
Church 's ability to make that big of a change, and why the Church waited so long make those
changes. These types of questions can be answered by going back into the bible, and into the
Church's history through a process called Biblical criticism.
The process of Biblical Criticism is when a theologian analyzes a passage of scripture in terms of
the time and place of its writing. This process is useful when
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What Is A Rough Draft Essay

  • 1. Problem Section Of Rough Draft Research Paper Due Date: Week 2, Day 2: Problem section of rough draft is due. Week 3, Day 1: List of policy alternatives (citing sources) is due. Week 4, Day 1: Rough draft is due. September 28: Final Draft is due. Length: Your paper must be at least 4 pages (to the bottom of the 4th page), double spaced, with 12 point font and traditional margins. If it is short of that, 25 points will be taken off for every page it is short. That being said, I want 4 pages of important research and analytical content and not 4 pages of meaningless fluff. Purpose: I would never create an assignment just to waste your time. There are numerous purposes to this assignment. First, this assignment gives you the opportunity to explore a question in much greater depth than you normally would in the class. Being a 15 week class with lots of material to cover, we barely scratch the surface of most issues. Because we spend so little time on each topic, you are able to develop a general understanding of most issues, but you are never able to become an expert on any of them. This research paper gives you the opportunity to become an expert on something. It is expected that, by the time your paper is complete, you will be an expert on whatever topic you have written about and will be able to speak fluently on the subject, answering most questions someone could ask you. Secondly, this paper gives you the opportunity to work on your reading and writing skills, which are essential, not only to an Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 2. Argumentative Essay Rough Draft Amateur Top Prospect Maxim Letunov, C, University of Connecticut (Hockey East) One half of a dynamic duo alongside of Kyle Connor (WPG) with the Youngstown Phantoms, Maxim Letunov is a streaky, lanky forward with a ton of offensive ability. Letunov is a shifty forward, who recently finished a 25 goal, 39 assist season in the USHL. While it's not one of the powerhouse NCAA schools, the University of Connecticut offers something that other schools may not have been able to, playing time. All reports suggest that Letunov will be given every opportunity to shine with plenty of playing time. Freshman to Watch Brendan Warren, LW, University of Michigan (Big Ten) One player who never wavered from his original hockey plans is Brendan Warren. As a native of Michigan and life–long Wolverine hopeful, Warren will suit up for legendary Head Coach Red Berenson, staying comfortable right in Ann Arbor. Warren doesn't possess elite skills, but he did put up respectable numbers in the United States Development program, playing in a bottom–six role. Warren is worthy of attention due to his size, instincts, and largely untapped potential. Unsigned for 2016–17 Hunter Fejes, LW, Colorado College (NCHC) Looking back at the 2012 NHL Entry Draft, and Coyotes appeared to have a late–round gem on their hands after taking former Shattuck St. Mary's product Hunter Fejes. With...show more content... After spurning the Erie Otters of the OHL and Frolunda at the beginning of the season, Karlsson opted to try his hand with Skelleftea. There, he performed fine at the junior level as a point–producer, but couldn't take advantage of minimal icetime in the SHL and opted instead to gain his release and re–join Frolunda, the organization that he grew up in. Karlsson is known as an agitator, and now that he is settled back home, he will be a name to keep an eye on as he Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 3. English Rough Draft Essay English Rough draft Writing an essay is incredibly simple, but somehow people still struggle, so I will try my best to explain and point you in the right direction. With every essay there is a topic, thesis and then the actual essay with a few steps in–between. Picking a topic is always in my perspective the hardest, there are millions upon millions of things you could choose as your topic, but you want to try and narrow down your choices. Always try to pick something you love, or something you are interested in, or something you know a lot about. A topic is sometimes already given to you, so when that happens never write about something you don't know always look your topic up, even if you are not interested in said topic. Always prepare Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 4. Rough Draft Essay A "rough draft" is something someone writes with the express purpose of getting their ideas out on paper. Expectedly, more often than not, people will write multiple drafts before writing their final, in an effort to get to their best paper. I was, of course, introduced to the phenomenon that is the rough draft in middle school. Interestingly, whenever I attempted to write a rough draft, my thoughts would become muddled and slowly but surely, I was left with nothing to write. Hardly after being introduced to the rough draft than I jettisoned it; in fact, it is because of that dismissal that has prompted me to adopt a different method. My alternative method is a rather simple one: I ruminate on a particular topic with the purpose of gathering...show more content... The first step is something I like to call, The Royal Rumble of Ideas. The path in which my paper will follow as well as my thoughts and ideas are formed from the first process. The way in which it does this, is by requiring the writer to apply an abundant amount of focus on one particular area; whereas, the typical strategy, asks for the writer to just write (cue eye roll). If I am to construct a story, I must utilize this step. En passant, I might add, the crux of the former element is very much similar to the latter, as well as in the way in which it works. The commonality to which I am referring, is rumination. The simplicity of it is bemusing, especially considering it's efficiency, but I will describe that later. The way this is utilized, is by requiring the writer to mull over what they will write next. For example: When I am writing, regardless of the type of paper, I will deeply contemplate what my next sentence will be and how it will be phrased. Incidentally, in English class, I will often be seen staring into the ether, as if I am on a psychotropic drug. There is, however, a reason behind this seemingly sinister image. As I described, rumination is crucial in my writing process: In order to produce a sentence, or a paragraph for that matter, I must distill information from that contemplation. (See, it even Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 5. Reflective Essay: A Rough Draft Of My Writing I do not have a rough draft of my essay. Regardless, I understand how I have improved in my writing skills compared to the beginning of the year. It would take me hours to write a paper. I could not write a single sentence unless it was exactly how I wanted it. When I wrote the Iliad prompt, I tried a new approach and composed what I thought and edited it later. I did not feel distressed over this paper, instead I was confident I could finish the prompt easily. When I finished, I emailed my brother the essay to edit it. When it was returned, he only corrected a few grammar mistakes and told me to edit it before I sent it. Then, I reread my essay and realized what I wrote was a poor essay. It contained a ton of errors and the sentences did Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 6. Rough Draft Process Analysis When beginning to write an essay everyone has their own method of doing so. Some may like to brainstorm while others may prefer to go straight into writing about their topic. I personally beginning every essay by collecting ideas about my topic before coordinating them into a type of diagram, next I proceed to do my rough draft before revising over the paper and finally composing my final draft. The point of the writing process is to help break everything down so ideas can be organized and everything can make perfect sense for not just the writer but also the reader. Writing an essay can be difficult if a person does not know how or where to begin. I personally believe the first step of writing is to list down ideas about the topic. After...show more content... Proofreading and revising is a very crucial step in the writing process. If a person does not proofread then the essay they worked on may not make sense and may overall confuse the reader. Using correct punctuation shows how sentences are supposed to be read. Once I have made sure all my sentences are grammatically correct I then compose my final copy of the essay. Writing can be difficult if not done correctly. That is why there is a writing process to follow. Using some type of way to group ideas together help coordinate how the essay will go. Then once the ideas are put together the rough draft can be formed and edited. After everything has been writing accordantly the essay can then be turned in. Some may think the writing process is just some more additional steps to getting their essay done but overall it makes the writing experience easier and more Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 7. Argumentative Writing Rough Draft Outline, planning, revising, rough and final draft, grading. This is the typical process for writing an essay, I however as a young high school student never followed this. I started with an idea in my head and go on from there. I never considered a need to plan and prepare an outline, just to write a rough draft that I would have to revise, draft, and draft again. It would just be easier to start writing the final draft first right? No. This class has taught me many strategies on how to accustom my writing to a college level. Over the semester in this class I have grown, learned how to effectively draft, and experienced argumentative writing first hand. I, over the semester, have grown in both literacy and critical thinking. A direct comment from Mr. Gish on the first essay I wrote for the class was "Nice reading!" to this sentence in the essay "This continues to show that people in poverty aren't charity cases, but rather they are human beings.". This comment, along with others, shows me that I am capable to effectively write in one of the worst essays that I have written. The reason for this growth was the support of both my friends and family. My father would help me with grammatical errors and final revision decisions in some essays. This growth happened slowly with a lot of effort put towards it. An example from my first essay is "First and foremost, Gordon Park's imagery throughout his composition." this is the topic sentence to a short paragraph in the beginning of Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 8. Rough Draft Essay Ciara Johnson Mrs. Hamm Intro to Basic Writing 12 September 2015 Rough Draft I use to enjoy reading and writing. The joy of going to the bookstore and picking out a great book excited me. I would curl up in my bed and image the world around me as if I was in the book myself. Everything changed during my four high school years. During middle school, the end of course test was always TAKS. It was a very easy test to pass but, my eight grade year I heard it would be the last of the Texas Assessment of Knowledge and skills. I was scared a brand new test, that would determine if I go to the next grade, I was terrified. State of Texas Assessments of Academic Readiness or better known as STAAR, I remember hearing about it on the news. We were ...show more content... I ended up failing but I wasn't to upset since the whole school district ended up failing it was like going to school again. I went to summer school and passed the writing test. Sophomore and junior year were the hardest for me with the writing test. Sophomore year I did not pass my writing and reading, I ended up going to summer school again, and I still did not pass. After not passing the second time my junior year started. The school offered tutoring afterschool and I would have pullouts during my class. Pullouts is where you would be pulled out of a non–essential class for tutoring during school. After I spent all that time studying and practicing I still didn't pass. I just didn't understand what was wrong with me, I felt dumb and worthless. Each time I take a test I would pray to god, to help me through it a give me strength. But I felt as though he wasn't listening to me, I was so ashamed of myself. I know I was at my worst when I was thinking about dropping out of high school. I felt like I failed everyone my mother, father and most of all myself. I had one last time to pass the test before my senior year. At this point, I was over the test I had no courage left in me to fail again But, I had no Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 9. MLA Rough Draft 1.When writing, whether you paraphrase or directly quote someone else's ideas anywhere in your paper, you must document the use of those borrowed ideas with an internal citation notation. In MLA, there are two basic features of an internal citation. What are they? In–text citation – This is a parenthetical citation within the paper that refers the reader to a list of works cited. It commonly includes the author of the source and a page number, and punctuation separates the author's last name and the page number. Nor is the abbreviation p. (for "page") used. The period that ends the sentence appears after the closing parenthesis. 2.In MLA, if you work (include) the identity of the source into the sentence structure, where do page numbers...show more content... In MLA, how are the works cited entries organized on the Work(s) Cited page? пѓ Tell me how to arrange a works cited list on the page. No example required. пЃ¶Create a new page at the end of your paper for a "Works Cited" list. Center the words "Works Cited" at the top of the page. Double space after the title and begin entering citations. пЃ¶Entries are listed alphabetically by the last name of the author or by the first major word of the title if no author is given. If a source has more than one author, it is alphabetized by the last name of the author whose name appears first. The entries are not numbered. пЃ¶Entries are double–spaced. пЃ¶The first line of each entry begins at the left margin. If more than one line is needed to complete the entry, additional lines are indented five spaces or half an inch (this is called a hanging indent). 6.In MLA, if the source's identity is not worked into (written as part of) your sentence structure, how does the internal citation look the first time you create it? Use your last name and page number 123 to illustrate your answer. To correctly answer question 6, show me (don't tell me) how an internal citation looks the first time you cite it in your paper, using your name as the source and page number 123 to complete your response. You don't need to write a sentence first, just show me the Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 10. Personal Narrative Rough Draft Narrative– Draft Throughout my childhood I could never say I had the most exciting life, even now I can still say that about my daily routine. Although my family put effort into nurturing me into a well–rounded member of society since youth, I never felt any change or progress personally; it was more as if I simply adapted to whatever expectations my elders had of me. I know this feeling did not apply to me only, in fact, I was once in a classroom full of fifty–two people who accommodated to whatever came their way. As any good parents, my mother and father wanted my siblings and I to have the best education we could possibly afford; thus, unlike all my cousins, all three of us attended private schools. My sister, Ysa, is seven years my senior and she was the ideal child, always got perfect grades, kind, hardworking, and obedient. In contrast, my brother, JP, who is ...show more content... My class was very lively at first, but as the year progressed and the more lessons we had, the staler it became. It didn't matter how many activities we did, we completed them for the sake of it without any enjoyment; eventually our behavior at school affected our behavior at home too and due to this none of my classmates were able to develop any kind of passion. We went there to learn, went home, did our assignments, and repeated that over and over and over again. All the habits that were imprinted onto us became harmful to the point in which half the class would shake in terror if they missed an assignment, the guilt of not doing it the night prior eating us away which in many cases caused nausea. During the five years we were in primary school, all students belonging to each classroom acted the same way as their classmates. We all had the same morals, and those who couldn't handle it were removed by their parents or by the Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 11. Personal Narrative Carleigh Grupe Professor Schnell English 1301 9 September 2015 Personal Narrative – Rough Draft The lake glistened before me as my mom and I pulled into Blue Lake Fine Arts Camp just outside Twin Lakes Michigan. I had been accepted into the International Youth SymphonyOrchestra program where after spending a week at the camp the entire orchestra would be heading off on a six week European Tour to share our musical talents and American culture with another part of the world. I knew traveling to a different continent would give me further insight as to who I was a person, but did not imagine the people I would meet would impact me as much as they did. His name was Alex Peabody, a 16 year old junior from Ann Arbor, Michigan. Although we weren't best friends, we were still close with one another throughout the tour. He had messy brown hair that framed his round face and always wore a big flashy smile. One of my favorite moments with him was while we were waiting to board the bus to go the the airport. While we sat waiting, I was practicing my flute in preparation for our first concert in France. Many of the other students were practicing, talking, giggling, or sharing newly found favorite songs with their friends. The noise was deafening and created a carnival of sound that grew louder with each passing minute. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Alex, a cello player, watching me practice, his eyes bright with fascination. "Alex, do you know how to play flute?" I called to Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 12. Descriptive Essay Rough Draft For my story, I would first make the web, gather information on my character(s). Then, I would start a rough draft putting all the information into a story. One day, my family decided to take a weekend trip into the sunny wilderness. As we were driving down the dirt road, we came upon an animal crossing right in front of us. My husband slammed on the brakes, and the animal turned around and put up his arms up like he was ready to fight. It was a kangaroo! It was Edward, the kangaroo that the Forest Ranger has been talking about at the community meetings. He was golden brown in color, hairy, little bitty eyes, long skinny tail and hopped around like he was on a pogo stick. We all looked at one another with hesitation, wonder, and astonishment. How could we even grasp the...show more content... My daughters sitting in the back seat of the car are trying to take a picture of it with their I–phones. I'm the only calm one and tells my husband to get back in the car and let's go back the other way and call the Forest Ranger. As we turn the car around, the kangaroo starts following us, hopping alongside the car. Then he jumps in the backseat of the car, and my goofy husband decides to stop. The hairy kangaroo stretches over the seat and punches my husband in the face. While my husband is trying to fight Edward off, other kangaroos are surrounding our car. We all get out, and they take us into the dark, creepy wilderness. Then we slowly come out of the wilderness in the morning and guess what? We are all kangaroos. I felt itchy and full of energy for the reason I just wanted to hop. I wanted to hop all around the wilderness like no body's business. I seemed anxious and on edge not knowing if I'm going to return back to a human being. My human body felt trapped in this skin tight hide. I couldn't breathe or talk. I would just make loud funny noises. I wanted Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 13. A Research Paper Rough Draft Jameson Au English 1A–30 11/16/15 Research Paper Rough Draft During the past couple of centuries, humans were able to accomplish more things than the entirety of human existence. Mankind was able to prolong life, cure deadly diseases, and more. One of the greatest achievements was converting fossil fuels into energy. People are able to take the fossilized remains and turn them into the everyday fuel everyone in the world uses. However, the energy humans have been using is not clean. The more people use fossil fuels, the more the planet dies. Fortunately, scientists and engineers were able to come up with ways to renew energy. They created new technologies that are capable of harvesting the sun's rays, water currents, and wind power. Even though renewable energy sources like this have been discovered, people still neglect to convert to them and continue to use fossil fuels. The sun, wind, and water are just some of the natural resources that people were able to use to make energy. There are solar panels, wind and water turbines that harvest the energy within these elements and converts them into electricity. These new technologies could potentially solve some pollution problems that have arisen over the years. First, look at how a solar panel is able to convert sun energy to electricity. Every single day, the sun rises over the horizon shining its rays over the land. Solar panels convert photons from the sunlight into direct current electricity. This electricity is Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 14. Outline Of A Project Rough Draft Essay Group Members: Dustin Ballard Caroline Fraser Thomas Lichtenberger Brandon Mendoza Project Rough Draft SOURCES COUNT: (7/10 minimum) With the increase in humans populating the planet, there comes a need for more and more resources, as well as more highways for transportation, leading to more cars on the road, and ultimately more greenhouse gas emissions. Greenhouse gas activity is obtained by subtracting the long wave radiation which escapes the earth from the estimated radiation emitted by the ocean surface (A.Raval, V.Ramanathan 1989). The escaping radiation has been measured since 1985 by the Earth Radiation Budget Experiment (ERBE) through the use of three orbiting satellites that sense longwave and shortwave radiation escaping the atmosphere. The estimated ocean radiation is found through direct use of the Stefan–Boltzmann law given the average temperature of the ocean surface. There seems to be a huge controversy about these greenhouse gases and how they affect the climate, and whether they even affect the global climate. This is not the first time in the earth's history that a major climate change has occurred, referring back to the Ice Age when humans were nonexistent. The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) reports predict that the average global temperature will rise about 2 – 4.5 degrees Celsius in the next 100 years, causing some drastic changes to the current environment (Lynch and Jenkins 2007). But if a major change in climate occurred without Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 15. Rough Draft : Amelia Earhart : Rough Draft Amelia Earhart Rough Draft It was announced in 1937, a female plane pilot who goes by the name of Amelia Earhart was announced dead on July 2. Some people believe that her plane ran out of fuel and crashed into the pacific ocean, but others believe different. Amelia Earhart was born in Atchison, Kansas on July 24, 1897. On December 28, 1920, pilot Frank Hawks gave Amelia her first ride in an airplane. Amelia started flying all around the world, she even inspired other female pilots. Amelia Earhart started flying because she was not afraid to break down barriers, she wanted to show that women can do such a thing that men can do. Amelia did take a call to fly around the world and she was announced dead on July 2, 1937 from her plane crashing into the Pacific Ocean. In 1928, Amelia Earhart received a phone call that changed her life. Amelia was invited to become the first woman passenger to cross the atlantic ocean in a plane. On the day of takeoff for Amelia she had hopped in a Fokker tri–motor aircraft. The plane was good, but it has been proven the plane had been in the shop numerous times because parts would not do the job they were supposed to do. On July 2, 1937, the day Amelia Earhart had lost control of the plane during takeoff, and during her flight it was said she had ran out of fuel during her trip, and crashed into the pacific ocean near the Marshall and Howland Islands. In 1937 Amelia Earhart was proven dead, but there has been photograph proof of her after the Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 16. Rough Draft Pros And Cons During my junior year of high school I had taken a U.S. Civics course, which regularly had whole class debates on world topics. In 2005 I participated in one debate that changed my entire adult life completely. Our classroom was split up into a pro side and a con side for reinstating the draft for military aged individuals in the United States; due to the prolonged stay of military personal forced to stay in a war environment. At this point in the War on Terrorism, Active Duty units were being forced to extend their time in dangerous and mentally strenuous positions. I have never been alive during a period in which a draft was enforced, but this debate really opened my eyes to what that could mean for my generation. Although the pro side Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 17. Rough Draft Analysis Rough Draft Education has changed students' lives for years. Why do you think education is important to teens? What some students don't get, if you don't have an education you will not end up having a very good job. Some students just blow off school and don't listen. On the other hand, there are some kids that do listen and they will end up being very successful. One reason I think education is important to students is it will help prepare them make good grades so they can be involved in extracurricular activities. If they want to play sports, they need to keep a passing grade in all classes. By keeping their grades up students will be able to represent their school in many ways. Extracurricular activities can help students become Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 18. College Essay Rough Draft College App Essay Rough Draft As a young boy, I never truly put much into school. I put as little thought about college as well, but it took one moment that made me want the desire to succeed in my life and make something of it. Working for 12 straight hours in the middle of the hot sun, making minimum wage wasn't how I wanted to live. Going to multiple jobs and having to work all weekend, even during school occasionally was extremely difficult. This just gave me that extra drive to be more superior than anyone else. Yet, I never gave up and still pushed to be the best student I could be. Staying up late nights just to finish homework so I was able to make the best grade in class. The simplest moments in life made we want to be the best Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 19. Rough Draft Katelyn CWV M–W–F 9:50am 12/6/13 Prof. Sharpe God has been a very important part of my live since I was a very little girl. When I was only a couple of months old I was baptized. That was my first spiritual encounter with God. I then proceeded to commit my first communion in third grade. I then received my confirmation when I was in eighth grade. Like I said before God has been a very important part in my life for a very long time. Who is God? What are his characteristics? I believe that God is the person who created me and he is the person I believe in. I also think that God is the creator of the world and that has control over everything that happens in my life. I think that some of God's characteristics are that he has the...show more content... I think that my worldview affects my thoughts and actions in many ways. I think that my worldview affects my thoughts because I think that I go back to the things that I was taught as a child and that is the way that I think now a day when I have to go back and think about something. I also think that my worldview affects my actions because I am going to go back and look at the things that I was taught and act the way that I was told was right when I was little. I do not think that my worldview has not changed at all since I started taking this class at GCU. I think that taking this class and brought me to know a lot more about my worldview. I also think that taking this class has taught me about the important people that had the same worldview as me. I loved taking this class to learn more about my worldview. I also liked learning about the different worldview that there were. I think that it is very interesting that there are that many different worldviews. There are some worldviews that are the very similar to my Get more content on HelpWriting.net
  • 20. Slavery : A Rough Draft Michael Gaudioso Mr. Alexander Freshman Theology Honors 28 October 2014 SLAVERY IN CHURCH ESSAY ROUGH DRAFT When we think of the word slavery, extremely negative connotations to mind. We think of how millions of African people were rounded up like sheep, stuffed into boats with horrible conditions, and brought to this country where they were treated as lesser people. They were forced to work without pay, in one of the most unforgiving occupations, farming. All this because of where they were from and the color of their skin. Despite this, many people actually defended slavery using the bible. Passages such as St. Paul's Letter to the Colossians approves slaves where he writes, "Slaves, obey your human master in everything, not only when being watched, as currying favor, but in simplicity of heart, fearing the Lord." However, due to the inhumanity of slavery, during Vatican II the Church reversed its ideas on slavery. This massive change took place more than 80 years after the end of reconstruction. This long period of time raises many questions regarding the Church 's ability to make that big of a change, and why the Church waited so long make those changes. These types of questions can be answered by going back into the bible, and into the Church's history through a process called Biblical criticism. The process of Biblical Criticism is when a theologian analyzes a passage of scripture in terms of the time and place of its writing. This process is useful when Get more content on HelpWriting.net