1. Descriptive Essay Rough Draft 1

2. Warning This is a graded activity. If you mark anything wrong or miss anything, you will be marked down for it.

3. Feeling The first person should write his/her name and write “feeling” next to his/her name. Under your name, describe in 4 sentences the feeling that the writer is trying to portray in his/her essay.

4. Is it described enough? The second person should write his/her name and write “is it described enough” next to his/her name. Under your name, comment and explain on the paragraphs that need more description. (If you can’t get a full image of what’s being described, then it is not being described enough.)

5. ASPECTS The third person should write his/her name and write “aspects” next to his/her name. Next to each body paragraph, write the aspect that you think is being described.

6. ABSTRACT The fourth person should write his/her name and write “abstract” next to his/her name. Under you name, write the metaphors used throughout their essay.