An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.

1. My routine,
my history...

2. My name is Thalia Lara. I’m 15 years old. I am from São Paulo. I am a
student at CilC and at CEM 12. I live in Ceilândia.

3. In the morning I usually wake up at about 6:10 and I take a shower. I
usually don’t have breakfast. When I have breakfast, I normally have
some milk, coffee, butter and toast. After I have breakfast, I leave my
house and go to CilC. At CilC, I study English.

4. After CilC, I go home
and when I arrive
home... I play with my
dog. Then, at lunch
time, I have some rice,
beans, steak and soda
for lunch. Then I
prepare myself to go
to classes in the
afternoon.

5. In the afternoons, I
go to school. It starts
at 1:00 p.m. There, I
study Geography,
Education and
Sociology... I also talk
to friends and my
classmates. At break
time I have some soda,
popcorn or cake for
snack. When school
finishes at 6:15, I go
home.

6. When I arrive home, I take a bath, I put my sleeping clothes and I hope
my mother prepares dinner. Then I watch a little T.V and I talk to my
parents and sisters. When dinner is ready, we go to the dinner table. After
dinner, we watch o bit of the soap opera and then we go to bed.

7. The end.

8. THE END
Author: Thalia Lara
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: PascalCampion
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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