1. Hello everybody! I’m Ruby, the Red Blood Cell, right now isn’t
a really good time to talk now because I’M SLIDIIINGGG DOWN
TTHHHHE…AAAORTTTTAA! Woof! Just so you know the aorta
transport the cells from the lungs to the heart. Well right now I’m
walking down the left atrium and it’s so big. WOW! It’s huge it like a
highway I see blood cells everywhere. Oops the officer told me to go
to the left ventricle. Right now I’m running down the left ventricle.
There is a lot of pressure down here. OHOH! I’m getting pushed out
the left ventricle now I’m Sliding down the artery. BOOP! Ouch! I
bumped into another Red Blood Cell.
“Oops! Are you alright?” I asked
“Yeah! Are you?” asked the other red blood cell.
“What’s your name?” I asked.
“ I’m Arthur. And you?” Arthur asked.
“ I’m Ruby.” I said.
“Where you going?” he asked.
“To the cells to give them 02,” I said.
“If you want you could come,” I asked.
“Sure,” he said.

2. So off we went into the cells down we were in the capillaries here we
are the cells, but then suddenly I didn’t see Arthur then I started to
worry. So I tried to look for him but I didn’t see him then I tried to
retrace my steps hoping to find him. Then I got pushed out of the
cells because I wanted to find Arthur, but I remembered I have to
give O2 to the cells so I got pushed off into the cells and the cells told
me to take out the trash so I said sure so up I went through the vein,
down the right atrium the n to the right ventricle and up the vein ‘till
suddenly I bumped into something and I saw Arthur.
“I been looking everywhere for you!” he told me.
“ I have been too it’s just I lost you in the cells,” I said.
I was so glad to see Arthur again so I told him that I have to take out
the trash for the cells then I have to go to the market and bring them
something.
“ Okay, If you want I could go with you,” he said.
“ Sure if you want,” I said.
So to the trashcan we went to throw out the trash for the cells. Then
Arthur and I went to the market and bought the things the cells
needed. So when we finished we went down the artery, down the left
atrium, down the left ventricle, slid down the artery, and finally into
the capillaries so then I went down to the cell.
“Thank you so much,” they said.
“ You are very welcome,” I said.
So I introduced them to Arthur.
“ Hey you want to come over on Sunday for a party?” the cells asked.

3. “Sure, sShould I bring something?” I asked.
“ No, I mean you don’t have to” the cells said.
“ You want to come too Arthur?” they asked.
“Sure,” Arthur said.
“Thank you.” Arthur said.
Then Sunday came very fast and Arthur came to my house and we
got ready to go to the cells. It was such an adventurous week.
THE END!
Kristal, you have done great work here! The dialogue makes it sooo interesting
to read and follow! Just be sure to tighten up the details. Can’t wait to read the
final adventure. Please leave the essay in this format. The notebook function
doesn’t allow for the spacing that is necessary. Job well done!