2. nothing at all to do with summer. The late blueberry sprigs were yellowish
from Moominvalley in November by Tove Jansson
3. Description
• Write down words, phrases, or
sentences that describe this
place.
• Don’t think! Just write!
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8. Description of Sound…
The Books. “Tokyo.” The Lemon of Pink (Remastered).
2011
Sigur Rós. “Gobbledigook.” Med sud i eyrum vid spilum endalaust, 2008
9. "International Markets and Contexts." : human emotion photography. N.p., n.d. Web. 14 Sept. 2014. <http://e-chandler-internationalmarkets.blogspot.com.tr/2013/02/human-emotion-photography.html>.
10. "International Markets and Contexts." : human emotion photography. N.p., n.d. Web. 14 Sept. 2014. <http://e-chandler-internationalmarkets.blogspot.com.tr/2013/02/human-emotion-photography.html>.
11. Your Challenge
• Go back to your Brainstorming.
• Choose a moment that you can find opportunities
for description—any kind of description.
• “Try it on.” Try as many different
moments/descriptions as you can. Don’t stay too
long on each…
12. Homework
• Learn and bring to class tomorrow:
• 10 new words that help you write better
description.
Notes de l'éditeur
mountains weightless, like clouds,
soft, sloping,
dark and distant
fading
fog
smoke rings
solid forms of solitary old men
Collect words or phrases or free write about this photograph.
Share.
Cross out any that are redundant. Talk about FRESHNESS.
Sensory images. What do you hear? Feel? smell?
Same thing (if time)
(Same thing…if time) OR Come back to this for kids who don’t know what to write about
SOUNDS. Let the sounds guide you. Collect words or phrases that come to mind as you listen. Don’t THINK.
SHOW DON’T TELL. What physical sensations do you feel? WITHOUT using emotional words.
