1. What have you learned from you audience feedback?
QUESTION 3
2. Pre-Production
We pitched our film ideas to our class to see
Old Treatment
what they think of our initial ideas. We
spoke about promotion and other essential • http://www.slideshare.net/humairaa95/drive2d
aspects using statistics from YouTube and eath
• http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AqelKUAXkS
other online websites. c&feature=player_embedded Treatment Pitch
Good Points: • http://www.slideshare.net/humairaa95/drive2-
• Using a real based story as an outline death-new
New Treatment
• Overall idea is really good
Bad/Improvement Points:
• Use bullying as the reason for the conspiracy
rather then stress
• Think about length- how everything is going
to fit in
• Make it more different to my murder
• Need permission to shoot on a bus so re-
think that idea
Changes made after audience feedback:
• Used bullying as means to stress leading to
conspiracy
• Took bus idea out of film
• Made the film different to My Murder
• Kept length to a certain amount- consider
when shooting
3. Pitching to BTEC Media- Still
We pitched our short film to a
BTEC class in order to gain fresh Editing Pitch to BTEC Media class
comments from students who
hadn’t seen the film before. We http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_em
were still in process of editing bedded&v=4Hvz0HxZ4Zk
the film.
Good Points:
• liked the storyline
• Thought it was a good idea
Bad Points:
• one of the parts didn't make sense to
them so need to make it clearer/re-edit
Changes made after audience feedback:
• Reshoot one or two scenes to make
them clearer
• Finish editing
• Also decided to rethink of a new name
for the film as the current name gives
away too much and we would rather keep
the film as a cliff hanger
4. Survey Monkey
We used survey monkey to gain audience
feedback from other A2 Media classes as
they would be aware of what type of http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/78RB8LD
critical feedback is needed.
Good Points: Survey
• Liked the choice of music monkey
• Good location questions
• Some parts of acting were seen to be
good
Bad/Improvement Points:
• Found parts unclear
• Background noise
If we had more time the changes we could
have made after audience feedback:
• Reshoot noisy areas
• Make things more clearer as this was the
main issue
5. Print Product Feedback
Once we completed our print products we
did audience feedback one last time in order
to make final changes to our print products.
• Magazine Review: The magazine review
needed a little introduction at the start of
the magazine hence this was added in in
the place of the quote. Also the date, page
number, magazine name and issue
number also were needed to be included
into the magazine review.
• Film Poster: The honey trap written on the
side of the poster did not look
professional and gave away too much
hence this was removed from the poster.
Also as we had chosen two film names we
decided to keep fatal intentions rather
than fatal attractions.