1. 
CLASS 8
EWRT 1B

2. AGENDA
 Presentation: Terms List 2
 QHQ Discussion: "Recitatif"
 Lecture: Thesis statements, outlining, using
evidence, introductions.
 In-Class Writing: Essay #2

3. TERMS LIST 2
 Ableism: A pervasive system of discrimination and exclusion that
oppresses people who have mental, emotional, and physical
disabilities.
 Ally: A person who supports marginalized, silenced, or less privileged
groups without actually being a member of those groups. This person
will often directly confront and challenge biphobia, homophobia,
heterosexism, racism, transphobia and other systems of oppression.
 Binary Gender: A system that defines and makes room for two and
only two distinct, natural and opposite genders (i.e. male and female).
These two genders are defined in opposition to each other, such that
masculinity and femininity are seen as mutually exclusive. In this
system, there is no room for any ambiguity or intermingling of gender
traits.

4.  Classism: Bias based on social or economic class.
 Critical Consciousness: a process of continuous self-reflection and action to
discover and uncover how we continue to be shaped by societal assumptions and
power dynamics: an essential tool to help us to recognize, understand and work to
change the social forces that shape our societies an ourselves.
 Cultural Appropriation: The adoption of cultural elements not in one’s own
culture, without full knowledge of or respect for its value within the original
culture.
 Cultural Oppression: Social norms, roles, rituals, language, music, and art that
reflect and reinforce the belief that one social group is superior to anther.
 Dominance: The systematic attitudes and actions of prejudice, superiority, and
self- righteousness of one group (a non-target group) in relation to another (a
target group). Internalized dominance includes the inability of a group or
individual to see privilege as a member of the non-target group.

5. In Groups, Discuss “Recitatif”
Consider the questions below.
 What does the title “Recitatif” mean?
 How does the title fit the story?
 What does” Morrison’s “Recitatif” have in common with Hughes’s “Who’s
Passing for Who?
 What do they share with other works? How are they different?
 “Passing” the poem
 “Passing” the short story
 “The Passing of Grandison”
 The Human Stain
 Discuss any other insights into “passing” that you have realized through our
readings or discussions.

6. 
QHQ Discussion: "Recitatif"
Where do you think the author came up with the idea to name this story “Recitatif”?

7. Racial Ambiguity: Class Difference?
 Why did Morrison choose to leave the girls’ races ambiguous?
 Does this story make the reader reinforce the black/white
racial binary?
 What are the effects of stereotypes?
 Is racial identification still important to a person nowadays?
 What was the bigger conflict, class difference or racism?
 What really IS the big problem nowadays? [race or class]

8. Reunions
 Why is Roberta not as happy to see Twyla as Twyla
is to see Roberta? In other words, why does she act
so shallow?
 What did Roberta gain from being so shallow and
mean to Twyla?

9. Mental Illness?
 Why does Roberta seem so mentally messed up?
 The story hints at the fact that Twyla may have
some form of mental problems, due to her
suppression of certain memories, lack of somewhat
basic knowledge (poor grammar in her story as
well), and irrational behavior at times. What is the
author’s purpose for this?
 Does Twyla or Roberta have a memory problem or
is something more complex than that?

10. Maggie
 Why was the Maggie reference important?
 Why can’t Twyla remember what really happened to Maggie?
 Why did Roberta want Twyla to believe that they beat up Maggie?
 Was Maggie pushed or not?
 Was Maggie really deaf/mute?
 What did happen to Maggie in the end?
 Why does the story end with the mystery of what happened to
Maggie?

11. Comparing Works We Have Read
 What does” Morrison’s “Recitatif” have in common with
Hughes’s “Who’s Passing for Who?
 What do they share with other works? How are they
different?
 “Passing” the poem
 “Passing” the short story
 “The Passing of Grandison”
 The Human Stain
 Do you have any other insights into “passing” that you
have realized through our readings or discussions.

12. Discussion: Does Passing
Reinforce the social Disrupt the social
construct? construct?

13. Reinforcement of Social Construct
 Passing scholar, Leo Spitzer writes that passing was “by and large
a personal solution to discrimination and exclusion. It was an
action that, when accomplished successfully, generally divorced
its individual practitioners from others in the subordinated group,
and in no way challenged the ideology of racism or the system in
which it was rooted. Indeed, because individuals responding to
marginality through . . . passing could be viewed as either
conscious or unwitting accomplices in their own victimization—as
persons consenting to the continuing maintenance of existing
inequalities and exclusionary ideologies—it is certainly
understandable why they often elicited such scathing criticism
from their contemporaries” (Qtd. in Kennedy 11-12)

14. Disruption of Social Construct
 “Passing, however, does pose at least some challenge to racist
regimes. That is why they typically try to prevent it. Fleeing
bondage by passing may have been an individualistic response
to the tyranny of slavery but it did free human beings and
helped to belie the canard that slaves were actually content
with their lot. The successful performance of “white man’s
work” by a passing Negro upset racist claims that blacks are
categorically incapable of doing such work. The extent of the
disturbance is severely limited by the practical necessity of
keeping the passing secret. But under some circumstances a
limited disturbance is about all that can be accomplished”
(Kennedy 12).

15. 
Writing Essay #2

16. The Prompt:
If passing for white will get a fellow better accommodations on the train, better seats
in the theatre, immunity from insults in public places, and may even save his life from
a mob,” only idiots would fail to seize the advantages of passing, at least occasionally if
not permanently.”
Write an essay of four to six pages arguing for or against William Pickens’s statement.
Use support from the texts you have read so far, our discussions, and your own
insights.
Do you agree with Pickens's statement?
If yes, why?
If no, why not?

17. Your Thesis
Your refined thesis will be your position on William
Pickens’s Statement: Do you agree with him or not?
Why or why not? You may refer to Pickens or not in
your thesis. You may forecast your reasons in your
thesis, or you may refer to a broader theme and
provide your reasons in the body of your essay.

18. Write a Working Thesis
You can use these as models or examples
Racial passing is a personal decision, and people should seize the opportunity if they
can in order to defeat racism and discrimination.
Passing is a selfish act that reinforces hierarchy in society, and it should be avoided
despite the opportunities it offers the individual.
While racial passing for personal safety is a necessary and acceptable behavior, passing
in general violates community norms and reinforces the social construct of racism.
While full time passing violates familial and community connections and should be
avoided, the wise person will pass part time to take advantage of the benefits it can
reap, including the opportunities to escape racism and oppression.

19. Refer to your FREECASH chart. What are your “reasons” for agreeing or
disagreeing with the act of passing? Your reasons should connect to your thesis.
Each one should be a topic for at least one body paragraph. Some reasons will
require multiple paragraph explanations.
 Consider your best support for your assertion. This
will likely be from your brainstorming using
FREECASH.
 Find textual evidence to support your position.
 Explain how your examples support your thesis.
 You can also use outside sources if you would like to,
but they are not necessary for this paper.

20. Building Body Paragraphs
 Topic Sentence: This is reason #1 that you agree or disagree.
 Textual Evidence: This is an example from one of the texts that we read.
 Explanation/Analysis: This is where you explain how your example supports
your topic sentence. You can also draw conclusion from inferences.
 Other Evidence: This could be from another primary text, a secondary text, or
from your personal experience.
 Explanation/Analysis: This is where you explain how your example supports
your topic sentence. You can also draw conclusion from inferences.
 Transition: This section moves your reader from your first body paragraph to
your second body paragraph.

21. Introductions
You never get a second chance to make a first impression. The
opening paragraph of your paper will provide your readers with
their initial impressions of your argument, your writing style, and
the overall quality of your work. A vague, disorganized, error-filled,
off-the-wall, or boring introduction will probably create a negative
impression. On the other hand, a concise, engaging, and well-
written introduction will start your readers off thinking highly of
you, your analytical skills, your writing, and your paper.

22. Start by thinking about the
question you are trying to answer:
Write an essay of four to six pages arguing for or against William Pickens’s statement:
"If passing for white will get a fellow better accommodations on the train, better seats in the
theatre, immunity from insults in public places, and may even save his life from a mob," wrote
William Pickens, "only idiots would fail to seize the advantages of passing, at least occasionally if
not permanently"
Your entire essay will be a response to this question, and your
introduction is the first step toward that end. Your direct answer
to the assigned question will be your thesis, and your thesis will
be included in your introduction, so it is a good idea to use the
question as a jumping off point.

23. Open with an attention grabber. Consider
these options:
• A provocative quotation: Consider a line or two from one of the texts we
read. Then give some background about passing.
• An intriguing example of passing: Provide a situation or two in which a
person might be inclined to pass.
• A puzzling scenario: Imagine a scene that makes a reader consider the
consequences or benefits of passing.
• A vivid and perhaps unexpected anecdote: Open with a short story about
a successful or failed passing attempt.
• Find common ground with your reader: Offer a contemporary example of
passing (maybe a humorous one, even) and then explain the more
reasons for passing in this earlier time period.

24.  Avoid statements like "In this paper, I will argue
that racial passing destabilizes the social
construction of race and is therefore beneficial to
society."
 While this sentence points toward your main
argument, it isn't especially interesting. It might be
more effective to say what you mean in a
declarative sentence: “Racial passing destabilizes
the social construction of race and is therefore
beneficial to society."
 It is much more convincing to tell your readers
that than to tell them that you are going to say
that it does. Assert your main argument
confidently. After all, you can't expect your reader
to believe it if it doesn't sound like you believe it!

25. Introductions to Avoid
1. The restated question introduction: Twists the question to take up space in the
introduction.
2. The place holder introduction: Offers several vague sentences that don’t really say
much.
3. The Webster's Dictionary introduction. This introduction begins by giving the dictionary
definition of one or more of the words in the assigned question.
4. The "dawn of man" introduction. This kind of introduction generally makes broad,
sweeping statements about the relevance of this topic since the beginning of time.
5. The book report introduction. This introduction gives the name and author of the book
you are writing about, tells what the book is about, and offers other basic facts about
the book.

26. Let’s Try to Write an Introduction or Two
 An intriguing example of  A vivid and perhaps
passing: Provide a situation unexpected anecdote: Open
or two in which a person with a short story about a
might be inclined to pass. successful or failed passing
attempt.
 A provocative quotation:
Consider a line or two from  Find common ground with
one of the texts we read. your reader: Offer a
contemporary example of
 A puzzling scenario: Imagine passing (maybe a humorous
a scene that makes a reader one, even) and then explain
consider the consequences the more reasons for passing
or benefits of passing. in this earlier time period.

27. Possible Outline
Introduction:
Thesis: This will likely be near the end of your introduction
Multiple Body Paragraphs supporting your thesis: The topic sentences of your body paragraphs
(probably situated fairly early in the paragraph) should connect directly to your thesis. You should use the
following rhetorical strategies to support your topic sentence:
define (describe and/or characterize unfamiliar terms, situations, or events)
classify (briefly distinguish between types: full time versus part time or kinds of passing)
exemplify (provide examples from primary or secondary texts)
analyze (explore and/or evaluate, particularly in terms of the connections of the
examples to your reasons or thesis)
explain (give details about) the connection between your example and your assertions.
conclude (provide a logical conclusion for your readers)
Transition (prepare your reader for the next paragraph.
Counter Argument: Anticipate your readers questions or doubts. Will will discuss this in our next class.
Conclusion: We will discuss this in our next class.

28. Writing
Sketch out a rough outline.
Intro: What kind?
Thesis: Write out a working thesis or your refined thesis
Body 1: One of your strongest arguments supporting your thesis.
support/example
Body 2: A second paragraph explaining your first reason.
Body 3: Another reason
support/example
Body 3: Another reason
support/example
Body 4:One of your strongest arguments supporting your thesis.
support/example
Counterargument:
Conclusion:

29. HOMEWORK
 Reading: Begin Stone Butch Blues (1-65)
 Post #12: Post partial draft: Introduction, Thesis,
Minimum three body paragraphs (with topic
sentences, evidence, explanation, and analysis)
 Studying: Vocab/Terms