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AGENDA
 Teams 1
 Discussion: Readings 16-38
 Discussion: The Hunger Games: Stories
 Presentation: Essay #2
 In-Class Writing: page 46 SMG
1. Beginning with a quotation/transitioning to
your remembered event.
2. Vivid presentation of a place: Using sensory
details: 643-648
2. The teams will change on or near essay due dates.
3. You must change at least 50% of your team after
each project is completed.
4. You may never be on a team with the same person
more than twice.
5. You may never have a new team composed of more
than 50% of any prior team.
1. We will often use teams to
earn participation points.
Your teams can be made
up of 4 or 5 people.
 Points will be earned
for correct answers
to questions,
meaningful
contributions to the
discussion, and the
willingness to share
your work. Each
team will track their
own points, but
cheating leads to
death (or loss of 25
participation points).
 Answers, comments,
and questions must
be posed in a
manner that
promotes learning.
Those who speak out
of turn or with
maliciousness will
not receive points for
their teams.
At the end of each class,
you will turn in a point
sheet with the names of
everyone in your group
and your accumulated
points for the day.
It is your responsibility
to make the sheet, track
the points, and turn it
in.
Sit near your team
members in class to
facilitate ease of group
discussions
Your First
Group!
 Get into groups of
four. (1-2 minutes)
 If you can’t find a
group, please raise
your hand.
 Once your group is
established, choose
one person to be the
keeper of the points.
 Write down
members’ names
 Keep track of
points
 Turn in your sheet
at the end of the
class period.
The Hunger Games
 Katniss Everdeen
 Gale Hawthorne
 Peeta Mellark
 Prim Everdeen
 Mrs. Everdeen
 Rue
 Haymitch Abernathy
 Cinna
 Effie Trinket
In your groups, make a list of one or more important experiences each of these
characters has. What kind of emotion does each provoke? Can you relate to any
one of these experiences?
In your groups, discuss your homework posts
concerning analyzing writing strategies
(Post #3): 6-8 minutes.
Annie Dillard “An American
Childhood”
Jean Brandt “Calling Home”
1. How does Brandt set the stage for her story? How does she try to
get you to identify with her?
2. What is your first impression of Brandt? What is the author’s
attitude toward her younger self?
3. Point out active verbs that enliven the text. What is the effect of all
these action Verbs? (particularly par 3-5).
4. Look for places in the essay where Brandt discloses her feelings at
the time the event occurred. What do you learn about Brandt from
her remembered thoughts in pars. 5–8?
5. How does your understanding of Brandt deepen or change
through what she writes in pars. 16–18?
6. Note the dialogue. What techniques can you identify? How does
the dialogue in pars. 21–24 add to the drama?
7. What is the effect of interweaving storytelling and describing with
remembering thoughts and feelings in par. 35?
8. How, and how well, does this ending work? Consider it in
conjunction with the introduction.
In your groups, discuss the following questions: 5 minutes
The Writing Assignment
 Using The Hunger Games as your starting point,
write an essay about an event in your life that will
engage readers and that will, at the same time, help
them understand the significance of the event. Tell
your story dramatically and vividly in three to five
pages.
 Format: MLA style (For help, see “MLA
Formatting” on the website”). Please give your
paper an original title; don't underline or put
quotation marks around your own title.
The Goal: Writing a Good Introduction
The Strategy:
 Choose a provocative or interesting quotation (four typed lines or
more) from The Hunger Games and integrate it into your
introduction. You can start with the quotation, or you can work it
in after a few sentences.
 Summarize what is happening in the novel at the point of your
quotation, and then explain the context (particular setting) for the
quotation. This is important because it sets up the connection to
your own experience.
 Then, write a transition paragraph, making a connection between
the quotation and the event in your life. Your thesis sentence will
likely be the sentence in which you clearly make that connection
(we will talk more about theses in our next meeting).
Before the opening ceremonies, Katniss meets with her stylist, Cinna, to prepare. Cinna
presses a button and a fancy meal of “Chicken and chunks of oranges cooked in a creamy sauce
laid on a bed of pearly white grain, tiny green peas and onions, rolls shaped like flowers, and for
dessert, a pudding the color of honey” appears (65). Katniss thinks about how difficult it would be
to get a meal like this in District 12:
What must it be like, I wonder, to live in a world where food appears at the press of a
button? How would I spend the hours I now commit to combing the woods for
sustenance if it were so easy to come by? What do they do all day, these people in the
Capitol, besides decorating their bodies and waiting around for a new shipment of
tributes to roll in and die for their entertainment?
I look up and find Cinna’s eyes trained on mine. ‘How despicable we must seem to
you,’ he says. (65)
Katniss doesn’t respond to Cinna’s statement, but she agrees in her head. “He’s right, though. The
whole rotten lot of them is despicable” (65).
Although our world does not really consist of a Capitol and many districts, there are still some
people who live more comfortably than others. For people like me who live in privilege, life is
easy. Food is readily available if I want to eat. Outside of school, I don’t really have many
responsibilities. I don’t have to worry about how I will survive day to day. My family has told me
on many occasions to think about how lucky I am to live the way I do. In other countries, life is
hard. In Africa, children starve to death as a result of famine and poverty. People my age in some
countries are working more than my parents do. Katniss’s disgust for the extravagant Capitol is
similar to the disgust I felt for myself when I listened to an account of one man’s visit to factories in
China.
How Despicable We Must Seem
1. Choose a provocative or interesting quotation (four typed lines or more) from
The Hunger Games that you can connect to an experience in your own life.
2. Summarize what is happening in the novel at the point of your quotation.
3. Then, write a transition paragraph, making a connection between the quotation
and the event in your life.
4. Now make a quick narrative ladder:
 Where and when did your event
take place?
 Setting
 Rising action
 Climax
 Resolution
The Goal: Create A Vivid Presentation of Places
 Recreate the time and place of the event
 Ground readers in specifics:
• When? Christmas morning; one day in late fall, Saturday night
• Where? At a 7-11 in San Jose, at my Aunt Helen’s Easter party, In the back alley
of a club in Sunnyvale
 Name specific objects
• White, spherical snowball
• City clothes
• Translucent skin
• Dirty sidewalk
The Strategy: Listing Key
Places
 Make a list of all the places where the event occurred,
skipping some space after each entry on your list.
In the space after each entry on your list, make
some notes describing each place. What do you
see (except people for now)? What objects
stand out? Are thy large or small, green or
brown, square or oblong? What sounds do you
hear? Do you detect any smells? Does any taste
come to mind? Any textures?
Writing Tips
 Use present tense when describing the events in a novel
or film or story: “Katniss volunteers” or “Haymitch is
drinking heavily.”
 Your thesis for this paper will be the transition sentence
from the event in The Hunger Games to your own
narrative event: “Katniss’s disgust for the extravagant
Capitol is similar to the disgust I felt for myself when I
listened to an account of one man’s visit to factories in
China.”
 Use chronological order to tell your story.
 Use past tense to describe the event(s) in your life: “I
was camping with my family up in Yosemite.”
HOMEWORK
 Read: HG through chapter 9.
 Post #5: finish and post your
in-class writing
1. Beginning with a
quotation/transitioning to your
remembered event.
2. Vivid presentation of a place:
Using sensory details: 643-648

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Class 5 n

  • 1.
  • 2. AGENDA  Teams 1  Discussion: Readings 16-38  Discussion: The Hunger Games: Stories  Presentation: Essay #2  In-Class Writing: page 46 SMG 1. Beginning with a quotation/transitioning to your remembered event. 2. Vivid presentation of a place: Using sensory details: 643-648
  • 3. 2. The teams will change on or near essay due dates. 3. You must change at least 50% of your team after each project is completed. 4. You may never be on a team with the same person more than twice. 5. You may never have a new team composed of more than 50% of any prior team. 1. We will often use teams to earn participation points. Your teams can be made up of 4 or 5 people.
  • 4.  Points will be earned for correct answers to questions, meaningful contributions to the discussion, and the willingness to share your work. Each team will track their own points, but cheating leads to death (or loss of 25 participation points).  Answers, comments, and questions must be posed in a manner that promotes learning. Those who speak out of turn or with maliciousness will not receive points for their teams.
  • 5. At the end of each class, you will turn in a point sheet with the names of everyone in your group and your accumulated points for the day. It is your responsibility to make the sheet, track the points, and turn it in. Sit near your team members in class to facilitate ease of group discussions
  • 6. Your First Group!  Get into groups of four. (1-2 minutes)  If you can’t find a group, please raise your hand.  Once your group is established, choose one person to be the keeper of the points.  Write down members’ names  Keep track of points  Turn in your sheet at the end of the class period.
  • 7. The Hunger Games  Katniss Everdeen  Gale Hawthorne  Peeta Mellark  Prim Everdeen  Mrs. Everdeen  Rue  Haymitch Abernathy  Cinna  Effie Trinket In your groups, make a list of one or more important experiences each of these characters has. What kind of emotion does each provoke? Can you relate to any one of these experiences?
  • 8. In your groups, discuss your homework posts concerning analyzing writing strategies (Post #3): 6-8 minutes.
  • 9. Annie Dillard “An American Childhood”
  • 10.
  • 11.
  • 12. Jean Brandt “Calling Home” 1. How does Brandt set the stage for her story? How does she try to get you to identify with her? 2. What is your first impression of Brandt? What is the author’s attitude toward her younger self? 3. Point out active verbs that enliven the text. What is the effect of all these action Verbs? (particularly par 3-5). 4. Look for places in the essay where Brandt discloses her feelings at the time the event occurred. What do you learn about Brandt from her remembered thoughts in pars. 5–8? 5. How does your understanding of Brandt deepen or change through what she writes in pars. 16–18? 6. Note the dialogue. What techniques can you identify? How does the dialogue in pars. 21–24 add to the drama? 7. What is the effect of interweaving storytelling and describing with remembering thoughts and feelings in par. 35? 8. How, and how well, does this ending work? Consider it in conjunction with the introduction. In your groups, discuss the following questions: 5 minutes
  • 13.
  • 14. The Writing Assignment  Using The Hunger Games as your starting point, write an essay about an event in your life that will engage readers and that will, at the same time, help them understand the significance of the event. Tell your story dramatically and vividly in three to five pages.  Format: MLA style (For help, see “MLA Formatting” on the website”). Please give your paper an original title; don't underline or put quotation marks around your own title.
  • 15. The Goal: Writing a Good Introduction The Strategy:  Choose a provocative or interesting quotation (four typed lines or more) from The Hunger Games and integrate it into your introduction. You can start with the quotation, or you can work it in after a few sentences.  Summarize what is happening in the novel at the point of your quotation, and then explain the context (particular setting) for the quotation. This is important because it sets up the connection to your own experience.  Then, write a transition paragraph, making a connection between the quotation and the event in your life. Your thesis sentence will likely be the sentence in which you clearly make that connection (we will talk more about theses in our next meeting).
  • 16. Before the opening ceremonies, Katniss meets with her stylist, Cinna, to prepare. Cinna presses a button and a fancy meal of “Chicken and chunks of oranges cooked in a creamy sauce laid on a bed of pearly white grain, tiny green peas and onions, rolls shaped like flowers, and for dessert, a pudding the color of honey” appears (65). Katniss thinks about how difficult it would be to get a meal like this in District 12: What must it be like, I wonder, to live in a world where food appears at the press of a button? How would I spend the hours I now commit to combing the woods for sustenance if it were so easy to come by? What do they do all day, these people in the Capitol, besides decorating their bodies and waiting around for a new shipment of tributes to roll in and die for their entertainment? I look up and find Cinna’s eyes trained on mine. ‘How despicable we must seem to you,’ he says. (65) Katniss doesn’t respond to Cinna’s statement, but she agrees in her head. “He’s right, though. The whole rotten lot of them is despicable” (65). Although our world does not really consist of a Capitol and many districts, there are still some people who live more comfortably than others. For people like me who live in privilege, life is easy. Food is readily available if I want to eat. Outside of school, I don’t really have many responsibilities. I don’t have to worry about how I will survive day to day. My family has told me on many occasions to think about how lucky I am to live the way I do. In other countries, life is hard. In Africa, children starve to death as a result of famine and poverty. People my age in some countries are working more than my parents do. Katniss’s disgust for the extravagant Capitol is similar to the disgust I felt for myself when I listened to an account of one man’s visit to factories in China. How Despicable We Must Seem
  • 17. 1. Choose a provocative or interesting quotation (four typed lines or more) from The Hunger Games that you can connect to an experience in your own life. 2. Summarize what is happening in the novel at the point of your quotation. 3. Then, write a transition paragraph, making a connection between the quotation and the event in your life. 4. Now make a quick narrative ladder:  Where and when did your event take place?  Setting  Rising action  Climax  Resolution
  • 18. The Goal: Create A Vivid Presentation of Places  Recreate the time and place of the event  Ground readers in specifics: • When? Christmas morning; one day in late fall, Saturday night • Where? At a 7-11 in San Jose, at my Aunt Helen’s Easter party, In the back alley of a club in Sunnyvale  Name specific objects • White, spherical snowball • City clothes • Translucent skin • Dirty sidewalk
  • 19. The Strategy: Listing Key Places  Make a list of all the places where the event occurred, skipping some space after each entry on your list. In the space after each entry on your list, make some notes describing each place. What do you see (except people for now)? What objects stand out? Are thy large or small, green or brown, square or oblong? What sounds do you hear? Do you detect any smells? Does any taste come to mind? Any textures?
  • 20. Writing Tips  Use present tense when describing the events in a novel or film or story: “Katniss volunteers” or “Haymitch is drinking heavily.”  Your thesis for this paper will be the transition sentence from the event in The Hunger Games to your own narrative event: “Katniss’s disgust for the extravagant Capitol is similar to the disgust I felt for myself when I listened to an account of one man’s visit to factories in China.”  Use chronological order to tell your story.  Use past tense to describe the event(s) in your life: “I was camping with my family up in Yosemite.”
  • 21. HOMEWORK  Read: HG through chapter 9.  Post #5: finish and post your in-class writing 1. Beginning with a quotation/transitioning to your remembered event. 2. Vivid presentation of a place: Using sensory details: 643-648