2. Production name BREAK
Director Isobel Bayliss Date Wednesday 3rd November
Camera Operator Lauren Murray & Danielle Treanor Location London Road
Scene Take Duration Description Quality
of video
(1=good,
3= poor)
Usable
(yes/no)
Notes
5
(00006)
1 6 seconds Establishing shot of location. 1 Yes
6 seconds
This is a clear establishing shot setting the scene, letting the
audience aware of where the characters are. The camera
movement is smooth and clear.
5
(00007)
1 3 seconds Low angle of Kelly (Danielle)
shouting aggressively at Rosie
(Keely).
2 Yes
2 seconds
It is a clear shot with the correct dialogue; however the end
seconds would need to be cut, due to the actress laughing and not
following the script.
5
(00008)
2 2 seconds Low angle of Kelly (Danielle)
shouting aggressively at Rosie
(Keely).
2 Yes
1 second
It is a clear shot with the correct dialogue; however the end
seconds would need to be cut, due to the actress laughing and not
following the script.
5
(00009)
3 11 seconds Low angle of Kelly (Danielle)
shouting aggressively at Rosie
(Keely).
1 Yes
7 – 11
seconds
The beginning will need cutting; however the last 4 seconds were
perfect. It was a clear shot and followed the correct dialogue on
the script.
5
(00010)
1 5 seconds High angle of Rosie (Keely) asking
Kelly (Danielle) to stop.
2 No It is clear the actress is smiling; therefore it needed to be re-filmed.
5
(00011)
2 2 seconds High angle of Rosie (Keely) asking
Kelly (Danielle) to stop.
1 Yes
2 seconds
The dialogue is correct and the shot is clear and precise. The
camera is also positioned in a nice way.
5
(00012)
1 3 seconds Wide shot of the girls fighting. 3 No The action is not realistic.
5
(00013)
2 6 seconds Wide shot of the girls fighting. 1 Yes
6 seconds
The dialogue is correct and the action looks more realistic.
1
(00014)
1 5 seconds Audio of heavy breathing 1 Yes
5 seconds
The audio recording worked well and was not disrupted.
3. 5
(00016)
1 15
seconds
Close up of Rosie’s (Keely) eyes
opening.
1 Yes
14 – 15
seconds
The whole beginning will need to be cut as it is not
needed but the eyes opening was captured in great
timing.
5
(00017)
2 15
seconds
Close up of Rosie’s (Keely) eyes
opening.
1 Yes
13 – 15
seconds
The whole beginning will need to be cut as it is not needed
but the eyes opening was captured in great timing and
lasts longer than the first clip.
5
(00018)
1 6 seconds Wide shot of the girls pushing
Rosie (Keely) around.
2 Yes
3 seconds
The first 3 seconds where successful and clear; however
the end 3 seconds is not necessary.
4
(00020)
1 4 seconds Low angle of Kelly (Danielle)
asking to speak to Rosie (Keely)
3 No Danielle is not in the shot, the audience will be unable to
see her.
4
(00022)
2 6 seconds Low angle of Kelly (Danielle)
asking to speak to Rosie (Keely)
2 Yes
6 seconds
Although her eyes are out of the shot, it is slightly effective
as you can hear the anger in her voice and the movement
of her lips. This is a useable shot.
4
(00029)
1 9 seconds Low/Mid angle of Kelly
(Danielle) and her Gang Stacey
(Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly).
3 No The dialogue was correct but one of the characters is not
clearly in the clip, meaning it is unable to be used.
4
(00030)
2 7 seconds Low/Mid angle of Kelly
(Danielle) and her Gang Stacey
(Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly).
1 Yes
7 seconds
The dialogue was correct, with the characters positioned in
a perfect format with clear footage. This was a successfully
shot.
4
(00031)
1 6 seconds High angle of Rosie (Keely) and
her friend Kate (Lauren)
replying to Kelly (Danielle).
1 Yes
6 seconds
The dialogue is correct and the shot is clear.
4
(00035)
1 8 seconds Handheld camera movement
and a point of view shot od
Kelly (Danielle) storming down
the stairs.
3 No The mice en scene is poor as the actors are apparent in the
shot, meaning it cannot be used.
4
(00037)
2 9 seconds Handheld camera movement
and a point of view shot od
Kelly (Danielle) storming down
the stairs.
2 Yes
9 seconds
The mice en scene is now improved, meaning the shot is
now useable.
2
(00038)
1 6 seconds Establishing shot of the location,
the bedroom.
1 Yes
6 seconds
The camera movement is smooth and the actors are in
character making it feel realistic.
4. 2
(00039)
1 2 seconds Over the shoulder shot of Kelly
(Danielle) bitching about Rosie
(Keely).
3 No The microphone is in the shot, meaning it cannot be used.
2
(00041)
2 2 seconds Over the shoulder shot of Kelly
(Danielle) bitching about Rosie
(Keely).
1 Yes
2 seconds
The dialogue is now clear with no disruption in the shot, all
actresses are in character.
2
(00045)
1 5 seconds Two shot of the two girls Stacey
(Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly)
talking to Kelly (Danielle).
3 No The shot would have been successful however a phone
goes off in the background, disrupting the clip.
2
(00048)
2 6 seconds Two shot of the two girls Stacey
(Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly)
talking to Kelly (Danielle).
1 Yes
6 seconds
The shot is clear and the dialogue is correct, making it
useable.
2
(00053)
1 4 seconds Low angle of Kelly (Danielle)
stating her hate for Rosie (Keely).
2 Yes
4 seconds
This is a good clear shot with no disruptions however the
actress is not fully in character; therefore we decided to
film it again.
2
(00057)
2 4 seconds Low angle of Kelly (Danielle)
stating her hate for Rosie (Keely).
1 Yes
4 seconds
This is a good clear shot with no disruptions and the
actress was now in good character which created a better
effect.
2
(00058)
1 22
seconds
Focus pull of the pills 1 Yes There are several parts of the focus pull which could be
used; therefore part of it will need cutting.
2
(00059)
1 8 seconds Mid shot and panning of
Chantelle (Molly) passing Kelly’s
(Danielle) pills to Stacey (Isobel)
2 Yes The start of the recording shows another actress in the
background. This would need cutting.
3
(00063)
1 37
seconds
Over the shoulder shot of Kelly
(Danielle) experiencing a
personality change.
Also involves a close up of her
hands.
2 Yes
0-5
seconds
20-21
seconds
33-37
seconds
The parts which can be used are smooth and contain the
correct dialogue. However there are several parts in
between which will need to be cut as they are not necessary
and do not follow the scrip. The camera movement in those
parts is also very shaky and not consistent.
3
(00064)
1 13
seconds
Mid shot of Kelly (Danielle)
experiencing a personality
change.
Also involves panning.
1 Yes
0-3
seconds
4-13
seconds
The movement (panning) is smooth and consistent;
however in the 4th second of the clip you can hear the
camera operator speaking in the background. This will
need cutting. Apart from that the dialogue is correct.
5. 3
(00065)
1 7
seconds
High angle shot of Kelly
(Danielle) feeling vulnerable
with her head in her hands.
2 Yes
4
seconds
After 4 seconds there is a dog bark in the background;
therefore this will need to be cut.
2
(00066)
1 2
seconds
Long shot of Kelly (Danielle)
opening the door.
2 No The clip ends suddenly, meaning the action was not fully
filmed.
2
(00067)
2 3
seconds
Long shot of Kelly (Danielle)
opening the door.
1 Yes
3 seconds
The clip was fully filmed, now able to see Kelly entering
the room.