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The Zen of Headline Writing:
Learn the easiest way for any marketer to drive a
conversion increase
Flint McGlaughlin
Managing Director
MECLABS Institute
@FlintMcGlaughlin
Business Software Suite
#1 On-Demand. 6459+ World Clients
Award-Winning Solution. Free Trial
www.XXXXXXXXXX.com/Business
54%Conversion
21%Conversion
97%Conversion
109%Conversion
31%Conversion
124%Conversion
201%Conversion
29%Conversion
15%Conversion
100%Conversion
21%Conversion137%Conversion
63%Conversion
189%Conversion
104%Conversion
40%Conversion
@FlintMcGlaughlin
Business Software Suite
#1 On-Demand. 6459+ World Clients
Award-Winning Solution. Free Trial
www.XXXXXXXXXX.com/Business
54%Conversion
21%Conversion
97%Conversion
109%Conversion
31%Conversion
124%Conversion
201%Conversion
29%Conversion
15%Conversion
100%Conversion
21%Conversion137%Conversion
63%Conversion
189%Conversion
104%Conversion
40%Conversion
• MORE THAN 20 YEARS OF RESEARCH
• OVER 1 BILLION EMAILS
• 1,300 MAJOR EXPERIMENTS
• 20,000 SALES PATHS TESTED
• HUNDREDS OF PUBLICATIONS AND
CONFERENCES
• 5 MILLION PHONE CALLS RECORDED AND
ANALYZED
• 500,000 CONVERSATIONS WITH
DECISION-MAKERS ANALYZED
Meclabs.com/QuickWinIntensive
“We spend too much time working on the
call-to-action and not enough time working
on the headline. No one gets to the CTA if
they don’t get through the top of the page.
— Flint McGlaughlin, CEO, MECLABS
The headline is the molecular unit of optimization. If
you can write a good headline, you already have a
good understanding of the fundamental principles of
marketing. Moreover, a headline represents one of the
best ways for the marketer to achieve a major lift with
a (dev-free) minor change.
In this video, Flint McGlaughlin answers this question.
WATCH THE VIDEO NOW
1. Select a key headline from
your own collateral.
@FlintMcGlaughlin
104%
Relative Increase
@FlintMcGlaughlin
2. We need to challenge our
understanding of the
headline and its importance.
The headline is the molecular unit of optimization. If you can write a good
headline, you already have a good understanding of the fundamental principles.1
A headline represents one of the best ways for the marketer to achieve M4L.2
Every marketer can write good headlines. We tend to think of ourselves as
specialists, but there’s a common skills core that we should all master.
3
We spend too much time working on the call-to-action, and not enough time
working on the headline. No one gets to the CTA if they don’t get through the
top of the page.
4
@FlintMcGlaughlin
321%
Relative Increase
@FlintMcGlaughlin
3. We need to employ a step-
by-step framework.
The third division is adjectives, adverbs, and prep. phrases.
The first division is subject-predicate: and there must be a
complete thought, even if the subject is “understood.”
The second division is modifiers vs. objects/nouns.
Clarify your objective to initiate connection and drive conversation.1
Divide the headline into its constituent elements.2
@FlintMcGlaughlin
[Headline Here]
Join the SurveySpot Community
and Have Your Opinions Count
Set Up Your FREE Account
Today and Start Earning
Money!
Get Rewarded for Your Opinion
Take Online Surveys From
Home and Win Cash &
Prizes
1. Join the SurveySpot Community
and Have Your Opinions Count
3. Set Up Your FREE Account
Today and Start Earning Money!
2. Get Rewarded for Your Opinion
4. Take Online Surveys From Home
and Win Cash & Prizes
? Which headline won?
@FlintMcGlaughlin
Get Paid to Take FREE Surveys
Here’s Your First Survey, and an Invitation to Join Our Research Community
Get Paid to Fill Out Online Surveys
Get Rewarded for Your Opinion
Surveys – Quick, Easy and FREE
Win Cash & Prizes for Online Surveys
Set Up Your FREE Account Today and Start Earning Money!
You’re Invited to Join the SurveySpot Community and to Earn Rewards For Your Opinions
Join the SurveySpot Community and Have Your Opinions Count
Take Online Surveys From Home and Win Cash & Prizes
10.44%
8.87%
7.46%
7.23%
5.67%
5.12%
5.03%
4.24%
3.36%
2.95%
@FlintMcGlaughlin
Why did these
headlines perform
in this order?
?
The third division is adjectives, adverbs, and prep. phrases.
The first division is subject-predicate: and there must be a
complete thought, even if the subject is “understood.”
The second division is modifiers vs. objects/nouns.
Clarify your objective to initiate connection and drive conversation.1
Divide the headline into its constituent elements.2
Identify the focus of attention.3
Determine the point sequence.4
@FlintMcGlaughlin
MECLABS.com/QuickWinIntensive
“We spend too much time working on the
call-to-action and not enough time working
on the headline. No one gets to the CTA if
they don’t get through the top of the page.
— Flint McGlaughlin, CEO, MECLABS
The headline is the molecular unit of optimization. If
you can write a good headline, you already have a
good understanding of the fundamental principles of
marketing. Moreover, a headline represents one of the
best ways for the marketer to achieve a major lift with
a (dev-free) minor change.
In this video, Flint McGlaughlin answers this question.
WATCH THE VIDEO NOW

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The Zen of Headline Writing

  • 1. The Zen of Headline Writing: Learn the easiest way for any marketer to drive a conversion increase Flint McGlaughlin Managing Director MECLABS Institute
  • 2. @FlintMcGlaughlin Business Software Suite #1 On-Demand. 6459+ World Clients Award-Winning Solution. Free Trial www.XXXXXXXXXX.com/Business 54%Conversion 21%Conversion 97%Conversion 109%Conversion 31%Conversion 124%Conversion 201%Conversion 29%Conversion 15%Conversion 100%Conversion 21%Conversion137%Conversion 63%Conversion 189%Conversion 104%Conversion 40%Conversion
  • 3. @FlintMcGlaughlin Business Software Suite #1 On-Demand. 6459+ World Clients Award-Winning Solution. Free Trial www.XXXXXXXXXX.com/Business 54%Conversion 21%Conversion 97%Conversion 109%Conversion 31%Conversion 124%Conversion 201%Conversion 29%Conversion 15%Conversion 100%Conversion 21%Conversion137%Conversion 63%Conversion 189%Conversion 104%Conversion 40%Conversion • MORE THAN 20 YEARS OF RESEARCH • OVER 1 BILLION EMAILS • 1,300 MAJOR EXPERIMENTS • 20,000 SALES PATHS TESTED • HUNDREDS OF PUBLICATIONS AND CONFERENCES • 5 MILLION PHONE CALLS RECORDED AND ANALYZED • 500,000 CONVERSATIONS WITH DECISION-MAKERS ANALYZED Meclabs.com/QuickWinIntensive
  • 4. “We spend too much time working on the call-to-action and not enough time working on the headline. No one gets to the CTA if they don’t get through the top of the page. — Flint McGlaughlin, CEO, MECLABS The headline is the molecular unit of optimization. If you can write a good headline, you already have a good understanding of the fundamental principles of marketing. Moreover, a headline represents one of the best ways for the marketer to achieve a major lift with a (dev-free) minor change. In this video, Flint McGlaughlin answers this question. WATCH THE VIDEO NOW
  • 5. 1. Select a key headline from your own collateral.
  • 8. 2. We need to challenge our understanding of the headline and its importance.
  • 9. The headline is the molecular unit of optimization. If you can write a good headline, you already have a good understanding of the fundamental principles.1 A headline represents one of the best ways for the marketer to achieve M4L.2 Every marketer can write good headlines. We tend to think of ourselves as specialists, but there’s a common skills core that we should all master. 3 We spend too much time working on the call-to-action, and not enough time working on the headline. No one gets to the CTA if they don’t get through the top of the page. 4 @FlintMcGlaughlin
  • 11. 3. We need to employ a step- by-step framework.
  • 12. The third division is adjectives, adverbs, and prep. phrases. The first division is subject-predicate: and there must be a complete thought, even if the subject is “understood.” The second division is modifiers vs. objects/nouns. Clarify your objective to initiate connection and drive conversation.1 Divide the headline into its constituent elements.2 @FlintMcGlaughlin
  • 13. [Headline Here] Join the SurveySpot Community and Have Your Opinions Count Set Up Your FREE Account Today and Start Earning Money! Get Rewarded for Your Opinion Take Online Surveys From Home and Win Cash & Prizes 1. Join the SurveySpot Community and Have Your Opinions Count 3. Set Up Your FREE Account Today and Start Earning Money! 2. Get Rewarded for Your Opinion 4. Take Online Surveys From Home and Win Cash & Prizes ? Which headline won? @FlintMcGlaughlin
  • 14. Get Paid to Take FREE Surveys Here’s Your First Survey, and an Invitation to Join Our Research Community Get Paid to Fill Out Online Surveys Get Rewarded for Your Opinion Surveys – Quick, Easy and FREE Win Cash & Prizes for Online Surveys Set Up Your FREE Account Today and Start Earning Money! You’re Invited to Join the SurveySpot Community and to Earn Rewards For Your Opinions Join the SurveySpot Community and Have Your Opinions Count Take Online Surveys From Home and Win Cash & Prizes 10.44% 8.87% 7.46% 7.23% 5.67% 5.12% 5.03% 4.24% 3.36% 2.95% @FlintMcGlaughlin
  • 15. Why did these headlines perform in this order? ?
  • 16. The third division is adjectives, adverbs, and prep. phrases. The first division is subject-predicate: and there must be a complete thought, even if the subject is “understood.” The second division is modifiers vs. objects/nouns. Clarify your objective to initiate connection and drive conversation.1 Divide the headline into its constituent elements.2 Identify the focus of attention.3 Determine the point sequence.4 @FlintMcGlaughlin
  • 18. “We spend too much time working on the call-to-action and not enough time working on the headline. No one gets to the CTA if they don’t get through the top of the page. — Flint McGlaughlin, CEO, MECLABS The headline is the molecular unit of optimization. If you can write a good headline, you already have a good understanding of the fundamental principles of marketing. Moreover, a headline represents one of the best ways for the marketer to achieve a major lift with a (dev-free) minor change. In this video, Flint McGlaughlin answers this question. WATCH THE VIDEO NOW