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Strengths:
 Contrast of red background and black
  and white image
- subject stands out

 image takes up most of the room,
  leaving less empty space

Weaknesses:
 Too much texts with too many
  different fonts
  - loses focus on main story
 Reduce the amount of coverlines
 Keep the in a fixed area instead of
  all over the place

   And the image could then be
    enlarged
Strengths
 Clean and neat

 Focus on the boys

 Put on set places
  - more special
 Description

 A few pictures with a few texts



Weaknesses
 A little bit too wordy
 Too much description
 Less articles
 Slightly shorter description
Strengths
 Keeping the black and white theme

 Matches studio lighting
  - professional
 Images are cut, framed and positioned
  - not just square pictures as usual
 Attractive use of colour



Weaknesses
 Two pages look too different
  - unlinked
   Could be a large photograph going
    across both page
-   Show connection
-   Look less isolated and different
    from each other which are about
    the same context

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Results of interview

  • 1.
  • 2. Strengths:  Contrast of red background and black and white image - subject stands out  image takes up most of the room, leaving less empty space Weaknesses:  Too much texts with too many different fonts - loses focus on main story
  • 3.  Reduce the amount of coverlines  Keep the in a fixed area instead of all over the place  And the image could then be enlarged
  • 4. Strengths  Clean and neat  Focus on the boys  Put on set places - more special  Description  A few pictures with a few texts Weaknesses  A little bit too wordy  Too much description
  • 5.  Less articles  Slightly shorter description
  • 6. Strengths  Keeping the black and white theme  Matches studio lighting - professional  Images are cut, framed and positioned - not just square pictures as usual  Attractive use of colour Weaknesses  Two pages look too different - unlinked
  • 7. Could be a large photograph going across both page - Show connection - Look less isolated and different from each other which are about the same context