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(1) What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?
The primary ideas of the articles are following. The first article says that there are two types of GPS Car
Navigation Systems, involves the monitor that displays a map and uses voice recognition and a text
display of the street you're on. Additionally, this article explains the way of using systems. The second
article explains that purpose of GPS systems and what are car navigation systems like GPS satellite,
calculate location and planning a trip.

(2) Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent
the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
Yes, I think the individual sections and heading the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. In first article, document of introduction is divided into two procedures. And, in each
step, explain that what to do to use GPS systems in a compressed way. In the second article, document is
divided into three sections. And in every section, explain that detail of how to use the function of GPS
systems relating to heading this document.

(3) What details are included in the articles?
Detail of the first article is following. This article explain how to use the car navigation systems GPS in
two section. The first section explains how to select the destination in nine steps. The second section
explains how to select route by point of interest in four steps.
Detail of second article is following. This article explains how to do car navigation system work. In this
article, there are four sections. The first section explains that car navigation basics, second section is GPS
satellite, third section is calculate location and fourth section is planning a trip.

(4) Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
There are three confusing points in the articles. The first point is that document was difficult to
understand because there is not photography rerated to document in the article. The second point is that
we do not know whether the work is correct because do not write about result of this works. The third
point is that there are some technical terms which do not understand because there is not gloss in the
articles.

(5) What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
There are two good points about writing. The first point is that the document divided into two sections,
and another thing, this section divided into small steps. By doing so, the document became to be easy to
understand and we can work very efficiently. The second point is that explain the outline of the car
navigation systems GPS before explain the step of working. Therefore, we can know that what we should
to do.

(6) Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
There are no errors that need to be corrected.
(7) What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?
I have three suggestions for improve the articles. The first suggestion is that use the photography related
to the document in every section. By doing so, contents of article become to be easily to understand than
one which does not use the photography. The second suggestion is that glossed the technical term.
Glossing is very convenience when there are difficult words. The third suggestion is that write that when
happened error. By doing so, we can react calmly when error happened.

(8) Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and
how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
There are three different points in during our document and this one. The first point is that we use the
photography relate to contents of document. The document becomes to be easy to understand by using
the photography in every step. The second point is that we write that when error happened. If do not write
it, we are confused when error happened. The third different point is that we write the example of
execution. By doing so, we work for more certain.

(9) Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.
・Ben show we how to track a cell phone using GPS.
・There are a couple of different ways to do this and all of them source from a couple of different things.
・The hardware inside the phone is enabled for GPS location and the second being whether or not your
service provider allows GPS location.
・Sprint Nextel has a service package on their monthly data plan.
・Family Locater is service that you can check someone is where.
・Family Locater doesn't continuously update.
・You could also locate the phone and see where it is.
・You have to hit a button every time you want to change the location, see if that phone has moved.
・It's better if you have lost your phone or if you think you have misplaced it.
・The best bet would be to use something like The Family Locator product that Sprint has available.

(10) Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.
・How to Find Current Location on an iPhone.
・Rocosz shows we how to find exactly where you are right now with the GPS and map feature on your
iphone or iphone 3G.
・We can see I've already got the map set up over here.
・To find out where you are currently you want to hit this little button right here, kind of like a target and
once you do that whoop, there we are.
・When we find where you are, it has small margin of error.
・Range of error is a quarter of a mile.
・There are map feature and we can zoom in a little bit closer.
・There are any handy feature.
・We can display the map of destination.
・Wherever we are, someone can know we are here.

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R ex5

  • 1. Ex#5 (1) What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? The primary ideas of the articles are following. The first article says that there are two types of GPS Car Navigation Systems, involves the monitor that displays a map and uses voice recognition and a text display of the street you're on. Additionally, this article explains the way of using systems. The second article explains that purpose of GPS systems and what are car navigation systems like GPS satellite, calculate location and planning a trip. (2) Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I think the individual sections and heading the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. In first article, document of introduction is divided into two procedures. And, in each step, explain that what to do to use GPS systems in a compressed way. In the second article, document is divided into three sections. And in every section, explain that detail of how to use the function of GPS systems relating to heading this document. (3) What details are included in the articles? Detail of the first article is following. This article explain how to use the car navigation systems GPS in two section. The first section explains how to select the destination in nine steps. The second section explains how to select route by point of interest in four steps. Detail of second article is following. This article explains how to do car navigation system work. In this article, there are four sections. The first section explains that car navigation basics, second section is GPS satellite, third section is calculate location and fourth section is planning a trip. (4) Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? There are three confusing points in the articles. The first point is that document was difficult to understand because there is not photography rerated to document in the article. The second point is that we do not know whether the work is correct because do not write about result of this works. The third point is that there are some technical terms which do not understand because there is not gloss in the articles. (5) What is good about the writing? Why is it good? There are two good points about writing. The first point is that the document divided into two sections, and another thing, this section divided into small steps. By doing so, the document became to be easy to understand and we can work very efficiently. The second point is that explain the outline of the car navigation systems GPS before explain the step of working. Therefore, we can know that what we should to do. (6) Are there any errors that need to be corrected? There are no errors that need to be corrected.
  • 2. (7) What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? I have three suggestions for improve the articles. The first suggestion is that use the photography related to the document in every section. By doing so, contents of article become to be easily to understand than one which does not use the photography. The second suggestion is that glossed the technical term. Glossing is very convenience when there are difficult words. The third suggestion is that write that when happened error. By doing so, we can react calmly when error happened. (8) Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). There are three different points in during our document and this one. The first point is that we use the photography relate to contents of document. The document becomes to be easy to understand by using the photography in every step. The second point is that we write that when error happened. If do not write it, we are confused when error happened. The third different point is that we write the example of execution. By doing so, we work for more certain. (9) Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. ・Ben show we how to track a cell phone using GPS. ・There are a couple of different ways to do this and all of them source from a couple of different things. ・The hardware inside the phone is enabled for GPS location and the second being whether or not your service provider allows GPS location. ・Sprint Nextel has a service package on their monthly data plan. ・Family Locater is service that you can check someone is where. ・Family Locater doesn't continuously update. ・You could also locate the phone and see where it is. ・You have to hit a button every time you want to change the location, see if that phone has moved. ・It's better if you have lost your phone or if you think you have misplaced it. ・The best bet would be to use something like The Family Locator product that Sprint has available. (10) Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. ・How to Find Current Location on an iPhone. ・Rocosz shows we how to find exactly where you are right now with the GPS and map feature on your iphone or iphone 3G. ・We can see I've already got the map set up over here. ・To find out where you are currently you want to hit this little button right here, kind of like a target and once you do that whoop, there we are. ・When we find where you are, it has small margin of error. ・Range of error is a quarter of a mile. ・There are map feature and we can zoom in a little bit closer. ・There are any handy feature. ・We can display the map of destination. ・Wherever we are, someone can know we are here.