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Opening Script

Bold RED patterns the sky as the sun rises through township SMOG.

Ha-di-da's (African laughing birds) fly through.

SHEAVES of NEWSPAPER catch an updraft and gust against the sunrise: coming together
and blowing apart.

PANNING lower we find SYMMETRICAL HOUSES placed close together.

AND LOWER STILL...

To the STREET below where CHILDREN in crisp uniforms leave for school. WOMEN of all
ages head off to work. MINIVANS career fast and trails of dust plume through the scene.

A POSTMAN cycles along the road. We are on:

EXT. TSAKANE TOWNSHIP/ROAD – DAY

THREE TATTY TOWNSHIP DOGS chase after the postman's bike barking.

INT. SANDRA'S HOUSE - DAY

SANDRA LAING is at the stove, cooking pap (porridge). She is a light skinned, beautiful black
woman in her mid thirties.

Morning sun casts a shaft of amber light across the wall catching a shelf of FRUIT
PRESERVES.

                                          SANDRA
                                      Come on, everyone.

TRACKING through the house we see JOHANNES, Sandra's husband, sitting on the couch
polishing his shoes fast.

Onwards through a small doorway into:

A TINY ROOM

Where STEVE and ANTHONY are rousing themselves from slumber.

Anthony is a handsome boy of eleven. Steve is seven.

                                             STEVE
                                        But, it's holidays.

                                       SANDRA (V/O)
                                Come on, come on, pap's hot.
                             The boys tumble out of bed groaning.


CUT TO:

PAP slapping onto plates with tomato gravy. REVEAL a tiny table in a small corner. Family
chaos as everyone sits down to eat.
SANDRA (to Anthony)
              I want that report this morning, okay? I know you brought it home.

Anthony drags himself away from the table, he's going to be in trouble. Sandra picks up
Steve's report and looks at it again, full of pride.

                                      SANDRA (cont'd)
                              English went from B to A. Four A's.

Steve beams. Anthony returns, places his report in front of Sandra.

                                SANDRA (cont'd) (scrutinizing)
                                        Five D's!

                                          ANTHONY
                                    Ja, but there's also a C.

                                           SANDRA
                                         For woodwork!

                                          (to Johannes)
                            That's it! He's going into a white school.

                                          JOHANNES
                                         No, it's too far.

                                           ANTHONY
                                 I want to go to a white school!

We HEAR a BELL from the street outside as:

EXT. TOWNSHIP STREET – DAY
The postman draws up at Sandra's house. From the street it looks small, but it is neat and
bordered by lawn making it a patch of bright green in this otherwise dusty landscape.

The postman wheels his bike up to the house. The neighbors

DOGS bark, straining at their chains.

INT. SANDRA'S HOUSE - DAY

Sandra stands in the doorway.
                                           POSTMAN
                                   Lots of bills today, Sandra!

                                            SANDRA
                                      Ja, and what's new?
He puts a pile in her hand. Sandra rifles through. In between the bills is a letter. Turning back
into the kitchen she stares at the envelope. The hand holding the letter begins to shake.
Sandra is immobilized.


                                    JOHANNES (concerned)
                                      What is it, Sandra?
SANDRA (still in shock)
                                    A letter from my mother.

Both look at each other. Sandra gives him the letter. She cannot open it. Johannes reads it,
then looks up. She sees it is bad news.

                                   JOHANNES (very gently)
                                      Your father died.

Sandra covers her mouth with her hands. Anthony picks up the letter and reads it.

                                           ANTHONY
 `Don't try and contact us. Let the past remain with the past. Please God all is well with you.
                                       Your Ma. Sannie.'
A dull silence in the room.
                                            STEVE
                                 What are you going to do, Ma?

                               SANDRA (suddenly determined)
                                  I must try and find her.

                                       JOHANNES (softly)
                     Sandra... listen to what it says. The past is the past...

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Openingscript

  • 1. Opening Script Bold RED patterns the sky as the sun rises through township SMOG. Ha-di-da's (African laughing birds) fly through. SHEAVES of NEWSPAPER catch an updraft and gust against the sunrise: coming together and blowing apart. PANNING lower we find SYMMETRICAL HOUSES placed close together. AND LOWER STILL... To the STREET below where CHILDREN in crisp uniforms leave for school. WOMEN of all ages head off to work. MINIVANS career fast and trails of dust plume through the scene. A POSTMAN cycles along the road. We are on: EXT. TSAKANE TOWNSHIP/ROAD – DAY THREE TATTY TOWNSHIP DOGS chase after the postman's bike barking. INT. SANDRA'S HOUSE - DAY SANDRA LAING is at the stove, cooking pap (porridge). She is a light skinned, beautiful black woman in her mid thirties. Morning sun casts a shaft of amber light across the wall catching a shelf of FRUIT PRESERVES. SANDRA Come on, everyone. TRACKING through the house we see JOHANNES, Sandra's husband, sitting on the couch polishing his shoes fast. Onwards through a small doorway into: A TINY ROOM Where STEVE and ANTHONY are rousing themselves from slumber. Anthony is a handsome boy of eleven. Steve is seven. STEVE But, it's holidays. SANDRA (V/O) Come on, come on, pap's hot. The boys tumble out of bed groaning. CUT TO: PAP slapping onto plates with tomato gravy. REVEAL a tiny table in a small corner. Family chaos as everyone sits down to eat.
  • 2. SANDRA (to Anthony) I want that report this morning, okay? I know you brought it home. Anthony drags himself away from the table, he's going to be in trouble. Sandra picks up Steve's report and looks at it again, full of pride. SANDRA (cont'd) English went from B to A. Four A's. Steve beams. Anthony returns, places his report in front of Sandra. SANDRA (cont'd) (scrutinizing) Five D's! ANTHONY Ja, but there's also a C. SANDRA For woodwork! (to Johannes) That's it! He's going into a white school. JOHANNES No, it's too far. ANTHONY I want to go to a white school! We HEAR a BELL from the street outside as: EXT. TOWNSHIP STREET – DAY The postman draws up at Sandra's house. From the street it looks small, but it is neat and bordered by lawn making it a patch of bright green in this otherwise dusty landscape. The postman wheels his bike up to the house. The neighbors DOGS bark, straining at their chains. INT. SANDRA'S HOUSE - DAY Sandra stands in the doorway. POSTMAN Lots of bills today, Sandra! SANDRA Ja, and what's new? He puts a pile in her hand. Sandra rifles through. In between the bills is a letter. Turning back into the kitchen she stares at the envelope. The hand holding the letter begins to shake. Sandra is immobilized. JOHANNES (concerned) What is it, Sandra?
  • 3. SANDRA (still in shock) A letter from my mother. Both look at each other. Sandra gives him the letter. She cannot open it. Johannes reads it, then looks up. She sees it is bad news. JOHANNES (very gently) Your father died. Sandra covers her mouth with her hands. Anthony picks up the letter and reads it. ANTHONY `Don't try and contact us. Let the past remain with the past. Please God all is well with you. Your Ma. Sannie.' A dull silence in the room. STEVE What are you going to do, Ma? SANDRA (suddenly determined) I must try and find her. JOHANNES (softly) Sandra... listen to what it says. The past is the past...