The document summarizes audience feedback received on a film project. Positive feedback included the effective use of black and white editing to convey meaning, the parallel narrative shown through clips during a phone call, and editing colors in scenes to set mood. Areas for improvement were adding punctuation to title cards, including more diegetic sounds to enhance realism, and potentially changing the song after a car crash scene to lift the mood.

1. Q3
What have you learnt from
audience feedback?
By Dean Smith
Candidate num:4823

2. Positive feedback
• Good use of black and white editing to create
meaning.
• They also liked the idea of me having a parallel
narrative, e.g. when the police officer is on the
phone to women little video clips of how it
happened is on the full screen and the voice of
the police man is in the background.

3. Positive feedback
• They also like it when the drug deal was
happening and I was walking down the alley
speeded up and then it went into slow motion
as we was exchanging drugs.

4. Positive feedback
• Also they loved the editing on the colours in
the clips, e.g. I changed the colour of the alley
way I dulled each colour to give it dull place
which give a meaning to the scene.

5. Thing to be improved
• No punctuation for example (?!”) in my title
cards
• More diegetic sound, when I get punched and
when ash shuts the door of the car just
creates realism

6. Things to be improved
• Finally someone also suggested that I should
change the song half way through to
something much more up beat after the car
crash.
• I think this is a good idea however it would
mean a lot of time spent on it to first find a
song that fits then to move everything around
the beat.