1. H O W T O W R I T E A
M A N U S C R I P T
A S S O C . P R O F . D R . H A S A N A I N F A I S A L G H A Z I
M . B . C H . B , M . S C . , I P F P H , P H D
P U B L I C H E A L T H M E D I C I N E S P E C I A L I S T
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2. TYPES OF SCIENTIFIC PAPERS
Research papers (original research)
• The typical paper
• Propose new concepts, problems, approaches to known problems,
algorithms, devices, experiments.
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4. Case Description Papers
• Common in areas such as medicine
• Authors describe a number of clinical cases and the followed
approaches
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5. • Manuscripts are to be typed double-spaced.
• A manuscript should not exceed 3000 words
(20 textual pages) in length.
• Font: Times New Roman- Size 12
• COMMON INSTRUCTIONS
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6. MANUSCRIPT DESIGN
• Most journals follow the following design:
IMRAD Format
• Introduction
• Methods
• Results
• And
• Discussion
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TITLE
(Should be less than 20 words and contain the 3W (What, Who, Where)
Author Names and Affiliations
ABSTRACT (less than 250 words)
•Introduction / Background (Must contain aim or objective of the study)
•Methods
•Results
•Conclusion
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KEYWORDS
a list of 3−5 key words is to be provided directly below the abstract. key words
should express the precise content of the manuscript, as they are used for
indexing purposes.
INTRODUCTION
• Maximum 3-4 paragraphs
• 100-200 words to introduce your topic
• 500-1000 words of literature review
• Last paragraph should be the aim of the study (general objective)
METHODS
200-400 words
• Describe study population and location
• Study design & Sampling methods
• List of questionnaires used and from where adopted?
• Any pretest done? Validation?
• State ethics approval from which institute
• Did all participants sign the consent form?
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RESULTS
• 500 – 1000 words
• No need to explain each table in detail, only headlines
• First paragraph describes the characteristics of the sample
DISCUSSION
• Maximum 3-4 paragraphs
• 500-1000 words
• 1ST
paragraph the study main findings
• 2ND
paragraph: the study limitations
• 3RD and 4th paragraph: compare your results with previous studies
CONCLUSION
• 200 words
• 1 paragraph
• Maximum 3-4 sentences
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ACKNOWLEDGMENT
• 1 or 2 sentences
COMPETING OF INTEREST
• Authors need to declare if they have any competing of interest
REFERENCES
• Depend on each journal style
TABLES
• Maximum of 4-5 tables
• Title of each table must be self-explanatory
• Include confidence interval and p value where possible
• Table should not be large (maximum 6 columns and 12 rows)
• Table 1: Socio-demographic characteristics
• Table 2: Dependent variable (outcome)
• Table 3: Association table (Socio-demographic and dependent)
• Table 4: Association table (other factors and dependent)
• Table 5: Multivariable table
12. • Key findings should be placed in key
sections
vAbstract
vIntroduction
vConclusions
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13. HOW TO START
• Start with methods.
• Then tables and figures.
• Then results section.
• Write introduction.
• Write discussion.
• State keywords.
• Last things to write is abstract .
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14. TITLE
• Usually Journals will ask for 2 titles
• The full title and short running title
• Tips for good title:
• Used attractive words , put place of study and some journals will ask
to put study design in the title, like cross-sectional study.
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15. • Use the minimum number of words that adequately
summarize the content of the paper
• Avoid titles with more than 20 words
• Sometimes the title may contain the conclusion of the
paper
• Rewrite the title in the final version of the paper
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16. • Don’t use acronyms and abbreviations in the title
• Avoid waste words (studies on, investigations on,
a, an, the, etc)
• Review the title again and again
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17. ABSTRACT
• The most important part of the Manuscript
• Most of the time when you send paper to a journal, the Editor-In-Chief
will read the abstract to see if you paper can be send to external
reviewer.
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18. Abstract
• An abstract is to be provided, preferably no longer than 250
words.
• Keywords: a list of 4−5 key words is to be provided directly
below the abstract. key words should express the precise
content of the manuscript, as they are used for indexing
purposes.
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19. • The abstract is often the most important part of the paper
• Most readers only read that
• Readers use the abstract to decide weather or not to read and
cite the paper
• May be reproduced in publications that list abstracts
• The abstract is not an introduction to the paper
• It is a brief summary of each of the main IMRAD sections
of the paper
• Brief description of the whole paper, so that diagonal
readers understand it without reading the other parts of the
manuscript.
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20. • Avoid the classical “In this paper” starting
• Avoid bibliographical references in the abstract
• Avoid acronyms. If they must be used, their
definition should be repeated in the main text
• In general, write the abstract in one paragraph
• Tense: past or present tense may be used
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22. TIPS TO WRITE GOOD ABSTARCT
1. Write the abstract after you finish writing your paper
2. Choose main points from your introduction and
conclusion
3. Pick out key points from the methods section
4. Pick out the major findings from results section
5. Add a sentence or two as a conclusion
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23. 6. Now write a paragraph of all points chosen in steps 1 to 5
7. Don’t add any new information or undefined abbreviations
8. Do not add any references in the abstract
9. Link your sentences so that the information flows clearly
10. Check if points presented in your paper and abstract are consistent
11. Ask your colleague to review your abstract
12. Check if your abstract meet journal format
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25. KEYWORDS
• You must choose 3-5 keywords.
• These will decide whether your paper will be cited in the future or not.
• When academic researcher search for papers in online engines they will
enter keywords so if you put the right one your paper will appear to them
and they will cite your work .
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26. • Select a number of words or terms that characterize the main domains
to which the paper pertains Some of the keywords should be present in
the title
• Use the same keywords that you use to find a paper
• similar to yours in a web browser
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27. INTRODUCTION
• maximum 3-4 paragraphs
• 100-200 words to introduce your topic
• 500-1000 words of literature review
• Last paragraph should be the aim of the study (general objective)
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29. • Clearly state the importance of the paper to the
development of the field
• What are your contributions to the development of the
field?
• What’s new in your work?
• What current limitations does your work overtakes?
[Indirectly state why you think your paper deserves to
be published]
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30. What? (brief)
• Problem statement and main purpose
• Describe the problem you address in the paper
• As in the abstract, use the first sentence for that
purpose
• Only then give background information
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31. Why?
• Motivation and scope
• Why do you address that problem? Why is it relevant to
the field?
• What applications does this research problem have?
• What’s the scientific, social, economic, cultural, etc.
impact of addressing this problem?
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32. Meaningful and critical literature review
• How is the problem currently being addressed?
• Most relevant works / exhaustive review
• What limitations do you see in current approaches?
• Sometimes in a sub-section (Literature Review or
Related Work)
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33. What? (more detailed)
• Objectives
• Summarize the main and secondary objectives of
the paper.
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38. How?
• Provide full details: don’t leave “blanks” in the description of your
method
• It is useful if someone unfamiliar with your work reads it
• Make your paper as self-contained as possible (depending on the
space you have)
• Structure this section: use sub-sections according to the different
components of your method
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39. • Describe study population and location
• Study design
• List of questionnaires used and from where
adopted?
• Any pre test done? Validation?
• Sampling methods
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40. • State ethics approval from which institute
• Did all participants signed the consent form?
• Statistics
• What test you used and type of your study variables
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47. RESULTS
• NO NEED TO EXPLIN EACH TABLE IN DETAILS ONLY
HEADLINES
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48. 500-1000 WORDS
• First paragraph describe the characteristics of the sample
• Response rate
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49. TABLES
• Maximum of 4-5 tables
• Title of each table must be self explanatory
• Table should not be large (maximum 6 columns and 12
rows)
• Include confidence interval and p value where possible
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50. • Table 1 : Socio-demographic characteristics
• Table 2: Dependent variable (outcome)
• Table 3: Association table (Socio-demographic and dependent)
• Table 4: Association table (other factors and dependent)
• Table 5: Multivariable table
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51. WHEN REFERRING TO DATA
• As detailed in / from Fig. 1...
• X can be identified / is evident from Table 2.
• In Fig. 9, we compare / present…
• We observe / conclude / deduce from Fig. 8a that…
• Data in Fig. 10 indicate / illustrate / reveal / show…
• small volume changes are reported in Fig. 6
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55. DISCUSSION
• MAXIMUM 3-4 PARAGRAPHS
• 500-1000 words
• 1ST paragraph the study main findings
• 2ND paragraph: the study limitations
• 3RD and 4th paragraph: compare your results with previous studies
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56. • Evaluate the data and discuss their implications
• Focus on the key findings
• Justify any assumptions you make (not already discussed in full in
the methods/results sections)
• The narrative should refer back to the introduction
• Consider and discuss alternative explanations
• Mention any limitations to the work
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57. • How does your work fit in with previous work?
• Agreement with other studies
• Contradictions/surprises —why?
• What do contradictions / surprises tell us?
• What does your paper add?
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58. MODAL VERBS IN DISCUSSION
• Modal verbs are important in the discussion
section
• The most commonly used modal verbs in
science writing are
• may, might, could, can, should, ought to,
need to, have to, must
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62. CONCLUSION
• 200 words
• 1 paragraph
• Maximum 3-4 sentences
Goals
• Summarize your contributions to the field
• Propose possibilities of future work
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63. “The conclusion section is very easy to
write: all you have to do is to take your
abstract and change the tense from
present to past.” [Schulman, 1996]
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64. TIPS FOR SUMMARIZING
• Consider including your own perspective
• Do not be afraid to write a short conclusion —less is more
• Assume readers have either read the paper or know from the
title/abstract what it’s about
• only if necessary, add a brief summary of the key finding.
• Not more than one or two sentences.
• Without hype or undue speculation, discuss the impact of your results
and what this adds to the body of knowledge
• What could these results lead to?
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68. REFERENCES
• Use APA STYLE (6TH EDITION)
• Maximum 10 Years (latest 2005 or 2006)
• R e f e r e n c e s should be limited to the most relevant.
• You should not cite references they have not read. abstracts should not be
used as references. references are to be cited consecutively in the text in
brackets.
• In the text (John, 2009) or (John et al., 2009)
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69. REFERENCE AT THE
END OF THE
MANUSCRIPT
• Journal Article
Smith, A. C., Jones, W. P., & Brown, B. P. (1996). Community Health Surveys. Archives of
Internal Medicine, 26(8), 201-207.
• Book
Imperato, P. J. (1983). The Administration Of A Public Health Agency. A Case Study Of The
New York City Department Of Health. New York, NY: Human Sciences Press.
• Article or Chapter in a Book
Imperato, P. J. (1983). The Administration Of A Public Health Agency. A Case Study Of The
New York City Department Of Health (Pp. 26-62). New York, NY: Human Sciences Press.
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71. GENERAL RULES
• Introduction max 5 paragraph
• Max 10 references in introduction
• Last paragraph is research question
• In discussion not more than 2 references for each factors
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