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1. Furthermore he is also an example of superation. He has had very
difficult injuries in the knee but he has taken with a positive attitude.
Furthermore he is also an example of self-improvement. He has had very
difficult injuries in the knee but he has taken / overcome them with a
positive attitude.
This examples are for obvious reasons how the technology affects to
interaction between human beings, international business and to global
information.
These examples are, for obvious reasons, about how technology affects
(the) interaction between human beings, international business and
global information.
This have change the way we understand the world in a unreverse way.
This has changed the way we understand the world in an irreversible
way.
If I need to use my bank account, to check the availability of a book in a
library, or to buy in a supermarket, I will always use my mobile phone.
Whether I need to use my bank account, check the availability of a book
in a library, or shop in a supermarket, I will always use my mobile phone.
Federica is ambitious, self-confident and with good mood
Federica is ambitious, self-confident and with good-humored
I realized what an impact to our lives these last decades of technological
improvements have been.
I realized what an impact these last decades of technological
improvements have had on our lives
For this reason, one of the reasons why people like your magazine is
because it’s really difficult to find a magazine that the people could show
their own opinion
One of the reasons why people like your magazine is because it’s really
difficult to find a publication where / in which people can show their own
opinion
It means that you can share information you have or you get with all
people you want. The result is that we are part of a connected world
which links are based on new technology that is up-and-coming in this
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2. It means that you can share information you have or get with whoever
you want. As a result we are part of a connected world whose links are
based on new technology that is up-and-coming in this 21st
century.
There are a big variety of articles that the people could enjoy themselves
There is a big variety of articles that people could enjoy.
Why am I doing this? Is the constant need of connection affecting my
life? And if so, is it for good or for bad?
Why am I doing this? Is the constant need for connection affecting my
life? And if so, is it for good or for bad / for good or for ill / for better or
for worse?
We have to be thankful due to the technology and its advances in
medicine as an example. Nowadays, some mortal illness have a cure or
have appear medicines which helps to prevent these desease like
pancreatic cancer.
We have to be thankful to technology and its advances for example in
medicine. Nowadays / these days, some mortal illnesses have a cure or
some drugs have appeared which help to prevent diseases like pancreatic
cancer.
The high grows of vegetables will help to rise quantity of oxygen in earth.
It will also produce animals have more access to their food.
The increased production of vegetables will help raise the quantity of
oxygen on earth. It will also improve the animals’ access to food.
Synonyms for: to cause:
To prompt / to trigger / to unleash / to spark
The future is on technology because it will bring us solutions for our lives,
the comfort and a better way of living is what technology guarantee us.
The future lies in technology because it will bring us solutions for our
lives, comfort and a better way of living is what technology guarantees
us.
During the civil war he was joined in a left party called “izquierda
republicana”
During the civil war he joined a left-wing / left-leaning party called
“izquierda republicana”
I’m interesting in present one person I think is one of the most important
in our history

3. I’m interested in presenting someone who, in my humble opinion, is one
of the most important characters in our history.
How he says is very important take in considered pupils like an habitant
for the present not only for the future.
As he says, it is very important to consider pupils as inhabitants of the
present and not only of the future.
You should know his story. I’m sure you’ll be ashamed for how education
can change with respect, creative and passion.
You should know his story. I’m sure you’ll be amazed (by) how education
can change with respect, creativity and passion.
While I was surfing on the websites, I accept the cookies politics of the
website without giving my permission and 3 days later I received a
calling from a wine company that offer me selling their wines directly
without any dealer
While I was surfing on / browsing the websites, I unwittingly /
unconsciously accepted the cookie(s) policy of the website and 3 days
later I received a phone-call from a wine company that offered to sell me
their wines directly without any dealer / middleman / intermediary