The document introduces a four paragraph (4Ps) structure for writing short stories in English: Introduction, Content, Summary, and Closure. It provides templates and examples for writing both "good" and "bad" stories using the 4Ps structure with characters like Ali and Siti. Key points include establishing the main character in paragraph 1 and then describing events in paragraph 2 before concluding with a summary of lessons learned and a closing moral.
1. Section C Note Expansion Technique
via 4Ps “InConSumClo” Concept
Introducing four basic paragraphs in
constructing a story for Section C in
English Language
Created by:
Jen Renita binti Mappah
3. P1: Introduction – Good Story
This is a story about a boy named Ali. He
is a good boy. He is also a nice and kind person.
He loves to help other people too. He is a person
who is greatly liked just as an apple of the eye.
This is a story about a girl named Siti. She
is a good girl. She is also a nice and kind person.
She loves to help other people too. She is a
person who is greatly liked just as an apple of
the eye.
4. P1: Introduction – Bad Story
This is a story about a boy named Ali. He
is a bad boy. He is also a mean and unkind
person. He does not love to help other people
too. He is a person who is greatly hated just as
a rotten apple.
This is a story about a girl named Siti. She
is a bad girl. She is also a mean and unkind
person. She does not love to help other people
too. She is a person who is greatly hated just as
a rotten apple.
8. P3: Summary – Good/Bad Story
We learned that, “Habit is a second nature”.
When we make a habit of doing something good, it
becomes part of our character. Besides, “One
good turn deserves another”. Any help or good
deed should always be repaid.
We learned that, “Habit is a second nature”.
When we make a habit of doing something bad, it
becomes part of our character. Besides,
“Prevention is better than cure”. It is better to
prevent something bad from happening, than to
let it happen then try to solve it.
10. P4: Closure – Good/Bad Story
The moral of the story is, we
should always follow the good
behaviour or example shown because it
is a good deed.
The moral of the story is, we
should not always follow the bad
behaviour or example shown because it
is not a good deed.
11. Example of Template – Good Story
This is a story about a boy
named Ali. He is a good boy. He
is also a nice and kind person. He
loves to help other people too.
He is a person who is greatly
liked just as an apple of the eye.
One day/Last weekend, ______________
Then, After that, ____________________
At last, ____________________________
12. Example of Template – Good Story
We learned that, “Habit is a second
nature”. When we make a habit of doing
something good, it becomes part of our
character. Besides, “One good turn deserves
another”. Any help or good deed should always
be repaid.
The moral of the story is, we
should always follow the good
behaviour or example shown because
it is a good deed.
13. Example of Template – Bad Story
This is a story about a girl
named Siti. She is a bad girl. She is
also a mean and unkind person. She
does not love to help other people
too. She is a person who is greatly
hated just as a rotten apple.
One day/Last weekend, ______________
Then, After that, ____________________
At last, ____________________________
14. Example of Template – Bad Story
We learned that, “Habit is a second
nature”. When we make a habit of doing
something bad, it becomes part of our
character. Besides, “Prevention is better than
cure”. It is better to prevent something bad
from happening, than to let it happen then try
to solve it.
The moral of the story is, we
should not always follow the bad
behaviour or example shown because
it is not a good deed.
15. C1: Good Story
Main character: Boy
This is a story about a boy named Adrian. He is a
good boy. He is also a nice and kind person. He loves to
help other people too. He is a person who is greatly
liked just as an apple of the eye.
Adrian is a hard-working boy too. He always listen
carefully to every lessons taught by his teachers.
Besides, he is a helpful boy too. He likes to help to
carry books to the staffroom. Other than that, he is
a pleasant boy too. He always obey the school rules.
He is also a friendly and polite person. Then, he
always guide his friends in doing revision after school.
His friends are very happy because of his good
attitudes.
16. C1: Good Story
Main character: Boy
We learned that “Habit is a second nature”.
When we make a habit of doing something good, it
becomes part of our character. Besides, “One
good turn deserves another”. Any help or good
deed should always be repaid.
The moral of the story is we should always
follow the good behaviour or example shown
because it is a good deed.
17. C2: Bad Story
Main character: Boy
This is a story about a boy named Ali. He is a bad
boy. He is also a mean and unkind person. He does not
loves to help other people too. He is a person who is
greatly hated just as a rotten apple.
One day, Ali wanted to buy firecrackers. He bought
it from the illegal stall. He just ignored that played
firecrackers was dangerous. Besides, he felt that he
was just wanted to have fun. Then, while he was playing,
suddenly, the firecrackers blew out loudly. Ali’s hand
was full of blood. He screamed out in pain. Luckily, his
father was just around and quickly sent him to the
clinic. The doctor treated the wound. Ali was
regretted and promised to himself that he will not
messed-up with firecrackers anymore.
18. C31: Bad Story
Main character: Boy
We learned that “Habit is a second nature”.
When we make a habit of doing something bad, it
becomes part of our character. Besides,
“Prevention is better than cure”. It is better to
prevent something bad from happening, than to
let it happen, then try to solve it.
The moral of the story is we should not always
follow the bad behaviour or example shown
because it is not a good deed.
19. C3: Bad Story
Main character: Boy
This is a story about a boy named Aidil. He is a bad
boy. He is also a mean and unkind person. He does not
loves to help other people too. He is a person who is
greatly hated just as a rotten apple.
One day, Ali was busy at home. He was a careless
boy. One night, he was watching the television until he
slept late night. He did not prepared his things for
school. Then, while at school, he was sleepy. He could
not concentrated and suddenly fell asleep. After that,
his teacher scolded him for not paying attention. Aidil
was ashamed with his classmates. At last, he learned
his lesson. From that day, he prepared his stuff and
sleep early before the school time.
20. C1: Good Story
Main character: Boy
We learned that “Habit is a second nature”.
When we make a habit of doing something bad, it
becomes part of our character. Besides,
“Prevention is better than cure”. It is better to
prevent something bad from happening, than to
let it happen, then try to solve it.
The moral of the story is we should not always
follow the bad behaviour or example shown
because it is not a good deed.