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Website feedback after
first draft
8/10
Positive feedback…
“Colours work well together and it really looks good with the link to the album. the
image is really nice and vibrant so it draws attention to it instantly. For people
don’t know the artist or her music it may be a little hard to tell who she is as
you cant see her face so it is not very recognisable, but because of the colours
and style this contrasts this and makes it instantly recognisable.”
“I really like the transitions on the pages when moving from one to the other.”
“Store looks really good and I like the ideas for the products”
“This website is very good and looks complete, good photography and
background colours make the website look professional there are links to other
songs to make the artist look like they have made more songs and this is
good because it makes them look like they are well into the industry. The tour
dates page links to Ticketmaster which is good as it looks professional. the
gallery includes a number of good photographs however more photos would be
better.”
“ The gallery looks really good and I like that they're not all
on the same page and you have to click etc and that you
can only see 3 at a time, I really like that you can hover
over them and they go pale”
“The blue image of Soraya against the purple background contrasts well
with each other and I enjoy each transition when you flick from page
to page, whilst the writing and font is very slick and professional.”
Negative feedback…
“The products available to buy are good however maybe look back on prices
(£10 for a mug?)”
“ You could maybe change the names on the music page so that they are
ones from your album and even link the songs to them. events page the
text colours don’t really link with the theme of the website and I think there
needs to be more dates.”
“Video page looks a little bare so maybe you can add more text make the
video bigger and add more. same with the sign up maybe change it to a
contact page where its got the artists details as well like the record
companies. Store looks really good like the ideas for the products, bit pricey
for a mug though and the pillow is currently out of stock with no image
and the lanyard image is not very consistent with the others as it looks
very fake.”
“I would like to see a little bit of writing on the video's page,
explaining a little bit about the video, where the ideas came
from etc”
“The background on the news, music, events, gallery, videos,
sign up and store page doesn't fit as it looks like snow and
their video is mainly summery.”
How we can improve…
Looking at negative feedback and ways to improve we need to…
- Adjust prices so they are more appropriate for that item such as changing
the price of the mug from £10 to around £5.
- Changing the home page by removing the news page so they combine as
they both were bare and need more detail.
- Could change some merchandise, could get rid of the lanyard and could
create a hoodie instead.

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Website feedback after first draft

  • 2. Positive feedback… “Colours work well together and it really looks good with the link to the album. the image is really nice and vibrant so it draws attention to it instantly. For people don’t know the artist or her music it may be a little hard to tell who she is as you cant see her face so it is not very recognisable, but because of the colours and style this contrasts this and makes it instantly recognisable.” “I really like the transitions on the pages when moving from one to the other.” “Store looks really good and I like the ideas for the products”
  • 3. “This website is very good and looks complete, good photography and background colours make the website look professional there are links to other songs to make the artist look like they have made more songs and this is good because it makes them look like they are well into the industry. The tour dates page links to Ticketmaster which is good as it looks professional. the gallery includes a number of good photographs however more photos would be better.” “ The gallery looks really good and I like that they're not all on the same page and you have to click etc and that you can only see 3 at a time, I really like that you can hover over them and they go pale” “The blue image of Soraya against the purple background contrasts well with each other and I enjoy each transition when you flick from page to page, whilst the writing and font is very slick and professional.”
  • 4. Negative feedback… “The products available to buy are good however maybe look back on prices (£10 for a mug?)” “ You could maybe change the names on the music page so that they are ones from your album and even link the songs to them. events page the text colours don’t really link with the theme of the website and I think there needs to be more dates.” “Video page looks a little bare so maybe you can add more text make the video bigger and add more. same with the sign up maybe change it to a contact page where its got the artists details as well like the record companies. Store looks really good like the ideas for the products, bit pricey for a mug though and the pillow is currently out of stock with no image and the lanyard image is not very consistent with the others as it looks very fake.”
  • 5. “I would like to see a little bit of writing on the video's page, explaining a little bit about the video, where the ideas came from etc” “The background on the news, music, events, gallery, videos, sign up and store page doesn't fit as it looks like snow and their video is mainly summery.”
  • 6. How we can improve… Looking at negative feedback and ways to improve we need to… - Adjust prices so they are more appropriate for that item such as changing the price of the mug from £10 to around £5. - Changing the home page by removing the news page so they combine as they both were bare and need more detail. - Could change some merchandise, could get rid of the lanyard and could create a hoodie instead.