The document contains several examples of authentic materials that were used for data collection in an Intensive English program, including:
1. A penpal letter from an Intensive English student.
2. Sentences from irregular verb homework and tests given to the regular and intensive groups.
3. Short texts written by Intensive English students.
4. A short story written by an Intensive English student titled "Victoria is Dead!".
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Victoria is Dead !
Once upon a time there was a girl. Her name was
Victoria Garlin. She lived in Golight village. She had long
blond hair with a broken beige dress. She had a cute
monkey. He was brown and black. It was named Packo.
Her job was a cleaning lady in a haunted palace. It was
haunted because the family got killed by a weird animal.
She finished her job and she went to her house.
Suddenly, Victoria forgot her key at the haunted palace.
Now she was stuck outside. It was raining hard and it was
lightning. And her umbrella was in her house. After one
hour the lightning was stronger and stronger. Suddenly,
Victoria was touched by lightning. After the lightning
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touched Victoria, she felt very strange! Two hours after
Victoria changed of personality.
She was Victoria the malicious girl. Like each day, she
went to work at the haunted palace to win her life. After,
one week she noticed that Packo was very weird! That
evening Packo changed of personality. It was now a BAT.
It was black and it had long teeth. After three days
Victoria didn’t see Packo. But Packo was in the house. It
was in the corner of the ceiling!
At ten o’clock Victoria went to bed. After, one hour
and forty- five minutes, Victoria heard a sound. She went in
the kitchen and in the bathroom. She didn’t see Packo.
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Victoria went to bed. And she saw Packo eating her feet!!!
And Packo ate everyone in the Golight village!!!!!!!
The End !!!