1. Correct your Thesis Statement
• Check for COHERENCE
• Caning should not be allowed in schools
because it
- affects students’ physical
- affects students’ emotional and mental wellbeing
- fails to curb indiscipline in schools
- Caning should not be allowed in schools
because it affects students’ physical,
emotional and mental well-being and fails to
curb indiscipline in schools

2. • Caning should not be allowed in schools
because it …
• affects students’ physical
• discipline problems still occur
• students’ mental and emotional well-being
will deteriorate
*simple sentences combined = ??

3. FIRST DRAFT
• Thesis statement + body paragraphs
• Arial 11, spacing 1.5
• 2x ‘enter’ to begin new paragraph
• NO need cover page
• Mind your Grammar
• Deadline: NEXT WEEK, 2nd Lecture.

6. CAUSES?
http://www.thestar.com.my/News/Nation/2013/12/28/No-handphone-for-you-if-you-are-not-ma

7. EFFECTS?

9. CAUSE – EFFECT ESSAY
• Block Pattern 1
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• Block Pattern 5

16. http://www.thestar.com.my/News/Nation/2013/10/18/Safe-place-forunwanted-babies-Hatches-provide-lifeline-for-unwed-mothers.aspx

17. Surah 36. Ya Seen, Verse 62:
And he had already led astray from among you
much of creation, so did you not use reason?
“Dan sesungguhnya Syaitan itu telah menyesatkan
golongan yang ramai di antara kamu; (setelah
kamu mengetahui akibat mereka) maka
tidakkah sepatutnya kamu berfikir dan insaf?
http://tafsirsunnah.wordpress.com/2012/01/09/tafsir-yasin-ayat-59-74/